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Thread: Back4More

  1. #1
    gem n eye
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    Back4More

    PBK
    3D Gay
    Three peice page
    Need me say?
    Semen stains on his keyboard, from jerkin off eboards
    I sleepZZZ snore, tryin to read your meaningless peice, bored
    Geek- corned, and prolly wrote before your whole cheap score
    Keep stormin gordy, beat me till I cant read more
    But each thorn to try to stick at me, I'll just eat four
    Wont cheat, nor- will I try to keep you from reward
    I'll give you all the props you need, defeat this elite born
    Street soldier, breaching through the war like a peace corp
    And Peanut Butters grip just wont unstick from my dick
    I couldnt even get him off me if bread and jelly was piss
    He wishes his shit, was somethin more, but it's at its end
    His spit is a trend
    Quick fixed, he digs eminem
    He's a gitty la femme bitch boy who never gives in
    I gotta gritty little tick-toy to give him for Christmas
    Cuz I will never be afraid of fuckin PBK
    I gotta a three speed rake to dig a knee deep grave
    They call me, 'He be Dave'
    I gotta beat free spray
    You need a meat cleaved blade to beef with me these days
    Dont need a PVC pipe to make a bomb
    I just speak/write
    Luftwaffe.com couldnt email me a sneak flight
    I mighta joked around
    My boats aground, I cant think right
    But when it comes to clownin
    I just fool around, kick a freesty-le
    Im a battle repeat white ungrounder in clean tights
    Im bound for skies like a string kite
    And up so high I just keep flight
    Rewrite, I know your secret weapon's a note pad
    I throw jabs without molded flows or a 'vocab'
    Dont need a scrapbook to battle foes who just go grab
    Some older shit they wrote, and put my name in, its so sad

  2. #2
    gem n eye
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    Do you imagine how you would spit this on tape? It wouldnt happen, once again, when you nubs write rhymes you gotta whink how yer gonna spit it.-O'Fortune


    First of all, I wouldnt write something I couldnt rap. That doesnt happen.
    Second, just because you might not be able to rap it doesnt mean the actual person who conjured it cant, try to have a bit more imagination about it. It's people like you that keep this a single minded industry. Whink about it.

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    The True Psycho of RB
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    ya flow is tight, these were some average battle rhymes though, keep writing and you'll improve post up some deeper stuff that's wat most head's like on here.
    return the favour reply to my new post.

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=160700

  4. #4
    that was hot

  5. #5
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    i liked this man. was pretty funny, had a nice flow to it. punches were nice too

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    tonguetwista
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    hey man this was pretty good...but the structure was weak. good vocab, but fix the structure and elevate and youll be money

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    u pretty ill will puttin words together...i like ya style, similar to mine...check it out at...http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...20#post1919320
    Last edited by PII; December 20th, 2004 at 10:55 AM
    PART II

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    and i feel u player, cuz peeps always told me that in audio it wouldnt work, but it neva stopped me...i didnt get to read about whoeva said it wouldnt go together on audio...but if u didnt write it, there so many way to lay down a verse, thats its basically impossible to say it aint gunna work in audio unless none of ya shit rhymes...so fuck the haters...but i bet half here cant touch u lyrically...from what i seen anywayz...
    PART II

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    Predatorian
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    good flow but rest was average... keep elavting though

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    deine mutter BeRLin`S BesT's Avatar
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    i thought this was pretty tight...was a funny read...but plz stop the beefin'....just battle...pz
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  13. #13
    gem n eye
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    thanx yal, I appreciate the support and insight.

    To: Berlins Best- You need beef to battle and a battle makes beef. If youre still talking about my 3day spree with PBK, get over it, we truced a long time ago. This is an industry of competitivness, if people cant handle being harranged consistantly, no matter how annoying, then they need to take up pottery or cooking or sumthin else for a hobby.

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    deine mutter BeRLin`S BesT's Avatar
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    I hear ya but it's just annoying if it goes on for some time...I find beefin at times pretty amusing myself but one doesn't need to overdo it...pz
    Hit N Run

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    this was pretty coo diss. keep elevating, I liked the flow it was constent, had some coo punches.. favorite were the first 2 lines.. to me I laughed alil.. good diss.

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