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Damn kid. Chill with that.Originally posted by Ridah
I can vote. So there.
the punches were dumb and played. you must've been on ezboard or soemthin??
they'r eplayed... trust me
Ridah
My vote goes to soulja. His punches hit harder period. No need for discussion. Intric needs to connect harder with his punches. A more complicated rhyme scheme is all you need dogg, you got nice flow. Keep elevatin. One Hunnid.
Damn.. For some reason i expectd alot more from this battle.. Punchs were basic, wordplay was none evident on Intrin's Part, soulja had some iight metaphors in there.. His rhyme scheme was alot Better, an his punchs were better overall...
I liked the food for thought line, had possiblitie to become pretty ill...
Sin, you were basic... Just reading your first two lines on both battles i could tell you were gunna lose..Extreamly weak punchs... Off flow, weak metaphors... My advice, try out the VVV for awhile, and make your verse more like the end of yours... then move up to the LLbL..
Punchs-Soulja
Meta's-^^^
Rhyme Scheme-^^^
Vocab- ^^^
Multi-tie..
vote= SOulja
OnE
INTRIN SIC
Got no sense of shame, I'm leaving Soulja slain
I see no toughness in your battle - you can't even live up to your name
ACTUALLY I WAS FEELING THIS OPENER,SETUP I THOUGHT COULD OF CAME A LITTLE MORE BETTER,BUT PUNCH REALLY HIT HARD ON HIS NAME
I got this bitch confined like a prisoner of war
If it wasn't for this free win I'd a kicked you out the door
BLAH AT THIS,NOT LIKEING IT AT ALL
Brace yourself for more, my punches are never ending
Making money like a bank, but my style is not for lending
NOT TOO BAD HERE,SETUP REALLY DOESNT GO TO WELL WITH THE PUNCHLINE,THATS WHY ITS NOT TOO EFFECTIVE HERE,BUT NOT BAD
But a bitch like you gets loaned out on a daily basis
Couldn't see your skill even if I wore a pair of prescription glasses
BLAH AGAIN NOT LIKEING THIS TYPE OF SHIT,FILLER TYPE GARBAGE MAN
Like grandparents nude, your verse is a disgusting sight
Recite your verse backwards and it'd lead to greater insight
FILLER AGAIN,NOT DOING IT HERE
Beat me in round one cause I didn't bring my A game
But I'm back to drop you cause in round one I got screwed
Your punches just lack any taste like uncooked frozen food
NOT FEELING THIS AGAIN,THIS WASNT NOT A GOOD ENDING EITHER,NEED TO COME HARD HERE,I MEAN COME HARD TOO MAKE THE READER SAY WHOA
SOULJA
I slept on u, I didn't kno this young punk could rap this clear
But i'll still leave u winded, naw, 'air-doubt' like unsure 'atmosphere'
NOT BAD,NOT TOO HARD EITHER,SETUP WAS NICE,BUT NOT TOO EFFECTIVE CAUSE I FELT THE PUNCH SHOULD OF BEEN REWORDED,BUT NOT BAD
You need to stop talkin bout cuttin me up and think of some new shit
Cuz after this Soulja's name will be echoing in ur ears like Dj Clue music
NICENESS,I WAS FEELING IT,SORTA HARD ALSO
I'll smack you, then, make u look wack with ten and i look great with eight
I just gave u food for thought..give me ur head and i'll even break the plates
AGAIN NOT BAD,ALSO NOT TOO EFFECTIVE
only he can savior ass, so i guess u ought to bless christ
or maybe not..read the bible, even jesus lost to death twice
YO THIS WAS NICE,I WAS FEELING THIS,SOME MIGHT NOT GET THIS,BUT I SURELY DID,NICENESS
pull the penis, slap bitches, rap riches, but son be poor spittin
kid i'm bout to make u drop dead faster than a clumsy mortician
BLAH AT THIS,SETUP WAS FORCED,AND PUNCH WAS WEAK
didn't wanna post for real, coward, somebody ripped ya spine from ya back
but i'm a nice guy, slatter ya brain over a couch so ya mind is relaxed
OK
test and get did, ya rhymes are weak, don't try to flex and get big
death is that kid, truth is, i'm the reason u get to have that 1 in ya sig
OK
fuck u and ya pompous spitten, just a pussy, watch the man stomp this kitten
ya mouth talk shit, but ya body movement is givin ali's hands competition
DECENT ENDING ,NOT TOO HARD HITTING BUT THE ALI COMPETITION LINE IS FUNNY HAH
BOTH VERSE WERE COOL,I THOUGHT SOULJA GOT THIS HE CAME WITH SOME NICE LINES,SOME I WASNT FEELING ALSO,INTRIN SIC CAME WITH THE GOOD OPENER BUT THE REST WERE JUST FILLER AND WEAK BASIC STUFF NOTHING TOO APPEALING.,INTRIN NEED TO WORK ON YOUR SHIT,COME MORE CREATIVE AND WITTY,THINK ABOUT YOUR SHIT LONGER THAN JUST JOT IT DONE
VOTE SOULJA
Thanks for the break down. I'm a come harder next time. I just hate battling the same MC twice. It's just no fun. So I didn't put much effort in.
UP FOR VOTES
SOULJA- 2-1
INTRIN SIC- 1-2
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