13th Amendment(Ft. Wise Ways)

[Wise Ways]

-Writers Block-


Kapone

Pain Coflicting, Sticking, Veins Is Trickling Ice
Hitting, Dripping On My Lips, Blood From My Eyes
Crusified For The Demise Of Lives, Yet Blind
I Tryed To Die So Many Times, But Failed Like My Life
To Play Me, The Bass Beats, My Face Bleeds
Tortured By A Culture Of Vultures And Bass Feinds
Lace Beats,Drove Crazy By My Hazy Lyrics
Fear It, Lungs Inhale,Exhale, Can You Hear It?
The Steady But Ready Breathing Of An Audiance
Iminate, Intimate, The Same Place, Different Providence
They Eyes Peeled, I Appealed, Caught A Deal
Went Insane, Took It To The Brain, And Broke The Seal

EyeroniK

am unable to speak, all my words are almost apart.
Cant write anymore,Writing used to be 1st in my heart.
Why does things end up not the way you planned?
I can't say "I'm the best" cause that's already been banned.
My words are copywright protected so no cheating,stop playing
I can be yo ghostwriter so send me pm and start paying.
When i write i am in a new place, a new beginning a new plot at times
In an awkward land with unusual people held only before in our minds
Yet I see Kapone in black darkness with magnitudes of depth,
Flow is gone forever? which no light fathoms its gloomy stealth.
It feels like breastplate taped to prisms,my skin is scraped wit incisions,
Unable to write i cant believe that fate has RAPED my wisdom
As this bile drapes from your waist my mind is already imprisoned
Cant escape this escape these deadlyvisions of ligament schisms

Ace of Ace's

The questions echo within my mind, but I hide behind my seat
Just A heartbeat away to enrage my face with victory or defeat
My palms embalm perspiration, I'm desperate for more direction
The words I thirst are unheard at first to prevent interjections
All meaning forsaken, I'm takin' my time to pursue what is lost
A dropped spit profit thats found to be worth more than its cost
The equation doesn't add or subtract the product of this division
I've lossed my chance to potray my mind its no longer my decision
My mind stumbles upon a few sketchy lines and a broken chorus
Trying hard to remember the couple of verses I wrote before this
For my performance, but i can't because the timing prevents me
Because its more than my mind that seems to be renderin' empty
All is lost in the nothing that made me something to begin with
But my heart continues because I'd lose myself if i didn't win this

Wise Ways

Trying hard to break down barriers upstairs, cleaning house
Can't concentrate..
Even whispers sound as if I'm hearing shouts.
Brain lays fast asleep, tha write nor left side'll wake up
Failed attempts opening my creative eye..it just stays shut.
Hoping and woundering, wondering in bottomless nothing
Except getting nowhere fast..when I'm in a hurry and rushing.
Thinking cap on, but tha hat size is off, don't fit..seems tear
Suffocating in day dreams, clogged mind's unable to breathe air.
Desperate for relief..sitting, waiting, hanging on a skilled wish
To knock down my writer blocks..but not tha kind you build with.

[Wise Ways]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...=123085&page=2

[a-list]

It was ok..not really hott..flow wasn't that tight..yall should redo this..take sum time...my opinion...peace

[Key Tone]

^^Did u even read it?....

[a-list]

The questions echo within my mind, but I hide behind my seat
Just A heartbeat away to enrage my face with victory or defeat
My palms embalm perspiration, I'm desperate for more direction
The words I thirst are unheard at first to prevent interjections
All meaning forsaken, I'm takin' my time to pursue what is lost
A dropped spit profit thats found to be worth more than its cost
The equation doesn't add or subtract the product of this division
I've lossed my chance to potray my mind its no longer my decision
My mind stumbles upon a few sketchy lines and a broken chorus
Trying hard to remember the couple of verses I wrote before this
For my performance, but i can't because the timing prevents me
Because its more than my mind that seems to be renderin' empty
All is lost in the nothing that made me something to begin with
But my heart continues because I'd lose myself if i didn't win this

That was da closest to being a good flow.Yall were just not consistent.tis wasn't wack but it wasn't dope.peace

[buh bye Matty :(]

lol, a-list...are you an alias that hates 13th? lol

j/p

[Key Tone]

Well i guess thanks fo the feed...lol

[FaceFuckaMidget.]

this shit was pimp

^^ that sums it up

and WHY WASNT I TOLD WE WERE DOING A COLLAB?

eyeronik, let me in on the next one

i would have wanted to work with wise ways

wise ways had an ill closer
eyeronik had a good second half
ace of aces had the weakest verse
but it was still good
and kapone wrecked it with multis

good job
13th amendment blowing up............good to see

[Wise Ways]

Bump Mah' fuckas.

[Spartacus]

Yea, That Was A Key Style I Did In About 2 Minutes, Then Everyone Saddle'd Up And Made It An Open Mic

[Ace of Aces]

this shit was pimp

^^ that sums it up

and WHY WASNT I TOLD WE WERE DOING A COLLAB?

eyeronik, let me in on the next one

i would have wanted to work with wise ways

wise ways had an ill closer
eyeronik had a good second half
ace of aces had the weakest verse
but it was still good
and kapone wrecked it with multis

good job
13th amendment blowing up............good to see

haha. wutever. thanx i guess.

[Key Tone]

Hahaha^^^Ace....

UPpUN anywayz.........................

[Spartacus]

I Aint Seen You On In A Few Ronik, Its Saturday, I Figured You'd Be On