lil hood Diss-Ft: Freeman

[Mistral]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=123789

Credz:
1 Punch 2 Punch I see none, I hear some cracking though…
Cause the bitch is trying to box but he’s just packing foam…
Man I honestly was gonna fall asleep and nap on ya verse…
But I thought Id make you big so I can laugh at ya first…
Cause his verse was so ugly his own damn semen frown…
I mean fuck hes more worse than the cleveland browns…
And yet he PM’d me asking for advice..makes me sick…
Even when you tried to diss me, you’re still on my dick…
But man I gotta be honest with you, ya just arent illen man…
Didn’t even try cause well I didn’t wanna hurt ya feelings…damn…

MOTHERFUCKER

Freeman:
Dawg, your diss was weak, honestly man, you bore me
Im tryin' to think of a way to discredit your name..
.. But you already did it for me
Im gona have to deal you pain and leave your skull ruptured
Your verse might have been better..
.. If it had been at all structured
Rhymes are non-existent, yet you still drop persistent
Hate to break it to you..
.. But your wackness is the only thing consistent
You flow like dried cement, inventing your gangster image
While really you sit home at your computer..
.. Playing Solitaire and Cribbage
Expert at card games, claims to be toting guns and knives
Its so sad for me to see lame newbies..
.. Who's computers are their lives

[Freeman]

Love a good diss.

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13,014 100,000 lil hood Diss-Ft: Freeman
Today 06:24 PM (Freeman)

Look who got the 100,000 post in OM.
Me.
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[Topic]

allright diss....could have been better but since he was a newbie you had no personals to use. I think frees was the better one here he had some nice lines. credz you did well to, your opener was nice and you stayed consistent. Nice diss all in all

[Freeman]

One reply.
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[LM]

It was Ok....

Didnt need to be special but I woulda liked ya's to completly murder him.

Credz
Ok.....some punches were good. You were witty and your structure was ok. Dont like it down the centre though. Your worst line was the one sayin about Pm'n you while on your dick....the rest were ok.

Freeman
You had the better verse. Not sure why you had to be in on the diss but who cares. Again structure was ok and you came with nice witty punchlines.

Overall....coulda been better but didnt have to be.

Hit up 'Loving To Hate' in my sig please....both of ya.

[Endeva.]

why u go picking on noobs...lol.... but i like a nice diss... this wasnt the best, but it made me laugh,.... your structures coulda been brushed up,, but it flowed pretty good... some spots seemed a bit basic, maily credz, but i liked it, like i said.... makes a change reading these, than all the usual stuff i read.... think you both inspired me to do one..lol.... ~one~

[FaceFuckaMidget.]

notice he didnt return to fuck with this............fucking newbs........

[Mistral]

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