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Thread: The Empty

  1. #1
    Pie
    Guest

    The Empty

    The Empty


    Daybreak comes,but the empty is here,
    Before it appears,Thus shed a tear,
    Nothing is yet come to fill the spot,
    Tis the empty allot,It sets the plot,
    Nor the answer or the question,
    It is the reason there is regression,
    Has a confession about its depression,
    Responsibilty of the empty,carries through,
    Too hard to accrue,Tis a adieu,
    Story of the empty goes on and on,
    But it always stops at dawn,
    Emotions are carried out by the empty,
    Tis the reason without the attempting,
    Nor leader or follower,it sets the pace,
    Cannot be replaced neither aced,
    Tells the answer with straight face,
    Come to it and it will coup de grace,
    Too much history to deal with and retrace,
    At times the empty can answer the call,
    With the knowledge it will leave you enthral,
    Nightfall comes,but the empty is still here.

  2. #2
    Pie
    Guest
    C`mon lets get some feedback here.

  3. #3
    evilbombsquad
    Guest
    being a peice expressed of pure flow, im lovin this. everyline just grasped the title. also the flow was so quick the imagery really cant be broken down aka solid peice.
    stAy up n peAce.

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