10 lines.....
usual rules....
due in an hour....
good luck.....
10 lines.....
usual rules....
due in an hour....
good luck.....
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Aight checkin in.
murder murder
I'ma killa virus and guess what, your the host
I'll rip the DNA out of your body and still boast
Put saringes in ya intestines where you cant get em
made alot of mistakes battlin me, ya gonna regret em
I continue spittin that good shit like benefit vomit
ya got fake script I even know the url where you got it
The truth is, somber is a pedifile man, he crave's boys
He loves playing with himself, he's obessed gay toys
Your scared now and your erasing your whole drop
Deleting everything like your backspace was stuck
Done.
murder murder
Sharp, stick to poetry fag, yer lame an im serious kid
fuckin clit yer such a bitch, that even yer name has a period
im curious how r u a flyweight, ya never battled b for dun
just a newb afraid 2 lose, afraid,so u stay in the poetry forum
but i'll whore em' w/ ten, cuz i always knew that duke was wack
fag u used to diss our crew, but look who came crawlin' back
yer a hack who used drop whole paragraphs cryn, fuckn lame fag
sharp's always trying to play it strait, but its hard w/ his gay av
a laugh is about all yer good for, bitch forget about battlin again
cuz sorta like Mag defending Penskills, simplyyou'll never win
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typo in the 4th line...
there shouldn't be a second 'afraid'...
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Uppin, please vote.
murder murder
Vote, Drop a link, I'll get back atcha.
murder murder
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Sharp........You had some good verses and some good structure....They wasnt that too complexed...Also You had a few good punches that I was feelin....I could understand everything that you said.....Not to hard to read and a good battle
Somber......I cant say that you have bad structure becuz yours is good too.Also you had very few punches and lines...but you your lines was sortof complexy and sortof understandable.....But your lines was pretty good and I was feelin a few but SHarp was a little better in this battle becuz he had a little bit of everything better...
v/Sharp
Before I vote drop ya vote in this thread and ill come back in vote in this Holla....you said you was going to vote so do go ahead im waiting.......
word?.......
please somebody...
vote........
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heres the thread to vote in me vs flows http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=125842
sharps verse had no punchlines at all, i dont think it was even a battles verse mang..
by contrast somber was ok, i liked the poetry personal, it was the best punch of the battle...
repay the favor and hit up this battle w/vote
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=125928
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^you should vote man. Somber wont get it if you dont vote. Give him the vote.
murder murder
Sharp you said you was going to vote in battles leave a link and I did....If you dont vote then you will be disgraced and for swaying......So you better vote in my thread or considered swayed.........Holla
Sorry, I apologize, ill keep my word. I'll vote in it soon. Thank you for the reminder.
murder murder
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