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Thread: Cyriptic Lyric Diss.... reply and ill repay

  1. #1
    vane
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    Cyriptic Lyric Diss.... reply and ill repay

    ok, i do have links, but ama just reply on two other ones, kus they bout a pae bakk now....don't close, please

    [Intro- Talk]
    Yo I was lookin’ for this crew cryptic lyric in the crew section, and it was like they so good I can’t see them....

    Step aside, ya’ll aint drunk, but ill have pipes in ye mouth like you gettin’ breathalysed.... an this’ll never slide, geek... Vane’ll smile as I stretch these faggots like a game of exercise....
    Cryptic lyrics, ya’ll need to get over yo self like lifting spirits... I swing hits as I spit with pivots, you really think you ill? Or is that some disgusting gimmick.....
    Sick with it, have an extra red dot in ye whip that aint ye fuckin’ alarm, spit at ye arm an fuckin’ disarm, want me to stay calm? Act like kids cheatin’ on tests and have ye words on my palm... (damn)
    Am targeting faggots step off, I’ll drop B2K (born 2 kill) like fuckin Epic Records... ye child’s umbilical chords gettin slashed and hit with swords.... gettin’ clapped, that aint a round of applause, bitches, most of these niggaz thinkin’ am on a period with all these men-i-pause...
    Pull out ye vital organs; I ripped through ye stomach early like premature babies... a bunch of little Shady’s, look at ye crew, B2K? ya’ll prolly gonna reply to this singin’ its all gravy...
    Lyrics please, I sonned ye fathers father’s, fuckin’ around? Vane’ll have the Magnum in ye mouth like fuckin ice cream parlours, and don’t even start us, ye not us.... destructive got a crew full-a dead partners
    Have destructive robbed... with the rest of ya’ll, poundin’ the pavement like you was lookin’ for jobs... am big headed? Nah, thas just the tip of my cock, straight turnin’ heads like a bottle of pop...
    Vane’ll have ye whole world black and white like childhood past times, shift yall like the last line (keyboard).... bandage up my pistol and start to cast iron....
    Hack his legs, tack his arms.... shove ye eyes into candy, and ya’ll can really look into what rappers are....
    I purge thee, ya’ll can never get near me, ya’ll can’t juxtapose or compare to me...smack these little kids so hard they’ll start to hit thirty... am dirty, have ya’ll attached to wings (angels) like obsessions over fuckin Detroit jersey’s ...
    Weakest text crew? Wait there, i’ll give you a link to try outs and ya’ll can apply to...
    Finish you? Nah, I couldn’t be bothered so I stopped at Y-U*... now look where yall stand
    On the other hand; I could spit at the left of ye body, and leave ya’ll with bigger side burns than Ashanti, fuck it ama end this ish... ya’ll know ye crew wants me.... (hhh shit)


    * they had a member called yu sin sumpin, he got banned

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    Destructive
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    Lmao....

  4. #4
    vane
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    lmao? im sorry was that supposed to be destructive or were you laughing at yourself... nigga you bite, biters stay the fukk outta my thread..

  5. #5
    Destructive
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    lmao... this was whack, your whack and you think i bite, lmao....

  6. #6
    vane
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    fact is you bite.... whakk people can say that, so i don't get where your going... you can keepgoing in that direction just dont move towards me.... some body delete his posts?

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    ...practice makes poetry
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    I guess this was a solid diss... a bit stretched in a few places... thought you used a whole bunch of played lines like the shit about the red dot... ummm...I think you should've come harder at the personals... cuz you will get yourself merked with this as your best stuff...

    keep working on it... i won't say it wasn't interesting... but the flow fell off too many times for me to get into it...
    Hence Forward

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    vane
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    thanxz fo the feedback loke... this wasnt my best though, i'll prolly still get my best stuff murked, but w/e, i like reading them if there good.
    thanxz fo the feedbakk

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    please stop.
    I stopped reading after the:

    Step aside, ya’ll aint drunk, but ill have pipes in ye mouth like you gettin’ breathalysed.... an this’ll never slide, geek... Vane’ll smile as I stretch these faggots like a game of exercise....

  10. #10
    vane
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    so you replied for what reason.... i never knew you had to stop when your weak... please, dont post in my threads if thats what you gon do...

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    literally fck ur own face Wise Ways's Avatar
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    Hmm..this was a very bad diss
    Maybe even worse than eki's
    You need better punches and flow
    Maybe try going to tha Help Center

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    WhatThatLookLike..?!

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    State_of_Mind
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    ^^^what the hell is the help center?


    yo this was a decent diss...like how you used history in it a lil bout the group (Y-U, liked that part yo). Flow was decent buh vocab was a lil simple...i was feelin this a lil cuz i dont wanna be part of a clique...one big suggestion is to space it out more cuz this is a lil hard to read


    >check mine out
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...900post1241900

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    Vane’ll have ye whole world black and white like childhood past times, shift yall like the last line (keyboard).... bandage up my pistol and start to cast iron....

    my fav line of dis diss...some funny stuff
    coulda used betta vocab.....flow was kinda choppy
    it was still kinda entertainin though kept me reading
    but overall it was okay

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    Vane’ll have ye whole world black and white like childhood past times, shift yall like the last line (keyboard).... bandage up my pistol and start to cast iron....

    my fav line of dis diss...some funny stuff
    coulda used betta vocab.....flow was kinda choppy
    it was still kinda entertainin though kept me reading
    but overall it was okay

    feed bak for dis post plzzz

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=118288

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