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blind spit verses due by midnight t night
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M-ortal
ChriZno
10 - 12 lines
blind spit verses due by midnight t night
standard rules
checking in................................................ ......................
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aight, checking in
ill finish before midnight, ur offline, but i expect to see it by the due date
chrizno, this guy or girl, he or she - was born a crack addict//
not physically one or tha other- we'll subtract tha subject, and add-it//
"it's" infected thats 4 sure-wether a its a cunt-or-isnt one//
march 16th, has a daily routtine, currently on "blunt- 101" //
twenty-four-seven, three-sixty-five... your eyes are blood shot//
no job, no $- just tha company of your dank crack crop//
wens tha last time you left your fuckin mobil home//
smokin off all your memories- til one's left of 10 million chromosomes//
3/4's your day spent tokin - tha rest wasted on rap battles . com//
thers more elements to life, you'd rather pussy around like a human shlong//
you dont even sell your crack, you light it all up yourself//
you resembel a dealer, just as will ferral does a christmas elf//
that definately portrais more that just "a-dick-son"// ( addiction )
crack's so natural to your body system... you have a weekly stop at RIGHT AID for your nesecity of a drug-perscrption......// // //
Mortal step to me, you know you goin gainst an immortal
With a lot of prep you wont beat me, you make me chortle
Stomp you out with a roar, while I rip this mic until it shatters
Fuck your usless chatter, flip my pistol grip make your brains splatter
Sick free skillz progressing instill wit heat weapons
shit man people enve me im so ill I Out legacy The Legends
Slap ya face graffiti ways with massive sprays
Cuz this dudes more of a BUST than Harold miner on draft day
who are you? Tryna beat the best kid why you stressing
This Pussys not sick He's just contacted a yeast infection!
your chances decrease man slim 2 none
I Kill this son cuz like fat people before the marathon YOUR DONE
sorry its so late i just completely forgot about it last night and left home didint come back till this afternoon. I had it finished i just neaver got around to posting it.
alright lets get some votes please dont sleep on this people
nice verse...... truly, wers that voters...........
m-ortal has this one , only cus............
ya, betta verse,... no personals
but it flowed real nicely////
chrizno,, alround -- mediocre..///
vote: m-ortal
uppin for some real votes............................................. ....................
Both verses were good
Mortal: nice verse but what was with only talking about drugs??
kinda narrow and made yours seem les than it was. your closer and the chromosome one was really good i like em good wording and multis. solid verse but no real punches
7/10
Chrizno:you mized it up a bit more but your rhymes werent as good though close. I like your yeast infection rhyme, had me laughing
your closer was a good punch but rhymes kind simply with little complexity.
7.3/10
I think mortal woulda had this one if hed thrown punches but his verse flowed way better than chrizs and woulda won if it was frestyle not battle format
nice battle
vote:chriz
PLZ RETURN THE FAVOR MY VISIONARY BATTLE IS BEING SLEPT ON PLZ VOTE ON IT
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thanks for the vote uppin............................................. .....
uppin3............................................ ......................................
uppin4.................................... leave a link and ill drop an honest vote im almost at 100 posts
lmao-............almost dont count chriz.............
accualy it does cause ill be at 100 soon so i can vote on peoples battles and stop freeposting uppin5...
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