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no hate d/r or crew/ bullshit votes
all votes muts be explained
no feeding
house rules
check in due ASAP
verses due within 6 hours
this is mi check in
Craz-E
flash
10-15lines
no hate d/r or crew/ bullshit votes
all votes muts be explained
no feeding
house rules
check in due ASAP
verses due within 6 hours
this is mi check in
“diss” kid thinks he can beat me? he’s out-a-place/
Like bein in church….you “diss-grace”/
Battling me on a good day’s like “rushing roulette” with a full clip/
You’ll just get slaughtered faster, but noone will notice cause ur just a blip/
If we were in prison I’de be slangin u out for pocket change/
My rhymes are so crazy , like a cowboy, “they tend to D-range”/
I’m Vicous I close sets, ambitious to Hold Tec’s//
Kill u Overnight you’ll be sleepin wit fishes like Ko-tex//
In da street, Discreet I dispose threats, I beat ya whole bet//
How u drop a Duece expectin to deafeat my Whole Deck//
If U Was The Sun U Stil Cudn’t Shine Against Me, Cuz I’m Similar To A Sunshade/
You Fear My Comeback Cause It's Like A Boomerang Made Of Razor Bladez /
Yo check the heat....keep it real...Keystyle
My spits are refined..I flip a rhyme quicker than it would be with jackie Chan and Jet li's kicks combined//~~1
there aint no end till this bitch resigns..and then like sun up 2 sun down I be hang'em high//~~2
I be bringin sick lines that be disturbin ur mind penatrating ur blood oxygen level till ur head is entwined//~~3
around your ass...O wait a minute it already is I can tell by your off set shitty rhymes//(shit)~~4
Wind chimes speak with more clarity than your wanna be battle 'flex'/~~5
leave you with the craz-e voodoo hex upon your doodoo text// (haha)~~6
ya shit be spokin but nobodys notin...your lame style that you be boastin n'totin and holdin//~~7
I got this pig over the camp fire lyrically roastin until Im saticfied that hes perfectly golden//(time to eat)~~8
Alright time to finish..
So flash why dont you jump off the pedestal..b4 I bet a few against your inescapable odds/~~9
There ain't no other way of lookin at it or shootin at it its gonna be murder prepare to meet your god//~~10
No disrespect...good luck man 1...
Flash- Don't space your bars..and get rid of the //. Try and even them out too..this will improve your flow and help your punches and personals hit harder. YOuc ame OK...a few nice punches and metas...the diss-grace is umbelievably played tho...
Craz-e- You came ok...but you had no real punches...everything you did was kinda indirect and more self-glorification...focus on attacking your opponent...make every line a punch
Vote=Flash for more punches and a harder hitting verse
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easy battle to vote on. Flash took this for his punches and wordplay. everything else in this seems about equal. Craz came wit some nice multies, but his punches weren't actual punches. you both need to work on personals tho. overall, this battles okay. decent work from both. but like i said, for harder punches and slicker wordplay...
vote-Flash
peace
Yeah id have to say flash took this
Flash your flow was off though and dont sacrifice for multis so much.
but you had some punches
Craz you had a good verse jsut not a battle verse your flowed better than his and had some god multis jsut remeber to throw punches next time
Can anyone plz return the favor my battle in sig are getting majorly slept on
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alright man thx for the insight...damn just cant seem to ever win a battle these days...lol alright nice win Flash
^^^^ never mind lol thought it was three...alright then keep em comin
Still uppin for two more votes on this...to make it final or for a turn around
flash-you had some good punches but your flow was off but you also had some good wordplay....other then that i didnt really see anything that good
craz-e-you had some good multis and your flow was okay i didnt really like your structure and you didnt really have any punches directed towards flash at all and you had alot of filler...elevate and then try battling some good people
vote-flash
Alright...
flash- you came ok.. better then a few other times. But you still should bring more personals into ur verse. You know I'm right, lol. Some nice metas, and ur punches came harder then ur opponents.. that's the main thing here in this battle..
craz- you came with some decent multis use. I reallu won't tell you much things different then some ofthe other guys who voted above. If u wanna get better and win a battle like this, just take their advice. You came ok here... but ur punches didn't match up to flashes
vote- flash
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Ok Flash's Structure Was Ight...
Flow Was Decent,creativiti Maybe A Lil,and U Could Like Cam Said Add Some More Personals In Ur Verse...but Over All Not A Bad Verse From U A Decent Job...
Craz-e U Did Ok I Guess
Ur Structure Was Good, Flow Was Ok,punches U Lacked, You Could Of Took A Lil More Tyme Wit Ya Verse And Maybe Could Of Thought Of Some More Better Punches....you Need To Elevate
And Work On Your Punches,you Have Potential Though...
But With A Better Verse And Punches .......v/flash
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