Prohibited .v. Jonny Damen

[Jonny Damen]

ehh, jus it's default news..i spit afta u check in...g'luck

[Prohibited]

Check.. verses by midnight tonight.. 12-16 lines, house rules like i posted in bitch slapped.

[Prohibited]

I'm going to bed so here's the verse.. sorry I couldn't wait for you to drop..

Tryna play like you hard boy, you aint gangsta kid spare me
cut your achilles tendons..watch you flip-flop like john kerry
coming at me with your newbie ass, a whole eleven posts
I'll hit and run so quick you think you be seein ghosts.
You listed your location as "I'm so CHI Ya Think I'm Bashful"
sure, if CHI mean 'Crazy Homosexual Infidel'.. with an ass-full.
And uh.. your occupation, student and MC, know what that tells me?
that you're ten years old and a retard that couldn't spell beef..
post in bitch slapped, bring that whack ass style.. u be sportin.
queerest thing from the midwest since MJ.. 'n i don't mean jordan.
I was hoping for a challenge but you sorta came whack
Man I ain't been this disappointed since LL came back..
from now on boy make sure your fucked shit rhymes..
You got one shot at beating me.. If I upped six times..
lets play some poker buddy, your turn's over boss..
....Now I uhh... I call your 0-0, and raise you one loss!



gl

[killa32]

damn prohibeted that was sick will u vote for one of my battles i will return the favor when i can vote

[Jonny Damen]

1st Killa, then da Greek..now P's shoppin flames..tired of cocky lames
cool'd my aim..so, I'll put dis bitch on ice, like women's hockey games
Lay dis fuck..so far from my level u'll need postcards 2 stay in touch...
he knows how 2 beat Young Dee..too bad that aint sayin much
ya verse is dent'd..shit, even ur computer's feelin it at 40 hurtz a minute
so U have 2 options: Ride or Die…OR fuck-it..BOTH afta the Hearse is rented!!
Ace, Hov, Me maybe Rule*..Pro, u be ILL!? c'mon dude be real....
all strikeouts, batting 2-7, i guess it's not all sluggers from Louisville
K.O.K.O.K.O.K.O.K.O...it hasn't been ur year, damn dude u suck
Fuck-it, I'll be blunt..switch that 1st K 2 da back n jus give-up!!
I don't mean ur dreams of Ace's avy..but, i'd fuck dis cunt in my naps*
in dis race i'm Gordon perhaps..or the entire NasCar20, how P's comin in laps
Wit dis crap..i'm still waitin 4 da gum that comes witcha (w)raps...
Insane Joke of Lyrics..fuck a crew, ur should start a comedy club!!
most DOG'd ya mic..whats ur style Downsouth bullShitzu or Louisville Pug?
should've train'd it..then i wouldn't be scrubbin P(U) outta my rug!!

*StraightAce and I-Hova KO'd him..Rule's battlin him now
*StraightAce has an avy of a female best part...the Clitoris!
If u don't understand da rest, u shouldn't vote..simple ain't it.

[STAY-Z]

prohibited- smashed his avy real hard...
nice rhymes throughout, some good punches...
ya word play was good, showed intelligence

jonny- nice flow straight up, but yeah, ya punches were there
not really much in them, ya talkin about losses he had
but that doesnt give him the loss hes gonna have
i understand all ya rhymes, just not much to it...

vote- prohibited
and that aint dick coz i got no friends...

[I-Hova]

omg wtf is going on damen is getting hated on by all u fuckin newbs and its just a disgrace that u even exist...

here
.O.K.O.K.O.K.O.K.O...it hasn't been ur year, damn dude u suck
Fuck-it, I'll be blunt..switch that 1st K 2 da back n jus give-up!!


this line alone was better than all of prohibited's sht...but a;pt pf ur lines aree streetched and way to long shorten ur length and ull be ready in no time to battle actuall good heads...prohbited u still cant get over that hump but idk some of ur ideas were pretty good..u just needa word em better keep elevatin

v/ damen

[STAY-Z]

omg wtf? i hope ya aint referin to me I-hova
here-
You listed your location as "I'm so CHI Ya Think I'm Bashful"
sure, if CHI mean 'Crazy Homosexual Infidel'.. with an ass-full.

if that aint personal, i dont know what is, renig the vote if ya want

[Prohibited]

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[Jynx]

yo yo...one sided battle

pro-your shit was descent man..you had great structure..it was even throughout the whole thing..and your flow mixed well.your personals were about as good as they can get on noobs lol..you handled that well...good job overall

damen-your shit was wack man..i mean u tried to use multis but your words didnt go together all that well..hlaf your lines didnt make any sense..your flow was off...you had too long of lines...and you jus sucked


v/pro

[Vital Lyrics]

After I read Pro's verse I was like ... dam yo merked him, but then I read the first couple lines of damens shit and I was like... O shit we gotta battle, BUT Damens shit fell off after that like a quarter from a tower.

Pro
Started slow and finished hard, first 4 lines didnt like that much but good closure, nice punches, crazy personals, good scheme and rhyme. you def should have shit on his hair or somethin like that, Johny Damon CF Red Sox. That would have been the first thing I though of. I would try not to start out so slow out the box. everything else came hard and was on key, nice work!
fav line. "post in bitch slapped, bring that whack ass style.. u be sportin.
queerest thing from the midwest since MJ.. 'n i don't mean jordan"

Damen
everything was tight until "so u have two options" after that shit really sucked. so u did the oppisite, started hard and finished weak. I think ya'll should combo and have damen write the begining and Pro write the ending lol. I would say what threw off the ending the most was the scheme and weak punches, it felt like you were strecthing, I could feel u moaning from the pain. you had the personals effort, which is good, but they just didnt hit. keep that same effort and put a little more thought and creativeness in to it next time. work on it man.

Rhyme - Tie
Scheme - Pro
Punches - Pro
multies - damen
personals - Tie

V - Pro

[Jonny Damen]

Aight, the fuck is up...

Stay's vote - Pro
Hov's vote - Me
Madness' vote - Pro
Vital's vote - Me

And if that's the case..why is the poll - 3:1!? Correct me if i'm wrong...

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[Jonny Damen]

Somebody vote dammit...

Kiddz need 2 stop sleepin...

up, up 'n' away!!...