Com vs Yungkiss

[Erupt]

10 lines.. when you drop.. i will drop less than 3 minutes after.... you have as long as you need (no longer than an hour though)

[Yungkiss]

check in

[Yungkiss]

Yo the rules are
10-15 lines
no freeposting
no bullshit votes
no dickriding
explain votes only
poll vote
no crew votes

[Erupt]

^NO.. the rules are 10 lines. allready stated.... you cant change that... i accept your other rules..but the RB rule is .. first rules stated stand.. you saw them and signed in.. so tough shit.. if you go over 10 i'll simply have your last five removed

[Erupt]

infact i've just keyed my verse straight up so you've got an hour from your check in to drop or I win by DQ.....

Who the fucks this?.. I'll do my thing...
.............and then I'll boast
He knows he can't win... but he needs all the posts!
Your supposed skill.... has still yet to show
How's it possible to suck... and at the same time blow?
Fuckin hoe, show respect... your brainless antics are ended
I had to write this simple... so this bitch would be offended!
You just attended your funeral... Your a hopeless case
Coz even ya sig...
............is scared to show its face!
Thought a concept hit you... but it was swelling instead
You barked up the wrong tree... and it fell on your head!

[Yungkiss]

like clumsey hippies i'm guaranteed to drop this herb
and wreck his text, just to leave him at a loss for words
shut ya ass up...this kid spoke a sick amount of dead sentements
so now i'ma leave him broke on his account like dead presidents
i end sentences...that means i'm killin his talk
my piece of mind's shaped like a nine, that means i'm spillin his thoughts
i'm disturbin him worse than haters...fuck waiters..i'm servin him first
like vick vapors...he'll open up...helped by a surgeon and nurse
cuz my verse stay on fire....like bbq's ...i'm charrin ya duke
cuz i'd rather recycle verses... then spit garbage like you

I keyed will you

[Yungkiss]

well i can't edit it now but i didn't agree wit 10 lines if i could i would take out two lines but i can't

[Axe]

well i can't edit it now but i didn't agree wit 10 lines if i could i would take out two lines but i can't

I'll do it. What two lines do you want taken out?

[Trogdor]

lol waohhh nice finisher Kiss

Kiss had a much better verse basiclaly because he went second and COM underestimated him. Kiss had nice creativiy, with the spilling your thoughts, the garbage line. there were other nice points......the only wack line was when you called COM a jerk, that was just a filler.....get ur teeth checked before u spit cavaties like that

Com had two lines that stood out, the finisher, and the one about his sig hiding his face.......nice personal, but other than that, it seemed as though he through that verse together in a matter of seconds, ive seen much better come frum him

Vote: Kiss for creativity

Com had way better personals tho


Please hit up my battle with KRACKA Com, fairly, since ur the oonly one who has enough posts to vote, thanks its at the top of frontlines

[Yungkiss]

then concealing the chalk, cuz you ain't never murdered a verse
who the fuck is this kid?...i ain't never even heard of this jerk

take that out

[Token]

Already did it cuz I'm better than Axe

[Yungkiss]

uppin for votes on this battle

[Yungkiss]

uppin for the second time and i will return the favor

[JONESY_UK]

ok not the best of battles but it wasnt bad


kiss- nice verse from u, ya had some nice punches that hit very hard. ya did make ya verse very creative, it was better than coms by far. but you could of hit him with more hard personals. flow was ight aswell . keep it up
overall 7/10

com - not a bad verse. a couple of lines were ok, like the personal but you need more punches and better personals that hit really hard. flow was very good and structure wasnt bad
overall 5/10

not bad overall but i thought kiss took this as he came across harder.

v/Kiss

[Erupt]

you see.. THIS is why i dont battle in frontlines....