Oliver_Thenet (5-2) vs. Feeble Minded (5-3)

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[Deon]

im not even showing more than likely

[Richard Parker]

in..

[Deon]

im sorry.

btw

LLL is about to be officially gay . Cuz i dont like how people vote. Basically cuz people in LLL seem to be liking blatantly stated personals lately, which doesnt interest me. I'm going to join RM, where maybe someone will appreciate good wordplay. & if my wordplay isnt considered good then thats cool but im sick of people thinking blatantly stated personals (stating something someone did) > good wordplay.

i like a mix of both...shit gets stale after a while..yur wordplay be pretty good though

lol... its funny cuz people only tell me that on aim or PM... and the people who say they like it never vote

*slap*

I got the urge to show...Keyin


I mean geez, dude its no secret, that convo between you and I....
Gave you dope visions....of first signing off and then committing suicide
And the truth is... i was an example you dope
Of a dude who peeps your verses and never gets the urge to vote
So I'll smash this rook, your best bet is to look forward and run
Cuz your 'info' a beating... worse than booga gave you on '411'
Now that-there is a problem, this is as blatant as it gets
Cuz if your skill speaks for itself, its been a while since its said shit
Lets see if you make playoffs idiot, its not this guys time
Cuz his verse only 'stanza' chance....if the fuckin 'lines rhyme'
Yo get the fuck outta here chump...your style is sound?
Not even, at FS...shit,EVEN I MADE IT OUT OF THE FIRST ROUND
Kid cant get with me, This one here will eff'n slay ya songs
Cuz I aint heard shit nice from FM, since XM Radio came along
You dont want it with me, i'll leave you shanked up
Cuz if feeble minded his own business, that bitch would prob. go bankrupt
Tough break bitch, Its near the end, you seriously had me?
Nah,cuz now..
Everyone'll watch feeb's never return, like the Friends series finale




w/e G'luck

[Richard Parker]

g'luck..

Lets see if you make playoffs idiot, its not this guys time
Cuz his verse only 'stanza' chance....if the fuckin 'lines rhyme'
Yo get the fuck outta here chump...your style is sound?
Not even, at FS...shit,EVEN I MADE IT OUT OF THE FIRST ROUND
Kid cant get with me, This one here will eff'n slay ya songs
Cuz I aint heard shit nice from FM, since XM Radio came along

your not creative, & u know you'll lose so u damn competing,
and Av's a poetic expert, but he still can't stanza beating ..

feeble can't make it off Rb, shows his keys to vylint
& now look at him, HE'S LOSING HIS BATTLE ON FREESTYLING

Feebs is phoney like Shallow Hal .. but you'll learn you cant Play me bro
cause i'll kill all the Noise from FM....like turning off the Radio..

fuck accusations...my biggest fan is what u hope to be
get this: he conveniently forgot to say he was quoting me
my punches stay strong..every volley pesters
you'll foam at the mouth, cuz my shoes are made of polyester
your jealous, making shit up to be clever n win
thats why he said im in his league which i've never been in..
severing shins, i erased his career n left him behind
bitch, your bloody clothes'll be the only thing left on the line
you aint good, whered u get the notion to start shit?
you even failed to accomplish KOing lethargic
L or W? with no effort i'll give this slut the former
they say he's got the edge.. this week im cutting corners
he boasts every min.. i got problems, mostly with him
n he lives in detroit, he'll never coast to the win..
olivers mostly absurd.. we're sick of quoting these herbs,
he'll be the first one to face me & not get a vote from emerge
tell the league ur sorry for sucking- dont follow me son
the next letter oliver types will be an apology one

[Deon]

good showing....i aint even read your battles.....thus me not knowing....lol

[Born To Kill]

I kinda think Feeble ate this shit up...

Oliver, seriously...I've seen all ya concepts before.
Not accusing you of flipping or biting or even recycling...
Just saying you didn't come very original. That's all.

You still had dopeness though...

