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Track by "The Caustic Species"
order:Verbal Specimin then SciontifiK
Beat Production and Scratching by:
DJ Optimus Prime(OP)
Last edited by VerbalSpecimin; March 31st, 2004 at 07:17 PM
fixed...n/m
*peeps*
i dunno about studio quality... i wouldnt consider this to be that...
beat is nice, nice scratching. gets kinda "plain" listening to it after a while tho...not alot going on... not that there should be alot going on..but the only thing that really transitions is the scratching.
first dude... your jumping on and off the beat, mostly off.... it seems like you didnt write to this beat or somethin... i think you'd be alot iller if you fixed that. You gotta work on your flow alot, so you can get stable.
second dude... not really feelin the voice... the flow is smoother than the first dude tho, but your punchlines are ehh... also work on the emphasis in your raps... try saying certain words different ways to add feel and emotion... your sayin everything in the same way.
overall... iight drop, both emcees could use some polish in certain areas... the beat is kinda lackluster after hearing it for a minute too...
Last edited by Kris Cain; March 31st, 2004 at 07:24 PM
Welcome to reality.
*edited*
thanks
Last edited by Kris Cain; March 31st, 2004 at 07:25 PM
beat is pretty good, i'm sure the scratching sounds better on Hi Fi, anyway, first guy flowin good, delivery is nice, lyrics are good. second guy flowin good too not felin his voice as much as the first guy but he still sounds good. overall this is a good drop, nice shit man.
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Last edited by VerbalSpecimin; March 31st, 2004 at 11:25 PM
stop sleepin. uppin
ok lissinin...
ok the 1st cat sounds a bit hollow. decent flow not bad but nothing to call home about. Lyrics ok.
2nd cat better flow and lil better sound. defently not fitting in the beat thou. (sonicly) Lyrics like every other MC talkin about how great they are.
Come original. Please
Ok as a whole this track needs a lil better mixing and eqing ect. and deffently needs mastering sounds very flat. and vocals sound on the beat not In the beat.
IM me if you need mastering help. PZ
7 out of 10
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First dudes voice is nice, but flow is choppy as hell.....
this kidna grimey n shit..
the problem with the quality is TOO MUCH REVERB....and its kinda hollow on top of that...
decond cat...started off kinda goofy..then settles in the beat...then sounds goofy....then settles again....
yeah...quality is ify..its mad clear...and very well cleaned up....but the reverb is overkill.
.pz.
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thats a voice effect it sounded better on the beat then just havin it plain.. but o well
thanks fer the peep
no i know what reverb is, i know it wasnt an environmental thing, i do realize it was added post recording..lol..im saying it was too much.
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Ladies, if he can go for 30 seconds while jerkin..imagine what he can do in bed!
Word. Scratching was ill.
Your flow wasn't perfect, but cool.
Damn, the scratching is nice.
I agree, it was a lil' much on the reverb.
Decent wordplay, throughout.
I do think the quallity is great besides the reverb though.
Really clear. I need a dj like OP =( .
Anyway, the reverb wasnt that big of a deal, this was pretty nice.
Keep up the good work, homie.
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That Beat Is Hott... 1st Verse Is Cool... I Like Tha Last Line Bout Tha Scratches Then Tha Hook Comes It With It... But Tha Hook Should Have More In It, Cuz Tha Beat Is Dark Already... U Should Of Made It Hype... And Tha 2nd Nigga Is Nice... I Like His Flow... He Sounds Confident... But Overall Tha Song Is Cool... Keep Doin Ur Thing
good lookin on the peeps... UPPIN drop links and ill hit em back
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