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Thread: yo im bak to bust again...

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    yo im bak to bust again...

    this rap only goes 2 the beat...boom tick boom boom ticka ticka ching boom tick boom boom ticka ticka ching(continued)...

    yo sup my bros,
    heres how it goes,
    i flows wit my nose,
    threw my garden hose,
    suppose, that ur clothes,
    got ripped, sipped,
    clipped, nipped,
    till ur ass starts to drip,
    my very good raps,
    will graze knee caps,
    my mums is soo cool,
    but i cought her fukin dad in the pool,
    so i got peed off,
    and u cant stop,
    this shit, i'll make u drop,
    knock knock knock,
    who is muuhfukin there?
    u r silly, and i dont care,
    i lick u mums pubic hair,
    till her bum bums bare,
    yeh thats tru, she has a hairy crak,
    and im goin bak,
    4 sum more,
    of that hoor,
    i even like 2 go in her backdoor, ( lol get it )
    i meoow like a cat,
    while im havin a bat,
    usin the end of my gat,
    but when it shoots,
    i shoot,
    and feel like a root,
    i think ur very mlute,(look it up in the dictionary u'll be suprised u wack pumpa rumpa traaaacey poops)

    i close by sayin,
    u'll be payin,
    my bills,
    caus be the biggest rapper throughout these hills,
    or in the mill,
    or the nill,
    ill rob ur till,
    and pop ur pills.
    till u feel like a dill,
    or till u poop ur pantys.

    i'd keep goin but i g2g my grandmas house 2 be babysat.ad if i kept goin id probly make ya'll feel shit at spittin.

    sum feedback plz. but ill understand if ur speechless from my great structure and flow.

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    die pleaze..or kill me atleast

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    yo im back to bust again...

    yo this shit reminded me of malibu's most wanted, i really hope you werent serious about this shit.... w/e

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    rhyme schematics were a little too simplistic for my liking... reminds of an amateur Bow Wow when he was still L'il... but i'm pretty sure this was a joke judgin' from ya comments at tha end... but if this is real what ya need to do is expand ya style... don't do no "cat-bat-hat-rat" rhymes... Mother Goose 'n' Doctor Seuss took care of those rhymes already...

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    y the poop do u think im plumpa rumpa not serious u wack traaaceys, go suk ur daddys poo poo hole. U dont hav 2 be mean to me.

    im just tryin as all.

    much luv ppls, and ill be bak soon 2 bust again.

    cya's, i luvs ya's all.
    heres the links...
    www.google.com and www.yahoo.com

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    ^^^^wtf

    yes ur rhming was ok,but thats it this was terrible i mean my 4 year old nephew can drop better,im sorry but u need to lenghtthen ur lines out a little so itll go smoother....but thats it you were terrible i hope you can see my points

    and maybe stop rapping
    AI

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    go so a dicky you cunty wunty troopi baddies

    You probably steal things to get money you poorie madori

    peace out my buddys

    PS i think im in luv wit this site, i cant stop thinkin bout it.

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