I like this piece it was short but it did the job. You managed to get that emotion down an keep a nice flow goin. Very emotional I like it hope theres more of it to come.
Laters.
I like this piece it was short but it did the job. You managed to get that emotion down an keep a nice flow goin. Very emotional I like it hope theres more of it to come.
Laters.
Nice I liked it very much...really liked the lines about the story for each one that yet has never been told..you shared the views of a cutter very well here I think...nice job!
Wewillfuckyouup.......er.
-me & my man Sav get the bitches quick
inconsiderate conglomerate, I got the sickest click
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Wicked. Nice Story Tellin
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^^^^LOOOL at wicked...nice drop dogg nice tellin that
dope, dope, dope, dope, dope.... vocab was nice, flow was real consistent and smooth, due to the many multis u had(surprised cats used multis here at rb seein how a majority never does, nor knows about it), imagery was real nice... I really loved reading this, you really explained the pain well, and gave a real good picture of what was happening
sick drop fam, sick drop, wish cats here posted more like this
Voice Of Da Street
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Thanks for all the feedback guys, Appreciate it...I left feedback on your piece Funk.
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Nice piece....
Line that really caught my eyes.
"As I paint the walls colorful with my silent screams"
Deep..
Nice structure , very nicley worded flow scheme.
Nice touch. Nice imagery threw out the piece.
Ok vocabulary. Unique. I read your flow with a beat
went along smoothly.
Overall nice piece. Nice flow, word scheme, and structure.
Felt your emtion on this I read other pieces from you before
I must say this was one the best I've read.
Peace
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WOW! SON THAT WAS GREAT i GOTTA GIVE IT 9.5/10
"Nymphomatics equals no Prophylactic"
"I pull my buddy out like a semi-automatic"
"I kick rhymes without a foot"
"Its only my words that got you shook"
"Her sexiness got me rising like sunrise"
"Falling like sunset thats when it seems my buddy dies"
"She makes me coffee with much sweetness from Cuba"
"I sit back like Fidel and smoke the Cheeba"
I actually really enjoyed this. The detail was great, the emotion was good. A lot of good lines in this piece.
This piece really held my attention which was cool. Well done credz. Nice to see you drop again.
Soft Focus
..Returns..
Pretty weird shit, dude...
Reminds me of the movie, Bad Dreams...
I used to know a cat like that, not as extreme, but, yeah, the self mutilating kind.
Fucked up shit, man...
Great story, great imagery and flow as well.
Really nothing to critique. You knew what you were doing, dude.
Peace
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