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Thread: my First open mic here...*a boxers thoughts*

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    Thisain'tevenmyfinalformB RXL's Avatar
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    my First open mic here...*a boxers thoughts*

    i boxed for 7 years of my life and had to quit due to a knee injury ( it got shot) but this is what basically went thru my mind everytime i would be in the locker room waiting to start the fight...


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    Laying in settled position thinking of thought out Intentions..
    Unsettled emtions of tension running my nerves Distance..
    Sit down to ease the blood flow thru deep slow breaths...
    Seat wet from Sweat dripping of my Back, Stomach and Chest..
    Trained for months to meet this day with open arms and a closed Fist...
    Now here i sit with Worry of defeat going thru my Mental Checklist..
    Dont Go Crazy wait for a clean shot try not to miss or get Counter Hit..
    Watch Your Steps Dont Skip Cause Feet Get confused and Might Trip..
    Punches in Bunches Never Single Weak shots Try not to Script....
    Mental check done time runs down and The Clocks hands Pluck Loud..
    Almost drowning out the Yells of the crowd thru the curtain and Cowl..
    The smell of wet Bodies Multiplys as the Water Beads off my WEt Skin ..
    My Hair stands on end now excited and adernaline addcition sets in..
    Humid Speech Heard Warmer Thru the Voices from My own Corner..
    Giving Talks and Rants of Past Champs and how i mimic there Former....
    Pep Talks Arent Heard Just the Clocks Hands Ticking Slower and Harder..
    I stand now Shadow Boxing Mentally project my Enemy in my Vision..
    Precision, Wits and Fists Tonight is whats gonna keep me Winning..
    Jog in Place Release Pent up Frustration in Preparation for the Long Bout..
    Heard the Bell Shocked as hell Now im Ready to Knock This Bitch OUT...






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    call out

    yo son that shit was hot i like it but ya so do u battle or what


    if u do battle was up i need some one to battle post up if u wanna iight

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    Thisain'tevenmyfinalformB RXL's Avatar
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    i dont really battle here..due do dickryders and slim compition...


    anyways...upp

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    i know u don' think murderous has better competition...
    Bittersweet

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    yo its all good kid but...........nvm holla if u change ur mind

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    "IF U GONNA TALK GANGSTA SHIT BE PERPARED 4 GANGSTA SHIT"

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sublime D
    i know u don' think murderous has better competition...
    i havint battled there in months...

    an yea they do....~BAstard~ is the best text head if ever seen.....

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    yo son if u so cold then battle right now kid come on wit it
    "IF U GONNA TALK GANGSTA SHIT BE PERPARED 4 GANGSTA SHIT"

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    very creative delivery content all factors of interest where there all and all this is fire twin we must collab sometime oh and by the way>>>>>>>>tito beat mayorgas ass viva puertoric por siempre
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Thisain'tevenmyfinalformB RXL's Avatar
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    thanx for the feed....and word tito punished that kid... .Pr Repping WOot!!

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    a spades a spade th-C's Avatar
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    Nice concept... I am an athlete so I can partly Feel what you're sayin throughout the Piece..

    Fav. Lines:
    I stand now Shadow Boxing Mentally project my Enemy in my Vision..
    Precision, Wits and Fists Tonight is whats gonna keep me Winning..

    The smell of wet Bodies Multiplys as the Water Beads off my WEt Skin ..
    My Hair stands on end now excited and adernaline addcition sets in..

    ..Consistent Flow, the only thing I would say work on is a Harder Rhyme Scheme, but overall it was pretty decent for a First OM..
    :RBman:

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    thanks....and this was done in bout 5 minutes so i guess you can say it was a freestyle...



    upping on this tho...

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