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Thread: Mr. Jones

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    Lightbulb Mr. Jones


    - the kentucky
    before fame and fortune, before the region acclaimed him
    before his legend budded like the wreath on his mane did
    there was a track, its love in tact – the fans were sad to see
    the once-flourishing venture shake hands with bankruptcy
    furthermore, the sports supporters, through whimsical means
    saw blue grass & noble stakes within their Pimlico dreams
    a sterling day in early May, on twenty odd acres` land. .
    the caesar of horseracing would trump the oddsmakers` plans
    poker faces for cameras – “ he was bred to be fit,”
    his owners would reap the highs of equestrian bliss
    living proof, this ridden truth`s thrills developed marks
    of question – NOW they all remembered Philadelphia Park
    a `cursed` town – and, of course, the awful patterns hid
    in the south`s fish-yards, whilst at Broad & Paterson,
    two gracious eyes paraded by, both bluish and greenish. .
    a celebrated ride began en route to the Preakness –

    - the preakness

    The Preakness` feel revealed a business in tune with -
    Its demographics . . up the coast, a city in ruins
    Industrial blunders; a place free of art & spector
    Where skylines are defined by depleted architecture
    Profiled: a beautiful creature in destiny`s light,
    A final rest before the test within a Chesapeake night
    Brush in hand – the trainers parted fate subconsciously
    Getting as close to it as the starting gate allotted the. .
    Champion – stoic as ever, perhaps mastering his fate
    The move was made to save a people halfway through the race
    From Camden to the shore – the move threw fathers first
    As the wealthy donned khakis and blue-collared shirts
    Back at home, the crowds` cheers were purging the night. .
    The American dream: manhood must emerge from a plight
    Mr. Jones knew it – at Belmont, he will adhere to his start:
    We admire the best – but hold underdogs dear to our hearts



    PS - I plan to complete this after the Belmont Stakes.
    background information

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    damn... i was doing a topic like this but i never finished it. lol

    good... but i have exams, so.,.

    no reply..


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    You need to leave 2 links to open mics that you left feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    RB lost one of it's finest writers when you left,
    I can see that you did your research instead of just posting about something you read or heard in the news,Well this was excellent and I wish you luck on your quest to win the RSTL

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