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freshouttaafrica
flash
10-15lines
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verse due in 45minutes
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waitng for you to hurry up and spit cus i aint really got alot of time to be on this computer
cmon dawg
yo mi bad lil hommie....forgot about this shit.....but yeah here it is
iv been known to stimulate ya body and mind...like an enhancer \
couldnt key-mo better lines then me, if you was diagnosed wit cancer \ (kemo therapy)
I make-doom , to shake-you , i think this girl will break-soon \
your lyrics is hella weak, like anorectics in the weight-room \
my lyrics will break ya neck, but for real, get better in yo rehearsal \
you loosen and im "loven it" more then the mcdonalds comercial \
im assulting you, and thats resulting to, a broken hip and misplaced jaw \
i'll chop ya body up, and leave it in my freezer, then you can say that you raw \
the only gun you saw was in toys-r-us, you got a crew, then im a get ya man-next \
but homie im right, ya shit couldnt be tight, if ya took a dump in spandex
iight homes checkin in
Ok Ok Ok Ok This nigga want it okay/
dont you know I spit for days, WHy you think they call me freshouttaafrica I got ya moms dying of fucking aids/
you you know when i spit im sick in the place/
keep fucking wit me my ethopian flies to starve ya ass and stick to ya fuckin face/
you thinkin you seein me you fuckin retart/
ask JAMIE FOXX we dont do drive bys with guns we do it with POISONOUS DARTS/
in ya verse i didnt know wtf you were talking about really though/
Im bout to dig up KUNTA KINTE so he can grab his Spear and have ya chest out like BIzzare in the my band video/
Listen with me yo you'll neva last/
i got elephants that'll come through and ram ya ass/
lol LET THE VOTES BEGIN
lets go
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Can I Get A Fuckin Vote Please This Is My Last Upppp
This was whack
Flash....Flow was off...structure was garbag...get rid of the // at the end of your bars...you did however have a few sumwhat decent punchees and personals in your verse...not a good verse tho
freshoutwhocares....blah..don't say nigga in ya verse...elevate....even out your lines...fic ya flow..actually throw some goos punches instead of haveing all filler and played lines
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iight thanx i'll take your advice................naa im str8
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