^ yes, he changed his name to Mr. D. Black....I'm not SURE if he did it after I posted my verse, but I know he did it before I wrote mine...I wrote mine on wordpad so I could look at other shit on the net while writing it, and I didn't realize the name change til I looked at votes today...kinda bitch move, but I don't care....The B. Black line was nice, but everyone says his name is D. Black. Which it is, but I think he changed it, but I dunno.
4-4....damn it's exciting isn't it? lol
I.J.L.
Cry me a river son, i'll tear through his 'tissue' like a fucked hymen,
Cause checking your shit got me wondering why Willium Hung started Rap rhyming,
wasn't realli feelin,decent opener..5/10
All these people can't be wrong, im winnin this shit, even you on my dick,
Because it compliments your whackness, ~wHeN yOuR NamEs wRiT oUt lIke ThiS~,
^it's okay personal,i wasnt realli feelin it,6/10
Don't care about your experience, 3 years taught you to flee first, (obvious personal)
Cause this cat needs to slip-off-my-balls, like the surgury got reversed,
^i felt flow was kind of forced here,personal was iight..6/10
He's an internet-thug, I'll merk his text and audio he'll try to fight me,
I'm telling you to stick to audio..... Thats why oPey doesnt like me,
^hmm, decent..6/10
He feels all special, he's smoka's cousin, i swear he NEVER drops it,
But theres something he failed to tell you son.. You're adopted
^this was iight personal,flow was more "on",6.5/10
Don't bitch about dickriding, because your disabled shit got you free parking,
These people aint 'bowing down to their superior MC', There just on the ground laughing..
^where did the flow go, and the punch wasnt so great either..6/10
Overral =35.5/60
I felt your flow was inconsistent at times, vocab was decent, meta's werent really there,as was wordplay, punches weren't that hard hitting and your personals were fine.
My verse is devastating, punches takin ya breath slow...
cuz ya shit is plain stupid, like musical chairs in death row...
^lol, nice witty lines i liked it,8/10
this kid's a wannabe, I'm pretty sure the voters see that...
cuz even w/ my verse burnin ya, you wouldn't B. Black...
nice personal,7/10
You're punches are old and played, like ancient recitals...
^^ which is the complete opposite, of your custom title...
nice personal,7/10
Leave you wrapped in a noose, this faggot will lose...
just no-show kid....atleast then you'll have an excuse...
played,kinda felt like it was a filler,5/10
Ya girl says that ur hung....yea just keep ya dreams ahead...
cuz tha only 9 millimeter you got, is hangin between ya legs...
nah,5/10
if semen was alcohol, then Black's liver is trashed...
cuz he's on the fag-tip, like an english ciggerate ash....*
^i never knew that meant a fag,lol,good,7/10
Overral = 39/60
Better punches and personals, vocab wasn't really their but flow and structure more on point, i think you took it...
Vote = Rapidfire
1
Lol.. that killed me more than his verse did.Originally Posted by SmokaJoka666
2.
and rapid, i changed my name for other reasons.. not for this battle....
Last edited by Elwood; July 8th, 2004 at 08:13 PM
Damn homie,
In highschool i beat the shit out of you and ya man homie,
Ya girl wanna blow me and dont even know me,
she lonely and she think you phonie,
i take a piss on a development deal from sony.
Decent battle...
Mr B you had an ok verse.. some good creativity at times... not the best flow but on point for the most part... your punches and personals weren't all that strong but you had an ample amount of them. Rapid I enjoyed reading your verse. Your punches and personals were straight forward and right to the point. You had good creativity and you were kinda witty at times. I enjoyed reading your verse so you get my vote.
Vote - RapidFire
iight....6-4...
btw I don't care about ur name change...look at the thread title if you want to see why I called him "B. Black"...
peace
I.J.L.
bump 3 and final
Damn homie,
In highschool i beat the shit out of you and ya man homie,
Ya girl wanna blow me and dont even know me,
she lonely and she think you phonie,
i take a piss on a development deal from sony.
If it aint black its wack!
V/Mr.D Black
Very nice punches, good structure and definatly good personals
Close battle, props to both.
Cry me a river son, i'll tear through his 'tissue' like a fucked hymen,
Cause checking your shit got me wondering why Willium Hung started Rap rhyming,
NO
All these people can't be wrong, im winnin this shit, even you on my dick,
Because it compliments your whackness, ~wHeN yOuR NamEs wRiT oUt lIke ThiS~,
even you on my dick?Need English lessons?Whackness punches have two possibilities either they're really hard hitting or they don't land at all...2nd
Don't care about your experience, 3 years taught you to flee first, (obvious personal)
Cause this cat needs to slip-off-my-balls, like the surgury got reversed,
stopped reading at the brackets....explaining is annoying and WHACK
He's an internet-thug, I'll merk his text and audio he'll try to fight me,
I'm telling you to stick to audio..... Thats why oPey doesnt like me,
decent
He feels all special, he's smoka's cousin, i swear he NEVER drops it,
But theres something he failed to tell you son.. You're adopted
ouch..could of hit a bit harder though..
Don't bitch about dickriding, because your disabled shit got you free parking,
These people aint 'bowing down to their superior MC', There just on the ground laughing..
NO RHYME..I'm sick of avatar,sig,user title and so on punches...
My verse is devastating, punches takin ya breath slow...
cuz ya shit is plain stupid, like musical chairs in death row...
ok
this kid's a wannabe, I'm pretty sure the voters see that...
cuz even w/ my verse burnin ya, you wouldn't B. Black...
he changed his name now but this was decent...
You're punches are old and played, like ancient recitals...
^^ which is the complete opposite, of your custom title...
NO
Leave you wrapped in a noose, this faggot will lose...
just no-show kid....atleast then you'll have an excuse...
didn't like
Ya girl says that ur hung....yea just keep ya dreams ahead...
cuz tha only 9 millimeter you got, is hangin between ya legs...
ouch....9mm..ouch
if semen was alcohol, then Black's liver is trashed...
cuz he's on the fag-tip, like an english ciggerate ash....*
NO...semen..nonononono...you shouldn't have to explain either
Rapid wins for having one more decent punch...
Vote Rapid Fire
Wewillfuckyouup.......er.
-me & my man Sav get the bitches quick
inconsiderate conglomerate, I got the sickest click
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
ok this is def rapidfire's abttle...i thought black cam alright..but then rapid smoked him...rapid had funny disses, good disses..iffy structure..but he had good disses and punches...and his verse was funny..black's vverse was good but basic, nothin really funny, nothing really good..jus ok all around....black was ok rapid was good and good is better than ok...
vote rapidfire
Bittersweet
Vote Rapid
Rapid takes this battle with punches and better personals. Both verses were pretty good but it seems that Rapid just came harder. Props to both and no hate.
vote Rapid
~RaPiDfIrE~ advances to Rd.2, closed.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
Posting Rules
