...And You, You Broke My Heart

[prophacyz]

…And You, You Broke My Heart

I yearn for your touch
Soft fingertips wiping away my tears
The presence of an angel
Suffocating from thoughts of you

Through bleeding hearts and broken wings
My voice is gone so I can't sing
About all the things I feel inside
It hurts me, but they haven't died
I'm hurting more than you'll ever know
But I still love you so

Are you happy where you are?
Thinking of what almost might've been
I'm still drowning in your essence
At least you're not alone

Through bleeding hearts and broken wings
My voice is gone so I can't sing
About all the things I feel inside
It hurts me, but they haven't died
I'm hurting more than you'll ever know
But I still love you so

I didn't mean to fall for you
I knew it would only
Cause pain and heartbreak
And I fell for you
And I feel the pain
And you, you broke my heart

I didn't mean to fall for you
I knew it would only
Cause pain and heartbreak
And I fell for you
And I feel the pain
And you, you broke my heart

[Penskills]

Nice work Prop...You showed your emotions very very well..

I yearn for your touch
Soft fingertips wiping away my tears
The presence of an angel
Suffocating from thoughts of you

There are just too many quoteables in this piece...
You are one writer I really look forward everytime you drop..
*Props*

[prophacyz]

thanks....lookin for more. i'ma post more soon./

[prophacyz]

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[prophacyz]

................goddamit Why The Fuck Ain"t Ppl. Hittin This Shit Up!

[MC Teck]

you broke my heart and killed me with boredom.

Another poor quality effort - no vision no future - keep trying you'll make it when you aquire some skill.

down

[prophacyz]

^nigga what the fuck is u talkin bout? i've read yo shit...you fuckin suck. ain't got nothin in yo shit...just throwin words together

[prophacyz]

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[..:: SpOrTzDiScIpLe™::..]

nice drop...good.. flow.....good rhymes secence.......nice strcture ....u basically had everything much respect ....rate : 9/10

[Avenge]

Very deep...I know where you are coming from...
Your chourus was very nice...I write with the same emotions as you...
exellent....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120182
would you mind commenting...I cant get peeps unless im dev or cam....

[prophacyz]

thanks for the feedback...i'll have some more comin

[Laureate]

The emotion is what made this peice stand out..really felt as if you gave the extra effort needed to make this peice dope. Multis were good, metas/similes were ok. Overall this was a very good drop. Props

Peep please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119931

[prophacyz]

^does yo crew have a poetry section? cuz i'm lookin fo a crew