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Southend United. Championship.
R.I.P Kiyan Prince, Kill The Killers
The Foremost Authority on Real Football on RB. Fact.
I sonned this cat before.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=145984
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...12#post1706512
Last edited by Sir Tinlee Will; September 20th, 2004 at 02:43 AM
Per Se
"Fuck The He Say, She Say Shit"
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So what can you do when boys is men
Our self-image depends on the next man's scrimmage so I sin
Cause thou shalt not kill, but I tried my best
Left my fingerprints in his neck
I never understand why brothers try to act up on one another
But if the static is comin'
Fool, you won't catch me runnin'
Droppin a Quick 10... Goin into Hospital Over the Weekend so aint got time for anythin more...
Sleepin On Ya With Reason, Takin Z's Leavin One Shock,
Like Alabama After Ivan, Cept this is Worse than A White Wash.
Herbs Lost His Way, Needs Escorting but Cant Whore This,
Hate to Break to ya This Aint Your, Zone... Your jus a Tourist.
See Zone Still Stalks gay bars Attemptin to be a Men-ace,
Like Shyne, Zone still Dont seem Able enough to End a Sentence.
This Kids a Minor, More Invalid Words Than a Texas Diner,
Ive Seen herbs Like This Get Smoked Before, Go Ask Ricky Winans.
Could Only Drop Dope Shit if he smoked through his Bowels,
I Could Say You Were Flawless... If Someone Exchanged My vowels.
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Southend United. Championship.
R.I.P Kiyan Prince, Kill The Killers
The Foremost Authority on Real Football on RB. Fact.
Like I said before,
I sonned this nigga before
Nigga, is you fa`real? Zone grab the steel and slug you
And Im grateful. . . .
kid went straight to the hospital just to save me the trouble
You wack nigga, your punches' weak and your wordplay fails
Even the best bars you dropped. . . . .were purposely in jail.
Your verses match yo clothes, shiiiiiit, they both a drag
Leave you sleepin with the fishes, when I whale on fags
Aiyo, like a crackhead's piggy bank, Im leavin this guy broke
When I give him a lickin and fold his ass like envelopes
Send yo folks, Quotables is the crew I run with, bitch.
While your wins just Drift. . Cos Provoke write's yo shit
Bitch!
Per Se
"Fuck The He Say, She Say Shit"
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So what can you do when boys is men
Our self-image depends on the next man's scrimmage so I sin
Cause thou shalt not kill, but I tried my best
Left my fingerprints in his neck
I never understand why brothers try to act up on one another
But if the static is comin'
Fool, you won't catch me runnin'
damn chav merked him...zone out didnt have one standout punch..rappin about slugs and what not,..meta tore him with wordplay personals everything ...sad to say but this chav reigned over yet another rb member....yeh zone u needa elevate, u were better in ur battle with feeb word
v/ meta
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*sigh* @ noobs.
Per Se
"Fuck The He Say, She Say Shit"
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So what can you do when boys is men
Our self-image depends on the next man's scrimmage so I sin
Cause thou shalt not kill, but I tried my best
Left my fingerprints in his neck
I never understand why brothers try to act up on one another
But if the static is comin'
Fool, you won't catch me runnin'
Im sorry, but this just got under my skin.Originally Posted by I-Hova
this kid's an idiot, seriously.
Rappin about slugs? I used it once in a set up line.
he tore me with wordplay?
nigga didnt have no damn wordplay, or personals.
I hate when kids vote like this and say "he beat you with wordplay and personals"
thats like sayin his punches were better than mines in a topical battle.
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Per Se
"Fuck The He Say, She Say Shit"
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So what can you do when boys is men
Our self-image depends on the next man's scrimmage so I sin
Cause thou shalt not kill, but I tried my best
Left my fingerprints in his neck
I never understand why brothers try to act up on one another
But if the static is comin'
Fool, you won't catch me runnin'
MetaFourIcal...
Sleepin On Ya With Reason, Takin Z's Leavin One Shock,
Like Alabama After Ivan, Cept this is Worse than A White Wash.
decent, not feelin it to much though
Herbs Lost His Way, Needs Escorting but Cant Whore This,
Hate to Break to ya This Aint Your, Zone... Your jus a Tourist.
ehh.ok
See Zone Still Stalks gay bars Attemptin to be a Men-ace,
Like Shyne, Zone still Dont seem Able enough to End a Sentence.
dont like it.
