Do You???

[fo'trill]

Replied to: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=128627

*note* i wrote this in anger.
DO YOU
How pissed off are you
do you want to rip the lips off a dude
cuz they talk?
how many guns you bought
you wanna get get caught
for assault
do you wanna beat someone so bad they can't walk
do you wanna cut they feet and force em to dance in salt
you wanna shove someone in a vault
you wanna blaze a fight
talk shit pull out a laser sight
get their blazer in sight
hold it tight
fire till the tires pop
and the light
emission from the nozzle kills the night
you wanna steal a bike
fuck up a bitch like an ex con thriller dike
you wanna hatch a plan
to drag a man
from the back of a black van
You wanna tie there hands
to a bag of sand
throw em off of land
go to kinko's and scan
the pictures and send it to their fam
you wanna endanger a man
dangle him from a ceiling fan
you wanna start peeling clams
from the bodies you've kept in a pond
you wanna build a bomb
you wanna be a menendez and kill ya mom
you wanna chill with saddam
you wanna disguise yourself and assasinate the dali lahm
and decapitate any one who catches on
you wanna drown someone in the john
you wanna pound someone on their lawn
do you hear the things dahmer did and yawn
it's hard being calm so do you etch your hitlist onto your palm
do you?

[Mistral]

FUCK YEAH I DO!

Word.

[Split]

lmao, I dunno about the true skill involved in this, but pretty funny lol. I enjoyed reading it, so if that was the judge of this piece I would give it a 7 outta ten, but anything else, except for a few meak part with creativity, I give it a 4...

hit this up

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...937post1401937

[southsideloco]

I kinda liked this. It was different from all other sad or weary emotion pieces, explained ur anger n let out all the different things we can do when we get pissed off...i enjoyed reading this piece n to answer the question....hell yea i would like to some o that sometime when im angry, overall tho..it was an interesting piece n tight to read..

Peace

[fo'trill]

thanx for the positive feed back, it makes me wanna post more of my hateful ish. i understand that it's not very complex, again i wrote it a while back when i was pissed and i really didn't care about trying to be "nice" i just wanted to vent.