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Thread: "no Echo"

  1. #1
    Gunz -N- $tackZ
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    Exclamation "no Echo"

    Im sitting typing alone
    no noise no conversation
    no one but me
    Guided by a Thought:
    i am alone.
    no calls to interupt the thinking
    no words being spoken to hear
    no smells in my presence
    no emotions no fears
    i am alone.
    im sitting stagnant waiting for demise
    that quickly would be forgotten
    if ud only open ur eyes

    I have pictures of people
    and thoughts of places
    no actions no friends
    life makes no accomodations
    im uncomfortable with life
    im not at all at ease
    my face simply says
    dont lookat me please or ask what is wrong
    dont wonder my troubles
    assume nothing is wrong
    keep passing me by
    keep walking away
    dont hesistate just let me
    sit alone
    no words
    no noise
    no anger no. no joy
    NO ECHO
    just nothing
    but me
    and silent invisible thoughts of a boy
    (confusion but no echo.)
    21-13-0

    ~~B~~ aka Synickle AKA Str8killa



    N.T.G

    copyright2002 G.S=GUNZ& STACKZ ANY UNAUTHORIZED REPRODUCTION OF THIS MATERIAL WILL BE SUBJECT TO PENALTY UNDER LAW.

  2. #2
    ~*Lil' Miss Caramel*~ Calisto's Avatar
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    you are amazing!!!!! I love it, that's all I can say about oyur work, no peice is eva tha same as another one they alhave their strong points & different aspects I like how you were alone but happy to be alone & not sad or scared, lookin for ward to more, peace
    Formerly known as ThundaThighz
    ~*Divine Diction*~
    "...For life is not a paragraph.
    And death I think is no parenthesis"-E.E. Cummings

  3. #3
    RealityLives
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    yo i like that....deep

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