This Kids a Minor, More Invalid Words Than a Texas Diner,
Ive Seen herbs Like This Get Smoked Before, Go Ask Ricky Winans.
Nope.
Could Only Drop Dope Shit if he smoked through his Bowels,
I Could Say You Were Flawless... If Someone Exchanged My vowels.
bad setup...dont like it
Zone Out...
Nigga, is you fa`real? Zone grab the steel and slug you
And Im grateful. . . .
kid went straight to the hospital just to save me the trouble
better the Meta's
You wack nigga, your punches' weak and your wordplay fails
Even the best bars you dropped. . . . .were purposely in jail.
ehh.ok
Your verses match yo clothes, shiiiiiit, they both a drag
Leave you sleepin with the fishes, when I whale on fags
dont like it
Aiyo, like a crackhead's piggy bank, Im leavin this guy broke
When I give him a lickin and fold his ass like envelopes
decent
Send yo folks, Quotables is the crew I run with, bitch.
While your wins just Drift. . Cos Provoke write's yo shit
Bitch!
better then Meta's
i see zone out winning this with better concepts and a harder hitting
verse, meta came with some ok lines that could of been better
if worded differently, same thing with the punches if the setup was
different maybe it would of hit harder...zone wins for a better verse.
V/ Zone Out
Return the favor and vote on my battle
Aight...
Meta - I wasnt really feelin ur verse, the personals were there but jus aint hittin. Wordplay was there too but again never hittin hard. Ur opener n closure was ok, but that was bout it really.
Zone - Felt ur verse more, came good wit personals n punches. Felt one or 2 of ur bars b filler, but ur opener n closure were pretty good, madd personals on em.
Vote - Zone.
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Join the thoroughest crew on RB here.
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On Vacation, Bitches.
Sleepin On Ya With Reason, Takin Z's Leavin One Shock,
Like Alabama After Ivan, Cept this is Worse than A White Wash.
nice shit...flow was nice
Herbs Lost His Way, Needs Escorting but Cant Whore This,
Hate to Break to ya This Aint Your, Zone... Your jus a Tourist.
not bad nice personal
See Zone Still Stalks gay bars Attemptin to be a Men-ace,
Like Shyne, Zone still Dont seem Able enough to End a Sentence.
Dope line...ent seen it before
This Kids a Minor, More Invalid Words Than a Texas Diner,
Ive Seen herbs Like This Get Smoked Before, Go Ask Ricky Winans.
ok
Could Only Drop Dope Shit if he smoked through his Bowels,
I Could Say You Were Flawless... If Someone Exchanged My vowels.
nice flip
Nigga, is you fa`real? Zone grab the steel and slug you
And Im grateful. . . .
kid went straight to the hospital just to save me the trouble
could of bin dope..to weak tho
You wack nigga, your punches' weak and your wordplay fails
Even the best bars you dropped. . . . .were purposely in jail.
kids never bin to jail..lol..ok
Your verses match yo clothes, shiiiiiit, they both a drag
Leave you sleepin with the fishes, when I whale on fags
no
Aiyo, like a crackhead's piggy bank, Im leavin this guy broke
When I give him a lickin and fold his ass like envelopes
not bad
Send yo folks, Quotables is the crew I run with, bitch.
While your wins just Drift. . Cos Provoke write's yo shit
nice
overall zone should of took this he had the punches but wording was weak...to be honest im voteing meta here his hit somuch harder and more personal...zone should of won but didnt word his pu cheshard enough...no hate honest vote.
plus metafourical voted for you a second ago, you forgot to add that judge.
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I liked metaphoricals verse better. And Zone already your opener was crap, calling him a nigga when he is clearly white. LoL.
Go and call me a noob but his personals and punches hit harder than yours. And I liked his similies and metaphors better than yours.
And this is not a hate vote, considering both of you have not voted on my battle. I would appreciate it if you returned the favour.
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..bleh. y'all better not bring this shit to LLL.
zone won this easily, even thought that bar/jail line was played to fuck. whale on fags kinda cool, opener was a nice personal. meta was either played like hell or just wack.
Last Word
I must last... word
Shadow, fuck off with the hate votes...
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Southend United. Championship.
R.I.P Kiyan Prince, Kill The Killers
The Foremost Authority on Real Football on RB. Fact.
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