And the truth is... i was an example you dope
Of a dude who peeps your verses and never gets the urge to vote
You dont want it with me, i'll leave you shanked up
Cuz if feeble minded his own business, that bitch would prob. go bankrupt

Niceness...

But the radio, Friends, stanza, info...

Is old, man...sorry.

Feeble came "sounding" alot like Eminem in my head for some reason.
Similar wit and punches.
Like the opener, I could easily see him saying that...
I dunno if that's dope or a bit disconcerning.

Anyway...

fuck accusations...my biggest fan is what u hope to be
get this: he conveniently forgot to say he was quoting me
my punches stay strong..every volley pesters
you'll foam at the mouth, cuz my shoes are made of polyester
olivers mostly absurd.. we're sick of quoting these herbs,
he'll be the first one to face me & not get a vote from emerge

Harder...wittier.

BTW, I know, somewhere, I beat you to the "cuttin corners" line.
Mine has something like, "turn a square into an octagon, cuz I'm known to cut corners"...But, the punches were totally different in delivery...not the same concept at all.

Well, that's that.

Vote: Feeble

[Emerge]

All I will say is good battle good personals from Thenet and some
decent flips creative... FM and stanza ive seen as well as others

feeble had that monster line about me which could get this battle
into legends

so therefore

Vote - Me

[Richard Parker]

Feeble - 1 Emerge - 1 Oliver - 0

[Sergio...]

And the truth is... i was an example you dope
Of a dude who peeps your verses and never gets the urge to vote

vs.


fuck accusations...my biggest fan is what u hope to be
get this: he conveniently forgot to say he was quoting me
severing shins, i erased his career n left him behind
bitch, your bloody clothes'll be the only thing left on the line
you aint good, whered u get the notion to start shit?
you even failed to accomplish KOing lethargic
olivers mostly absurd.. we're sick of quoting these herbs,
he'll be the first one to face me & not get a vote from emerge



Yup yup


vote=Feeble Minded.

[Emulated.]

So I'll smash this rook, your best bet is to look forward and run
Cuz your 'info' a beating... worse than booga gave you on '411'
Now that-there is a problem, this is as blatant as it gets
Cuz if your skill speaks for itself, its been a while since its said shit
You dont want it with me, i'll leave you shanked up
Cuz if feeble minded his own business, that bitch would prob. go bankrupt

vs.

my punches stay strong..every volley pesters
you'll foam at the mouth, cuz my shoes are made of polyester
severing shins, i erased his career n left him behind
bitch, your bloody clothes'll be the only thing left on the line
or W? with no effort i'll give this slut the former
they say he's got the edge.. this week im cutting corners
tell the league ur sorry for sucking- dont follow me son
the next letter oliver types will be an apology one

v/Feeble

[$pitacular]

vote - Feeble.

'merge, your vote don't count hoe, your opinion of text is not respected... and only league votes count so

emerge - 0

Feeble - 4

Oliver - 0

t'was some old stuff homie, and Feeble came in blazin.

[Deon]

word, it was keyed......it all came too easy but i didnt wanna no show so i just dropped what came to mind first instance

i wasnt feelin feebs verse, some good shit here and there,but with some of my shit being playd his was better......pz

[Elwood]

olivers mostly absurd.. we're sick of quoting these herbs,
he'll be the first one to face me & not get a vote from emerge

*dead*

[shadows.edge]

Now that-there is a problem, this is as blatant as it gets
Cuz if your skill speaks for itself, its been a while since its said shit
Tough break bitch, Its near the end, you seriously had me?
Nah,cuz now..
Everyone'll watch feeb's never return, like the Friends series finale

Nice...

You dont want it with me, i'll leave you shanked up
Cuz if feeble minded his own business, that bitch would prob. go bankrupt

lmao

I think this was closer than other people make it out to be... feeble fed which takes some points off, but his verse was still better in my eyes, by a small margin.

v. feeble