10 line minimum
15 min blind spit
no dr hate, yall know
lets do this
10 line minimum
15 min blind spit
no dr hate, yall know
lets do this
yo this is my check in drop in 15 gd lck
ill go first, checkinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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its been 15 mins time for a merking
YAA boi has less rhythm than a drum with a broken snare
comin at me with flowery lines call him a care bear
if ur names was a hedge i already cut 3 A's outta it, ive got u right on the edge
ur rhymes out dated like MC "Hammer" u couldnt come heavy if u changed ur name to "Sledge"
my verse is a computer virus, when i send it u hit ctrl, alt, delete
didnt u save ur prewritten? too bad this bitch is now obsolete
when i speak wit heat and punchlines to meet and disfigure ur head better watch ur lip
i move feet, call it a beat down in no time like a wigger wearin "Red" (Blood) when he claimin he a "crip"
my first battle back and theres no way i could lose
unless i took my verse and handed it to u to use
ur "vocab" is bout as weak as words in a "picture book"
like ur profile theres nothin in it worth talkin about out go ahead take a look
its over, YAAA BOI u tried and got retired, its not ur fault u cant spit fire
let me wrap ur face in "telephone cord" so u can be like Kanye West and "spit thru the wire!"
ENJOY, i gotta bounce, gd lck......... LETS GET SOME VOTES
Ok time to murder this L-Town, clown
ima pay a quick visit down, while im death bound
Bitch quick frontin as a balla, or player
u think cojo is quier, man ur gayer
Yo, im tired of all these fake wanna b's
ur interests r ballin n' rappin...nigga please
Im jason man ill murder u quick
ur birthday on the 13, friday, quick hop on my dick
save ur life man ur just too young to die
u still think flyin in an airplane is gettin high
and still listenin to DSGB... and T.I.
Wack rappers need to go to school or church
like u man, u rap so slow people callin u lurch
U spit in 15 n think u som quick rappin dream
when they here u they flee from the seen
shit dirty rymes is nothin but clean, mine shyne n gleam
Ok game over, time to end this pre-k shit now
even a deaf man can here my deagle go *cock-back-coplow*
peace
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this is my first up, come on yall this was a good battle drop a link and we will return the favor.......... VOTE UPPPIN
c-lo not bad punches... i think you were going for a lot of amusement... but you came up short on the flow...
Yaa boi flowed much better... not really amazing but enough to rock you... the punches were alright nobody got crazy .... kinda like the kanye line but ima fan of a nice personal diss and i didnt feel anybody stepped up...
Yaaa needs to move on from this a-b-c structure and get complex
C just needs to work on structure period
vote = yaaa
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Hence Forward
aiight. lets get some votes in here, and MAG thats right i was goin for amusement! haha, come on yall drop a vote and leave a link UPPPIN 2
Gud battle here (not enough posts to poll ite, here's my opinion)
C Lo: Your structure was aight, nice voc. and wordplay; your flow was a little off; your punches were aight( funny shit); you had sum personals, I'd like to see more tho; Overall: 13/20
Yaaa-Boi: Gud flow with nice lines and gud voc.; your punches didn't came thru so hard I had the impression; some great personals; a gud srtucture; a couple of multis i there which were nice; It was quite original;
Overall: 14/20
I must give this to Yaaa-Boi (no hate); C Lo keep up the gud work and try to hit more personals:
v/Yaaa-Boi
good feedback guys, uppin..............................
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yaaa took this wit better punches and personals and this always takes battle wit ease if u own both categories, but good try C-Lo, u came kinda hard for a newb but elevate, flow and structure was on target, with both these kids, they both took these categories......................................Wo rdplay, Multis, and Vocabulary, well yaaa took this too, it was newbish but had better wordplay by yaaaa and multis, none, but vocaulary was to both, good drop both of you for newbs, but elevate alot then earn respect by RB, by doing that you gotta get wittier wit your punches took me a while to learn that now I am doing good at it.............but elevate but yaaaa took this.........
Vote-yaaa
Since I took time on yours yaaa drop a honest vote on my battle and c-lo drop your opinion on my battle if ya want, but yaaa I took time on yours, take time on mine, I took time on yours please drop a honest vote, here's the link VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116663
wrong link lol look at my battle wit careless in my sig, please vote (sorry for the free post) please vote since I took time on yours the link is in my sig, it's the one wit Kareless please VOTE
I think you all are fucking retards read both battles twice then realize who you voted for c_lo fucking killed this tool the kid rhymed stupid shit like T.I. and high what the fuck kind of shit is this is this site a buch of dickriden cock Smugglers.
I’ll Dismantle your entire "vertebrae" so I can really get on you "nerves"
stab you to death with a "fork" and "knife" so you know you got "served"
uhhhh...this is why noobs dont vote and it was a good sported battle...people like u bring beef between people. Fuck u
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you can suck my white cock i am no newbe you fuckin punk bitch
I’ll Dismantle your entire "vertebrae" so I can really get on you "nerves"
stab you to death with a "fork" and "knife" so you know you got "served"
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