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    7 Deadly Sins

    SLOTH:

    This Russian roulette'll cause pistol-death-to-my-brains
    As I whistle-a-breath-of-pain with Chrystal-Meth-in-my-viens
    Now I'm soundin'-ebonic, as I smoke a pound-of-chronic
    Downin'-tonic like a COMET and drownin'-in-my-vomit
    I wanna take theses razor BLADES and graze-'em-in-my-wrists
    The HAZE is raising-and-I'm-pissed, cuz I don't even know what day-this-is
    Shit, I haven't moved for DAYS-ON-ENDS, I made-amends with hardships
    I let the cards-slip through the garbages, with clips for marksmenships
    And target practices, I sit back and relax to concentrrate
    And contemplate on how to release this monster-hate when I'm in conscious-state

    WRATH:

    Voices-and-visions, making CHOICES-AND-DECISIONS, I have no-controll
    I try to slow-my-roll and go-with-the-flow, but I sold-my-soul
    And it's tearing-me-apart and scaring-my-heart into Cardiac
    Starting-to-crack like it was PART-OF-THE-ACT to cause a heart-attack
    Now it's eating at-my-brains, and feeding-off-my-pains
    'Till I'm going completely-insaine, and bleeding-from-my-viens
    It's like-the-WRATH of a psycho-path buildin'-inside
    Like all the children-died as my will-decides to SLIDE to my killin'-side
    And all the tensions turn to vengance, as my engines replenish
    And every breath of this expensive meth extends my Death Sentance

    PRIDE:

    I am the Body and the Blood of the Ressurection
    Keep second-guessin' who's BEST and get your chest pressed-into-disection
    As infectious-injections spread like the love-for-our-land
    With one shove-of-my-hand I STAND to rise above-man
    Controllin'-your-soul, through the hole-in-your-skull-fracture
    As plans unfold-in-my-rapture, AFTER gold was sold-to-the-manufacture
    In exchange for interchangable clips, designed-to-kill-the-bleeder
    To shoot his spine-and-spill-a-liter, with my .9-millameter
    I am am Christ-on-the-throne, I sliced-through-the-bone and the cartiladge
    The art of a Martyr, startin' shit and spitting cartridges

    ENVY:

    And I have followed in the footsteps of the leaders-before-me
    As I read-the-gory stories of how they succeeded-in-glory
    Envious of Hitler's accomplishments in love-and-war
    When Kykes asked, "What are you shovin'-for?" He closed the oven-door
    He made 'em FACE-THE-THRONE, WASTED-THIER-BONES, and shedded-skin
    To jettison, and make SPACE, to give 'em a TASTE-OF-THIER-OWN medicine
    Attacking the Blacks, to try and kill every Brother-man
    When they made another-stand in the AFRICAN Mother-Land
    With all his GERMANS DETERMINED to build an Aryian-Race
    With blue eyes starin'-in-place of the American-face

    LUST:

    I gander-from-afar, of her standin'-by-her-car
    On her hand-I-see-a-scar, as she handles a handle-bar
    I see she locks-it-on-the-wheel, then she walks-in-her-heels
    She stops and talks-a-deal, as I conceal what my thoughts-reveal
    While this FEELING-OF-LUST is stealing-my-trust, and tempting-me
    'Till my temperature's exempt with thoughts I never dreampt of attempting
    And my bag of hemp-is-empty, like the way I feel-inside
    Revealing-pride that I shall STEAL when she is kneeling-by-my-side

    GREED:

    If I make-up-my-mind, I can leave my mistakes-behind
    And for her sake-I'll-be-kind, TAKE-MY-TIME, and make-her-mine
    But my decisions-turn-to-bluff, as my visions-become-ruff
    I know earning-love-is-tuff, but it just isin't-enough
    Unwinding-signs-of-obsessions, my mind-shall-find-in-my-presence
    Climbing-sessions, but SIMON-SAYS that time-is-of-the-essence
    And I know-in-my-heart that we got off to a slow-start
    But if we're not TOGETHER forever, I know I'll blow-apart
    Feeling crushed like Owen-Heart, when he fell-to-his-death
    Untill I'm yellin'-out-my-breath and LEFT in HELL for sellin'-meth
    It's like I was standin'-in-a-boat and WOUND up drownin'-in-a-moat
    I couldn't FLOAT, then I awoke and FOUND my hands-around-her-throat

    GLUTTONY

    That shit was cuttin'-me-up, I felt the GLUTTONY-erupt within' me
    It was a sin-to-see my Infantry march slowly-into-infinity
    THE HOLY-TRINITY: Hitler, Satan and I
    She was-waitin'-to-die, after seeing the hate-in-my-eye
    And if you guessed-this'd-be-gory, here's the rest-of-the-srory, listen.
    I gouged my thumbs and tried to twist-'em into her RESPIRATORY-SYSTEM
    She nearly-dies untill I see TEARS when she tries-to-scream
    And I can still HEAR her FEARS, and her cries-in-my-dream
    I Can't Stand it!!! My MISTAKES could have me banned from the Planet
    And TAKEN to Hell with even Breakin'-Commandments

    And if you DIE-BY-THE-SWORD, then Heaven-already-wins
    Cuz in the EYE-OF-THE-LORD, these are the 7-Deadly-Sins

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    Riiight, realizing there's one just like this dropped last night makes me not even want to read it.. drop w/ atleast a hint of originality.. that's just a word of advice.

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    umm... Intimate is calling you out for this topic...

    Choose your poisin child...

    Split.

    Mag...

    or

    SMZ

    We are calling you out in Front Lines... Bitch Slapped...

    30 lines... topical... Loser closes their 7 deadly sins thread...

    btw... this sucked...
    Hence Forward

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