lmao at h20's vers god u gotta cum like a true vet 2 win
One Key
h2o
lmao at h20's vers god u gotta cum like a true vet 2 win
Aight, check it...
These bullshit MC's wanted to try out a battle with h2o and me
But there's no tellin' when I blow niggas up, I'm a spontaneous MC
Noddin’ these kids off with no respect, no sweat running down my neck
I’ll regret and check, how I turned them into the newest MC's on the Net
I’m gaspin’ and laughin’ at ur verses, cause I’ma stay to this game rappin’
These wack MC's are more popped than 2 whole fucking bottles of Asprin’
Ya'll must be scared if we can make ya nervous enough to spit like this
Tight West and Monekey are pussy, one already has pants that smell like piss
Ya'll probably rose up in RapBattles by livin' off of dickriders like mc aines
Once h20 and God are done with ya'll, u'll be the first two "Human Stains"
I know you ain't in IJL, you musta created, ur own crew, stupid shit
One West, it's obvious that ur shit stands for "I Jack-Off Lyricists"
Me and h2o are no doubt cruisin' along this battle, rackin' votes
Next time u battle these real MC's, get that garbage out ur throats.
Later
Sorry if I'm late... this fuckin' laptop yo... It's mad hard to type. Anyway, here's my verse, drop some votes please. Uppin #1
Just because I mentioned you, mc aines, doesn't give you the right to hate. I respect if u vote for them, but don't hate. Me and you could duke it out the real way if ya wanna. Vote on the battles in my sig, people. Oh, and please give rankings, like:
1st place:
2nd place:
3rd place:
4th place:
Thanks
Later
Uppin #2... We got 'em to spare
Aight.. this was completely one sided
Punches- One Key & T West
Personals- One Key & T West
Originality- God & H2O
Structure- One Key & T West
Flow- Tied..(onekey and t west had better tho)
Multies- Neither
Overal vote...... One Key & T West
This battle was so ... Weak
h2o no hate.. but you need to elevate
God you did pretty good.. but not great
You were the best of your team..
But not enough to take the win..
One Key & T West got this hands down..
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Didn't see you wanted me to do rankings..
So i'll do it now..
1st place: One Key
2nd place: T West
3rd place: God (Wannabe)
Last place: h2o
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G, frankly man you need to work on your punchs. your verse sounds better than anyone else however your flow could use beeter multis and rhyme schemes and your punchs are there enough. you lack throwing anything hard and could have worked off alot more personals in you verse. Also making it so your lines are more thought out and explained would help. Like your asprin line, i mean that had the possiblity to be dope but it fell off because it didnt connect to any other lines and didnt come with enough explannation.
best bar was your opening.
h2o
the bar about "twest inters this fag with one key" heh, that was a good play off there names and an alright punch. you couldhave used more direction on your verse and strayed away from im dope gunna win type ish yea mean? i think you had some good punchs but could really use better ones/more of them that truely attack your opponent. your flow could have been improved but it was alright i suppose. some of your ish was basic but decent and compairableto your partner.
one key, i think your verse need some work. your punchs lack you didnt have that much creativity in your verse. your flow could have been done alot better, with multis and rhyme schemes. as for metaphors you lacked pretty bad. you came off to cocky and frankly your lucky twest was there. But even his ish wasnt all that really MC AINES just off his cock fuck you last bar was the best.
Twest was the only reaon they won this battle really. the waste has a negetive charge was about your best bar. your verse was decent. you had god metaphors and alrigth punchs. although nothing specilly ill it was alright. rhyme scheme was ok and could have used multis better. had the best verse over all in THIS battle.
vote-Twest and the other guy
Ok yeah i forgot peep and drop an honest vote.. get at it and ill poll vote for this battle
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116161
Yea Outcome, I Can Come Way Better But It Wasnt Clickin Today, Uppin
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Please, ya'll, vote on the battles in my sig. Thanks so much, ya'll. This is a good battle. This is a good battle, so don't sleep, and please give rankings for elevation.
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