thanks all.....uppin
thanks all.....uppin
A few achievements here and there
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Originally Posted by lyric
been some years since i've been round here...got tons of new ish and felt like it was time 2 share....therefor, check out some of my ish
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^useless......... Last time I'm uppin this
A few achievements here and there
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this was a decent piece... pretty basic but got to the point... you could've elaborated a bit more but thats something you could work on. it was nice & corny at the same time... keep writting
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nice man....good first drop....a very enjoyable read...
i really liked the imagery used...it always helps you
visualize the picture being painted...i especially
enjoyed the last two lines...though like bounce said...
it kinnda felt like you rushed it a little....i would have
liked to see you go more in depth with yer thoughts...
but besides that..it was pretty dope first drop....
keep up the good work!
- peace -
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man that shit was pure dopeness
i got no constructive critisim cause that shit is way beyond my leage
serioulsy that is one dope poem
reminds me so much of those days having fires drinking beer swimming in the lake. yeah fo shure. wicked drop.
take a look at the battle i had with hexen in my sig drop an honest vote
it's good but u should make it longer
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