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  1. February 29th, 2004, 08:04 AM #1
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    The Last Strike Of The Matador..(Leave A Link)

    The Last strike of the Matador..

    As the Raging Bull Stands, And Glances at its opponent..
    The Young Man Grasps, At his Sharply - Grand Component..
    Both Fuled by anger..
    In sun light, Blinding their Vision..
    The Bulls Instinct desision,is inflict a botched insision..
    The crowd roares like a lion, Urging for more atacks..
    Blood sports cause hurt,But its concerne these people lack..
    The people stand and tease,Yell obscenities through the stadium..
    As they hope to see their hero,Strike the beast with his Vanadium..
    They Reach for this mans podium,But their lifes were still at use..
    They stood firmly on the ground, the dust was gatherd on his shoes..
    The Monsterous Towering bull,made sudden changes in his stance..
    He made a run to take the life,Of he who dared stare his Glance..
    The dusty orange plain,Was kicked into the air..
    Nowhere - The bull was seen..Only the Matador cared..
    He Panicked for his life, Heard the run..Sword in his hand..
    Nothing he could doU....ntil the dusty air landed..
    The Bull had dissapeared,By now he stood - Atackin Mode..
    He turned left,ninety degrees,The Bull was ready to explode..
    By now the crowd sat down silent,Knowing - what was to come..
    The Youngsters heart beats like a drum,Urging the bull to run..
    The Beast made steps to make a dash,The crowd - Watchin with awe..
    Knowing the skillful Matadore,Would change this beast, To Be no more..
    The Monster sprinted with a pace, That no man ever would predicted..
    This sickenin moment ended quickly, With the outcome..So destinctive..
    The crowd sat silent.Sumtimes whispered, "What is the Result.?"...
    Did their hero end the battle, so they can all express exult..
    The Dust settles as they watched,The bull Lived, to their suprize..
    They saw the youngster on the floor, A pool of blood, He did not....SURVIVE..
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  2. February 29th, 2004, 11:52 AM #2
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  3. February 29th, 2004, 12:21 PM #3
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    This was real nice, I felt tha flow in this, plus tha vocab you had used, nice shit, but ur structure really blew on this... if you kept tha lines in a particular pattern, then you'da found it would rhymed a helluva lot more... no hate, this was nice...

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  4. February 29th, 2004, 12:43 PM #4
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  5. February 29th, 2004, 04:54 PM #5
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    thought you had a good level of imagery, and a good scheme... it carried the verse pretty good.... i think the best thing bout it was the topic.... never seen it done before... i thought a few lines could have had a couple of syllables out to smooth the flow, but it still was quite smooth.... decent read
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  6. February 29th, 2004, 04:57 PM #6
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  7. March 1st, 2004, 10:10 AM #7
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    Huh..Lol

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  8. March 1st, 2004, 11:55 AM #8
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    Cmon..LOL...I know 4 peeps have seen it since i last upped it....

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  9. March 1st, 2004, 02:53 PM #9
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  10. March 1st, 2004, 04:07 PM #10
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    Cool piece man .. flow worked for me .. ditch the whole Capitalising Every Other Word bullshit .. lol .. storyline was cool, ending could of been better .. i expected more of an unexpected twist in the piece but ehhh .. wasnt bad for what it was .. more multi's and internals would of helped the flow along a little .. transitions were cool and some points, off in others .. held my attention throughout it though.


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  11. March 1st, 2004, 05:53 PM #11
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  12. March 1st, 2004, 07:16 PM #12
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    This was nice man. I really was feeling the flow... and the structure wasnt to bad.. The story itself was cool. I mean it wass al entertaining end the twist at the end... gave it a real nice 'kick'. I really enjoyed this ... good work man

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  13. March 3rd, 2004, 01:54 AM #13
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