Simplistik vs Darknova

[Its Illytizzle!™]

v/ Dark.

Cos he voted for me.

Plus the kid came personal.. original.. equallin harder punches thru out that actually dissed his opponent.. dont get me wrong.. ya verse made me cringe.. but Simplistiks made me cry.. not only used a 'Michael' line.. but that was his best line! rest was jus a case of fittin words that rhymed together.. coulda been dissin anyone.. no punches to note.. jus random statements.. at least Dark had something of a flow and it looked more battle-like.

[God.]

This battle was okay, but...

Darknova: Ur verse was pretty good. Nice personals using his sig and all. U need to come with harder personals to win here. U said you weren't tryin[', but I don't know because this is the first battle I've seen you do. I liked your flow and structure wasa pretty good. Keep elevatin'.

Simplistik: Ur verse was okay. You need to throw some personals for real. I thought it was more like a freestyle and what ur gonna do to him than a battle rhyme. That's why you got merked. I think there's cyphers for that. Flow and structure was aight. Keep elevatin'.

Vote: Darknova

*Vote on my battles and I'll return the favor later.*

[Darknova]

uppin.....................

need just 1 more.. please?

and hes not uppin.

[Darknova]

uppinn............................................ ..

[dreamer]

Darknova had harder punches and better vocab and wordplay simplistiks last punch hit hard but i felt his other ones were played out and elementary. i felt this punch the most and felt it took over the batte
How could u write those lines, tha fuck is in your mind?
Ur name now, how it always will be.. in ur sig: undefined
This punch got my vote for Darknova

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ambiguous

[...Apocalypse...]

yo your dq'ed watch wen one of the mods catch this you upped 6 times

[Aargh Kelly]

Darknova

structure was ok so was your flow
your punches hit harder
i didnt see any personals
you need those in battles
vocab needs to be better
work on wordplay
elevate
but i think your verse was pre-writ
whats up with this line

How could u write those lines, tha fuck is in your mind?

u spit first? hmmm... dont like it at all

simplistik
you need to work on those punches
and personals(which i didn't see any)
your structure was ok so was your flow
but you need work on vocab and wordplay
elevate

vote/Dark
even tho to me it seemed pre-writ
on one line

[Axe]

Darknova is DQ'ed for excessive upping.