10 lines
blindspit
1 hour time limit
fail to meet limit i win
no hate or d/r votes
no feeding biting
house rules
no krew votes
no recycling
ehh. . . .ya kno. . . .
check in
dont no sho. . . .
$carface
It
10 lines
blindspit
1 hour time limit
fail to meet limit i win
no hate or d/r votes
no feeding biting
house rules
no krew votes
no recycling
ehh. . . .ya kno. . . .
check in
dont no sho. . . .
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here go my verse
imma bout to get in dis nigga like thongs... rip out his tonsils and spit wit dem//
dis is da actual factual spitta... i label u da prewritta//
u cant afford 10 lines.... cuz u aint paid yo rhyme tax//
my words scold u leavin tans like a hot bikini wax//
aint no way u gone cob me... wit dem corny ass raps//
when yo lyrics is like a junkyard... imma leave u wit da scraps//
da next victim im gone have to get rid of...quicka den OJ Simpsons glove//
yo weak ass dwells below... while the strong dwell above//
u a disgrace to da whole RB... ask any MC//
even if u had x ray vision u still wouldnt be able to see me//
$carface <like this wita money sign ya so Creative. .
i'd give u my Condolenses. . . .
but this herb is nota"gody"or a Alcapown Ledgeslative!
wouldent have alota"paublo Escabar"if coke fondaled on u
wana B godfatha Existences. . . .
Mob u then slob ya hanging guts 2 a lamp post while ya speww!
rob ya blind & send brain debree 2 ya family piece by piece
at least u nota John Doe. . . .
we'ill say u was"$carface"the most respected but now desiesed!
i feast on ya lackness & whackness...i mean every1 hates u
full of greed like comon C.E.O.'s. . . .
ya best is my worst now my curse has killed u n a hurst who knew?!
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imma bout to get in dis nigga like thongs... rip out his tonsils and spit wit dem//
dis is da actual factual spitta... i label u da prewritta//
get rid of the .. and even out ya bars...weal punch...played concepts
u cant afford 10 lines.... cuz u aint paid yo rhyme tax//
my words scold u leavin tans like a hot bikini wax//
1st line...ehh OK..second was weak
aint no way u gone cob me... wit dem corny ass raps//
when yo lyrics is like a junkyard... imma leave u wit da scraps//
1st line is filler..no punch..second is pretty weak punch
da next victim im gone have to get rid of...quicka den OJ Simpsons glove//
yo weak ass dwells below... while the strong dwell above//
they found OJs glove...weak punch...mad played
u a disgrace to da whole RB... ask any MC//
even if u had x ray vision u still wouldnt be able to see me//
filler
$carface <like this wita money sign ya so Creative. .
i'd give u my Condolenses. . . .
but this herb is nota"gody"or a Alcapown Ledgeslative!
ok punch and personal
wouldent have alota"paublo Escabar"if coke fondaled on u
wana B godfatha Existences. . . .
Mob u then slob ya hanging guts 2 a lamp post while ya speww!
jus ok..kinda stretched
rob ya blind & send brain debree 2 ya family piece by piece
at least u nota John Doe. . . .
we'ill say u was"$carface"the most respected but now desiesed!
weak...first line was filler/e-thugish
i feast on ya lackness & whackness...i mean every1 hates u
full of greed like comon C.E.O.'s. . . .
ya best is my worst now my curse has killed u n a hurst who knew?!
decent
It wins this for a verse wit better punches and personals...$carface...get rid of the // and try n even out ya bars...Cut back on the filler and try and put a punch/personal/meta in every line...also try and be morer creative and original
Vote=It
Drop an honest vote here please....thanks http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=118436
A few achievements here and there
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decent battle.
Scarface- came ok i guess. ur lines didn't connect much. ur punches were a bit wack, considering they were weak. ur flow was ok, ur structure could be fixed up. most of ur lines were played, so work on the creativity, and up your style a bit. not too good. 5/10
It- i've seen much better. looks like you went easy on this kat. your came creative. your punches were decent. had a coupld of personals in there. and your flow was good. your structure could use some work tho. your opener was prolly the best in this battle. but it seems like you just tried to get it a little better than ur opponents. nothin wrong wit that.
vote- It...more creative, better punches, and personals.
hit either of these up if you haven't done so already:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112882
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112882
1 more to close^
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=118793
^fresh battle
thanx.
peace
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My vote goes to It....had way better comebacks
but this herb is nota"gody"or a Alcapown Ledgeslative!
wouldent have alota"paublo Escabar"if coke fondaled on u
wana B godfatha Existences.
^^^^ tough line........
Scarface......homey, work on your punchlines...they kinda cheesey.
anyways, good shit from you guys
Vote=It
yo homie...very nice battle....Scarface had an ok punchline n the flow was a lil choppy but he got his point across...It had a lil better of punch lines and was more creative like aces said, but very decent battle n give props to both of yall...overall it wins cuz he had sum betta punches n creativness
vote-it
n if u got time can yall hit up this link n drop sum votes or feedback be much appreciated-->[URL=http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=118059[/URL]
Peace
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damn can yall jus hit up Beano v Southsideloco...be much appreciated
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^^^im gonna say those were ur best lines........had a played punch, but whateva........overall ur verse wasnt that good......ur structure was messed up.......ur flow fell off......u had i think one or two metas.....u attempted wordplay, but it didnt come out the way u wanted it to......ur punches were played........no personals.......Originally Posted by $carface
^^^im gonna say those r ur two best lines........had a punch, was sorta played.........had a metas......weak wordplay.....overall ur verse was ok.......had a good structure......flow fell off a lil........had some metas and wordplay that was ok.......some punches were good, some were played........ok personals.......
conclusion - thing came with a better structure, more metas, better wordplay, punches were less played and hit harder..........scarface came pretty weak......and thing topped him with more creative shit....so he gets my vote........
VOTE - THING
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