Rookie vs kwiksand

[subway]

yo what up
im too fresh to vote yet but mine goes out to kwik
he had just more original lines than the boring im gona fuck ur mom, ur a pussy lines by rookie,
i liked the large vocab kwiksand............keep rhymin

[Allevyate]

Yo, new can't vote yet but mine goes out to quik....this line was hot:
Kwik:
Now I’m not gonna spit anything trite about ur girl or about your mama
And this verse is gonna deliver u a big blow, givin u mental trauma

Rookies best:
im gonna melt u wid my lyrics bitch like they did to vanilla ice,
ur like poppin a pill man u will get k.o'd it aint easy... uve gotta be precise

it was aight but you used wussy and pussy, didn't like that, also disuation and abortion don't rhyme

Both decent, Vote goes to Kwik

[Rookie]

dnt fuckin say ur gunna vote if u dnt man uppin........................out

[Kwiksand]

yo this is taking way too long......................we neeeeeed votes

[Distaution]

this was a good battle guys i cant vote atm but if i could it wud go to rookie he had better punches and everthing i think the lineabout vanilla ice might win it 4 him.....................

[Allevyate]

Sorry if this is considered free posting..............But i think this is a decently hot battle....gotta get some votes in here im curious how this will turn out....consider it an uppin

[Kwiksand]

neeeeeeeeeed votes
its been weeks now and we dont have one single vote
can we just giet 5 votes in here please

[÷Thìñg÷]

man this was a weak battle..........................no solid punches
no solid personals or anything that really standed out................
........................a lot of damn filler is what i saw in this battle.........
but KS had some creativity so imma say he got this...............
......................but like i said it was a blah battle both of you..........
need to elavate and try to hit with connecting punches and personals
.................................flow was off on both but it was semi decent..
well vote/KS for coming with a better overall attempt at disses and style..
and also KS stop uppin yur battle so much you might get DQed aight..
....and for rookie man better luck next time yur verse was choppy homie..
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hit my battles up.. .. ..

[Darknova]

wow, vote #1 most slept on battle of all time..

didn't really like either verse, to be honest..

rookie- is worse then a rookie, most newcomers I see are actually better then he is, rhymes so elementary, made punchs that didn't make sense together at all just to rhyme the last word, stucture was garbage, flow meh.. just really gay punches overall, it hurt reading it..

kwik- this battle was from like 2 months ago, I'm sure ur alot better now. You can probably agree this wasn't all that good... vocab u had, but it seemed u were trying to hard to fit high vocab in and in the end, it just didn't sound right in a few places.. punches did atleast hit, not hard, but hit... 10x better verse then what ur opponent used... u won cause of better everything..

vote- kwik

[...Apocalypse...]

Rookie- yu aint a rookie youra newbe you sucked ass matta fact the whole verse sucked ass your structure was wack and so was your flow no punches and no good damn personals that i saw your whole shit deservse a 3/10 it was not even enjoyable you just lost man drop the mic

Kwik sand- Your structure was not that good and your flow was a little bad I saw some persoals that were ok and no multies your vocabualary ws betta and so was your wordplay your whole verse wwas more enjoyable than his overall verse was a 5/10

Vote: Kwiksand

[Exculptifactoriusness]

Ok Rookie, it was obvious that you are a rookie.

Because your punchers and personals show it. They did not hit him and did not do any damage. Personals and punches win battles and you did not have any notable ones in this one. YOu have to elevate. Flow was off but structure was ok. Just elevate with punches.

Kwiksand you have to elevate also. But you did better in this one than rookie did. You had some decent punches, also personals were decent. FLow wasnt bad and structrue was nice. Just work on personals and punches

V/Kwiksand

[Sao The Don]

damn this was an absolute tie in my books... ABSOLUTE TIE.

[Sao The Don]

ok after a re-read, I havta say rookie was not quite as decent as kwiksand thru sentence form, structure, and wordplay..

v/kwiksand

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