..Profesor. Schul Andversun's Weather Machine

[Bigg E Z]

In December 12th, 1936, The Nazi/German Army was heavily into intelligence and had aquired the assistance of a Profesor Schul Andversun. Profesor. Andversun was a specialist in weather manipulation, and pressurised
engineering. Profesor Andversun had theoreticly solved the puzzle that had
him questioning his work, for most of his years at The University of Munich. His theory was - That man could control the weather. Scientists all over the globe laughed at this theory, Until it was proven to be ABLE.

..The Villager Near The Army Camp..

The Movement was un-natural, Soldiers kept in the base..
But the space in the Village, Overdue - But was great..
Though i was curious, The news Of Andversuns Presence..
..It was a privelige, And got me acting Adolecent..
The essence of welding steel, & The Foremans Instructions
Didnt prepare me for this sight,'Saw dramatic production..
Of towering structures, With Ionic Balls of Power..
The Suction in the air, Turned our souls more than sour..
The cowering Clouds, Over head - got us facing..
The sky as - the rain, Had the villagers racing..
Home.. We were scared, Profesore Andversun Screamin..
'Tis the Day iv been waiting, I am no longer dreaming'

This machine he created, Wiped away my whole Village..
He was controlling the weather, From god, He had Pillaged..

It was now December 20th, 1936. Profesor Schul Andversun had created the
Germans 1st weapon of mass destruction, 'Die Witterung Kraftmaschine'
- The Weather Machine.. He gave it its 1st testing on the nearby village of Hemunt'Feschl, where the local Baker, survived, & told The Berlin Times of this 'Die Witterung Kraftmaschine'..

..Standartenführer. Franz Brüvm.. (Colonel. Franz Brüvm)

Dear Meinführer, I am happy to announce success..
Our Global domination, Can start as we suppress..
The endless mess, Left by the west.. Soon to be ours..
We will eat them up like cress, As the Weapon - devours..
Mile by mile were taking land, & without the use of it..
While the allied UK troops, Fight without the news of it..
We took Russia with tactics, But the Yanks are pretty strong
The Weather Machine, Indeed will put them where they belong..
But Meinführer, Do you have plans for when its used..
Cuz we beieve u should attend, As its indeed Historic News..
I believe we are Invinsible, The machines more than a pawn..
The Nazi world can be united, After our weapon leaves it torn..

In the Midst of the night, At December 20th, 1036, Standartenführer. Franz Brüvm wrote a letter to the Meinführe, announcing the success of Nazi Germanies 1st - developed weapon of mass destruction. It was the letter on the 21st of December, 1936 that put the Allied Forces result of W.W.II into the hands of fate.. Or rather, The hands of Adolf Hitler, Standartenführer. Franz Brüvm & Profesor. Schul Andversun..

..Adolf Hitler..

Standartenführer. Brüvm, I am happy with this result..
Die Witterung Kraftmaschine, Will leave the Allies in occult..
I'v been insulted before, For my dreams of Arian life..
But isnt that better, Than German men with Jewish wives..?
Id rather wrist my self to knife, & end with my honour..
Leave the Forth of my arms marked, Like trees after scorer..
But To end this conversation, I must tell of the horror..
The Day of Christmas, Earth shall no longer be borowed..
The sorrow will be felt, But MY weapon will be used..
A German world will celebrate, A German world thats Disabused..

As Adolf Hitler rants about the 'Die Witterung Kraftmaschine', US and British
Intelligence had noticed a particular - peculiar movement pattern, gathered
around the Great Iron Ore Mines of Eastern Germany. They then relised the
roster of Scientists, & saw that Profesor Schul Andversun was on the Nazis
Pay roll. Though it was too late. It was by now The Morning of Christmas.
There was nothing the Allies could dom but guess and estimate what the
Profesor had created. They sat, Anxiously for their nightmare to be confirmed.

