10 lines
house rules
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
Deadline: Must drop by 3 Pm on April 4th 2004
no lateness or no shows will be tolerated..........
must check in.........
10 lines
house rules
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
Deadline: Must drop by 3 Pm on April 4th 2004
no lateness or no shows will be tolerated..........
must check in.........
hey i dont know what your doing but saturday was the 4th and its sunday now
^^ today is the 4th fuckface
and get out of my god damn thread..................
checkin in................but i want a blind spit
so if you dont drop by 3pm............im not dropping...........
Fuck it..............ill drop first................you better not no show either
i expect to win.......
.....when im battling an illiterate super hero
cus he was never good........
.....and in a flash, he went to absolute zero
hes a queer, and hes a bad rapper......
...which is worse.....that is thy question
"songs with my friends"..........
...........sounds more like a gay kiss and tell session
so when veiwing his music videos........
......children........you may need parental discretion
cause he sure aint going STRAIGHT......
......and that only leaves one direction
my worst verse.................
..........will demean this kids best
call me "The End"..............
cause thats what im doing to this superhero's quest
^^ not my best by far............but it only took 10 minutes
yo man sorry if mi shit a lil late...but i dunno where you are but that NEWB was right today is the 5ths...in the US its sunday.....but yeah here mi shit
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I Use Reverse Phsycology,To Make Head Think He A "Work-Of-Art..
I"Disturb-wit-Bars" He Joined Mc cuz he thought we "Surved-As-Guards"..
(gaurds=bodygaurds)
Ya Givin Me A Headache Cuz All Ya Writtns Gettn On My "Damn-Nerves"..
If You A Draft Pick'then how come MC Makes Excuses To "Bann-This-Herb"...
(Bann=Cut)
You Can Predict This Battle Regicide Knocked Out In The "First-Round"
Theirs Alot Of Herbs In My Hitlist But I Gotta Make Room Fo A "Circus-Clown
I Normaly Don't Convict A Herb, But I Got All The "Evidence-I-Need'...
This Is Your Loss The Myths Are True Reg Will Never"Suceed"...
You Better Get A Line Of Defence Cuz U Don't Have The Skills 2 Rhyme...
I Typed Fag In A Search Engine And Ya Name Came Up A "Million-Tymes"..
oh shit wahts up GRISLEY VIRTUE/ICE MAN...didnt know that it was you
Vote: Regicide
Regicide: You had an OK verse. You had some nice punches, and a good flow. You had nice personals, and made this kid look bad. Your structure wasn't too good at all, and was kinda hard to read. But your punches just hit harder, and you had nice rhymes
Flash:Some of your lines i couldn't understand, like the draft pick line. When you have to translate lines, it ain't good. Your structure was ok, but i wasn't feelin your flow. And why did you look up fag in a search? Anyway, i just think Reg's punches hit harder and he had better personals. Oh, one more thing, dont use quotations in the future, they look gay
Return the Favor Please:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122915
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122915
yea thats me..........whats up man
upping this............and i dont mean to sway, if i am........... but you had not one single personal..............you should not even get 1 vote.......
Vote: Reg
He had funny personals, the line about FLASh was ILL nice touch. Not many punches, but his flow was good. Didnt enjoy the structure too much tho kinda wacko.
Other dude, your first line was alrite with the wordplay, but than u started flowin like an upward stream. your structure was kinda ugly, dont space yur lines like that. oh and use more personals that verse coulda been for any1. u coulda made fun of his name like how it sounds like a insect killer. but you didnt. your flow was alrite.
Please hit this up honestly
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122916
upping again...........................................
lol pretty good battle. both had great flow and creativity. REg had some good old school flow going on but i liked flash's better. He had more witty lines than reg did IMO. Punches and personals were pretty good on both sides. Mutlis was taken by flash. It wouldn't hurt 4 u2 2 work on vocab. I am voting flash because he had good openers and closers which is where the hits count. Good battle by both..
ummmm.....pretty weak battle, not very good from either. Regicide
though was clearly the winner. Flash yer verse was horrid...
overall you did a terrible job at dissing your opponent...i think the
closer was the only actually punch you had, the rest was mostly
filler and weak attempts at word play...personals were also absent
from your verse...on top of that the presentation of your verse
was newbish...the structure was okay but, you should get rid of
the little explanations after each bar and the hyphens in between
words...peep the help center...and keep trying to elevate...
Regicide...not a great verse from u either, still it was more than
enough to win this...you had decent personals, and a few punches
and foremost you actually dissed yer opponent...creativity could
have been better but it really wasn't a factor in this battle...
v/ Regicide...better punches and personals
I dont have enough posts to poll yet, but.....i would really appreciate
if you left some honest feedback or votes on the link in my sig...
being that i took the time to reply to yours.... thanks..pz
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^^ daffer blows
you should win anyway
and come back and poll when u reach 100.........
i vote regicide man he was by far the best he kept up a good strusture an hit flash hard with his punches his personals were not as good but still regicide was by far better..........................out
v=regicide
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aiight time for a HONEST vote
Regicide
i expect to win.......
.....when im battling an illiterate super hero
cus he was never good........
.....and in a flash, he went to absolute zero
^^Not bad...nice vocab....But the punch landed short!!!!
hes a queer, and hes a bad rapper......
...which is worse.....that is thy question
"songs with my friends"..........
...........sounds more like a gay kiss and tell session
^^nice wordplay...and personal
so when veiwing his music videos........
......children........you may need parental discretion
cause he sure aint going STRAIGHT......
......and that only leaves one direction
^^^um nice vocab..punch lacked though really didn't hit anything
my worst verse.................
..........will demean this kids best
call me "The End"..............
cause thats what im doing to this superhero's quest
^^nice wordplay...vocab...but again it didn't hit hard
Overall...you had a nice verse....vocab was hot and wordplay was hot...punches were lackin and your personals lacked also~/~
8/10 mics
Flash::
I Use Reverse Phsycology,To Make Head Think He A "Work-Of-Art..
I"Disturb-wit-Bars" He Joined Mc cuz he thought we "Surved-As-Guards"..
(gaurds=bodygaurds)
^^Funny shit....Nice line Loved the Punch
Ya Givin Me A Headache Cuz All Ya Writtns Gettn On My "Damn-Nerves"..
If You A Draft Pick'then how come MC Makes Excuses To "Bann-This-Herb"...
(Bann=Cut)
^^^nice first line....punch didn't hit though needed reworded
You Can Predict This Battle Regicide Knocked Out In The "First-Round"
Theirs Alot Of Herbs In My Hitlist But I Gotta Make Room Fo A "Circus-Clown
^^^lol nice set up and nice Punch
I Normaly Don't Convict A Herb, But I Got All The "Evidence-I-Need'...
This Is Your Loss The Myths Are True Reg Will Never"Suceed"...
^^nice wordplay and funny as hell PUNCh liked it alot
You Better Get A Line Of Defence Cuz U Don't Have The Skills 2 Rhyme...
I Typed Fag In A Search Engine And Ya Name Came Up A "Million-Tymes"..
^^^simple and sweet......Nice concept and nice creativity...punch was OK
overall.....You pulled out alil creativity and it worked nicely
nice wordplay and punches......Vocab was there also...multis killed it....
overall i think you edged it out.....
Vote FLASH
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