sabotage
curse
7curse vs. $abotage (hot gun topikal...peep)
ayo...this is basic...i am anti~gun, you are pro~gun. u spyt first, then me, then me again, then u clean up.
rulez:
8 barz each spyt (half a verse)
each spyt must be within 24 hrs from last spyt
votes are regular. (vote off of wordplay, punches, and intelligence)
may tha best MC win
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7curse ---aka--- tha lyrikal uzi
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Death, guns and ammo make the world go round
many would agree but they are under the ground
Trapped in the spiritual realm, demonically bound
harnessing the true power of emcees underground
A soldier busts many clips just to keep his family safe
smith & westin R well known 2 decide the medias fate
Gats have been around since encyclopedia print date
we are the blessed ones our behavior always deviates
***MY VERSE***
gunz do make tha world go round/ an sendya 6~feet~deep/
but im gon grab ya tre poundz/an makeya pricks~retreat~heat//2
cuz now when kids be talkin bout gunz...thay just talkin hard/
they really only strappin when they wearin a bra//4
cuz within thay small lives...theyve never felt~trouble/
tha only metal on thay waist is thay fuckin belt~buckles//6
so i still gotta wonder where thay gun lines derived/
when thay only steels they got are in NBA live//8
7curse ---aka--- tha lyrikal uzi
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***MY VERSE***
most dont lie when thay put 9milli gats~in~thay ~raps/
but thay not talkin bout heat...but what they stack~in~thay~pants//2
an ME...im puttina blind/ to thay shine/ like a solar~eclipse/
cuz only when thay only bumpin Lord Willin* iz thay rollin~wit~clipse//4
when its comes to heat/ even tha street~knows/
tha only shots theyve taken are really free~throws//6
AND THIS IS JUSTA MAKE SURE THAY NEVA SAY GAT~AGAIN/
CUZ MOST ONLY DRAWIN GUNZ WIT A PAD~AN~PEN//8
*Clipse CD title
7curse ---aka--- tha lyrikal uzi
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hey i got a deal for u, if you hit up two of my battles, i will hit up as many battles of your or anyone elses tahat you want me to hit up, just hit up these two battles for me
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=131972
(this only needs one more vote)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=132331
If we didn't have guns in our society we would all die slower
more painfully than we're used to, like death by flamethrower
We would be innovative in our choices of thorough retrobution
cause we all know that hollow tips thru the dome's the solution
hitmen are granted with priceless items such as a golden chalice
for killing people and ending lives acting equal to a major catalyst
We chose to innovate on ways to kill people thru rule of a bigot
I'm sure we all enjoy to kill people and 4 that we must live wit it
Well.....this one was pretty easy too decide on...I think Sabotage took this one ....Curse:You need to fix up your structure a bit....The vocab was pretty basic.... It could have been a little stronger...Punches were decent....But its kinda confusing whether this is a battle....or a topical...why would you put punches in a topical??.....
P.S...You dont need all the CAPS and the \....the verse looks nicer without them...if people cant catch on to your rhyming words, they shouldnt be voting....Still some nice multi's in there....Keep it up....peace
Sabotage:I thought your verse was more thought out....I laughed at a couple lines..
"We would be innovative in our choices of thorough retrobution
cause we all know that hollow tips thru the dome's the solution"
That was funny....So was the second verses closer......Nicer vocab and structure, It made me think more and the lines held my interest better...Overall I think just a better written verse....Good job...Peace..
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Curse: this was as topical, not a battle. Structure and flow was off and hard to read because of the / and CAPS, ......Just simply type it out and try to keep your lines the same length. Even though yours seemed like more of a battle than a topical, it was okay.....I have seen much worse. Vocab was weak....try to elevate in that area as well. Nice multis though.
Sabotage- Your flow and structure was good. Lines were kept at a good length and it flowed smoothly. Vocab was nice, not too much.....you kept it at a good level. I thought you got a little more creative than Curse with this. You kept your ideas clear and it made sense from beginning to end.
vote- Sabotage
return a favor please.....Mesmerize Vs. CAMROK
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=132806
Easy choice..
sabotage won..
curse, wasn't really understanding where u were coming from... ~~these are bad, in topicals or text battles, and no caps.. that's a no-no.. but other then all that, your vocab and everything else no where near compared to sabotage had.
sabotage- had real nice vocab, very nice flow... just all around nicely put together pieces from you. Clearly you're the better writer of the two.
vote- sabo.. and yea^ hit up what mesmerize posted.
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Curse = Ok i think you got the wrong idea here, you came more as a battle more than a topical. your structure and flow werent very good throughout the verse, it was kinda choppy, and ya need to clear the lines and CAPs in ya drops, it makes it look wack, Ya best part was prolly ya multis, they were good, ya vocab lacked really and not much creativity.
Sabotage = Your structure was decent, most lines were even none were really stretched. The flow was also good, the short lines helped this, vocab is this was better than curses, but it wasnt great, you kept to the topic well and it was kinda creative.
vote sab
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ayo...im not gon bitch. sabotage...good bout dawg. i cum froma battlin standpoint...so thats what i did. my fault.
good battle dawg...
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7curse ---aka--- tha lyrikal uzi
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flow:
sabotage: way good flow no glitches easy reading good 9.0
curse: not that good had a couple mistakes still you kept it goin 7.9
structure:
sabotage: way good that was good way in putin it good job on both verses for your structure 9.0
curse: kinda good these// are dumb dont use them and shorten your lines 7.6
topic:
sabotage: you stayed on topic kinda went off in a couple of lines but good job 8.8
curse: this is a topic you dont really have to hit your oppenent with punches 6.6
vote= sabotage he had most of the catagorys
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