resign of religion

[synickle]

Enters...

Zealots-to-office?, Nothing Offered Except Rope from the Devil
Soul Buried In pebbles With 10 toes pointing to heaven
Im Down 6 levels, Earth's Surface Touching a crisis
As my Body Deteriates once the casket's ignited
The Resign Of Religion, No more Christian'z or Cathlics
Hindu's Factionz Dispersed through the roots of the Earth
Cursed to Lay Breathing, My Substance cant be contained
as Blood's Stopped Pumping to both my heart and my brain
God Wont Help, He Buckled Under the pressure
An it Aint coincidence everyone living is 'under-the-weather'
Ive Discussed the topic, Weighed up all the Pro'z-an-Conz
Pregnancy, Divorce, Aidz, Courts and broken Bondz
caused the Resign, Predetermined?, Or a flaw in the Design
Regardless Of Time, My Corpse Will Retain Christ in the Core of my mind
right-or-Wrong?, I'll Believe Whatever....Till My Essence-reclines
as The Earth is Destined-to-fail untill the Heavens-Allign

Exits....

plzz rate

[Kibbles]

Nice Shit...U know who dis is...(lol)..

[Incineratedrose]

umm yeah you dont know who this is.. but it was pretty good.. better than be but yeah.. i was feelin it.... i like the topic... check out "the death of my cock"

[2hot2handle]

not bad. good flow. u handled the words alright. U knew what u were doing. keep it up. U stayed on topic. not much to say. good job.

[RapidFire]

I was impressed...very nice vocabulary...above average rhymes...metaphors were nice...I liked the concept too....really short tho..

Ive Discussed the topic, Weighed up all the Pro'z-an-Conz
Pregnancy, Divorce, Aidz, Courts and broken Bondz
^^ nice

6/10

peace