At 11:47am (US Mountain Time), A Huge black cloud appeard over the cities of America. News of horrific catastrophies were heard of Storms demolishing cities all over Europe. France had fallen, Spain had fallen & even worse, The UK had fallen. Every Major city had fallen victim to the great storm, Controlled by Germanies Profesor Schul Andversun. Even the smallest of towns werent spared. The death toll grew larger as the houres passed. By 22:04, (US Mountain Time) Nazi Germany had won the World War. Hitler named himseld Leader of Planet Earth, The Leader Of the Arian Race.

..Profesor. Schul Andversun..

What have i done?, Iv helped a mad man conqure earth..
..& im responsible, For the planets biggest hurt..
I diss asserted my self, From being A man of ill-nature..
There lies a machine of pure evil, & IM its Creator..
The status of human life, Is confirmed as utter scum..
Billions died, As survivors toast the day with rum..
The drum of victory is chanted?, This day makes me sick..
I agreed to winning war, But it was genocided - Inflicted..
Im reflecting on the history, I regret solving my theory..
The crime i just comited, Im not religous! It makes me eerie..
There is no way to be redeemed, I cannot justify myself..
I just relised lifes meaning, Life defies a persons wealth..
Heres to health I toast my living, Theres only one way it could end..

Adolf Hitler -

Rest In Piece Schul Andversun, Your every Arians Closest Friend..

On 23:59 (GMT), December 25th, 1936. Profesor. Schul Andversun, a specialist in weather manipulation, and pressurised engineering and the Creator of 'Die Witterung Kraftmaschine' - The Weather Machine, took a gun to his head and pulled the trigger. It was confirmed in a tribunal that Schul Andversun was mentaly unstable. His friends and family said he commited suicide, Because he could not live with what he was responsible for.

[Jonezy]

Good shit man..seen it already over MSN..but this was a dope topic, ya used great imagination, you kept a good pattern throughout the whole verse, it was creatived well man, you brought the topic out well i described it in great detail. The story descriptions in the beginnin was a good idea, it all worked well...props id say legendary myself

[Bigg E Z]

..Why Thank You My Fellow Welsh Man

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[Chris Black]

Long read, but interesting. The storytelling was good, and the flow was cool. I like the imagery. This is a concept that I have never seen. Hell, I've never seen anything close . The only thing I didn't like was the shit in bold, describing shit. I think alot of that could have been cut, and the rest could have been rhymed into the story. Besides that, this was a good piece. Keep up the good work.

My Open Mic:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=134164&page=1

-W1

[Bigg E Z]

..Will do

& Thanx for the feed =)

[Bigg E Z]

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[Bigg E Z]

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[Tactixx]

This was quite the read, but kept me interested....good job with the imagery, and excellent story-telling throughout the piece, your story unfolded nicely and the transitions were good too...The flow was nice and easy to follow, I liked the ending as well....Overall this was a good piece,I enjoyed the read......Peace...

[Bigg E Z]

..Why thank you my friend

Ill keep mu eye out forone of your pieces..

..Uppin

[+Danny Ocean+]

This was nice. it flowed smoothly and was structured well. My only critisicm is the narrative. It got long and tedious after a while. I know you were trying to tell a story, but i just thought it was a little too much. As for ur topic it was very orginal. I noticed u must have brushed up on ur german beacuse it seemed like you knew what u were talking about. The imagery started off strong, but i feel like it fell off a little at the end. You started off really strong but then u just kinda ended mediocre. Overall twas niceness and ill be looking forward to more of ur pieces.

Can u check out my Ode to a Woman in my sig.

[Bigg E Z]

..Will do my friend

Uppin..

[Bigg E Z]

..Uppin

[Endeva.]

well chris.. thats was some long ass read... i gotta say i enjoyed it, but how come it was the germans who did it... have some patriotism about you... you nazi lover... lol... j/p... nah this was real good.... you have a nice imagination going in this... tight read... my sheep hugging friend...

[Bigg E Z]

..lol @ Sheep Huggin

Anyway, Its best if you go against the grain..

..Instead of the UK/US winning the war ( Like we all know )

I was trying to ( personally, allso ) see what it would be like if the Germans won..

..Thanx for the feed though, my Jimmy Nail like friend - lol

[Bigg E Z]

..Uppin - For the last time