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Thread: 2 Different Views On Life.. ft Seklusion

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    2 Different Views On Life.. ft Seklusion

    Seklusion:
    …And ever since life ran headlong into the dead end
    Been salvaging all my lost dreams in heaven
    I planned to do some big spendin', wanted to give back
    They all feign being broke, but I lived that
    No child were to go hungry, showered with food so lovely
    Never should they ask, "Why doesn't anyone love me?"
    Trust me, my impact on society would remain eternal
    Jotting down my verbal, preaching it to your girl
    Changing the world, please don't get my message mixed up
    I praise hate, but I wanted to get this place fixed up
    Living under democracy- steadily ruled by the government
    No free speech, no guns- you're ruled by other men
    Anonymous victims- the country just went and slaughtered race
    Think about that next time you let the Pres. kiss your daughter's face
    Remember- it was thousands of people who favored him
    Shipping you off to die alongside your neighbor's kids…
    Wrapping our corruption across a country like a piece of foil
    To the victor is the spoils- and I hope you're happy with your oil.

    Viscosity:
    Seemed I was up & down, but lost in insanity
    spent my last years.. losing the man in me..
    its hard for others to see.. listen or believe
    but hate, is love.. others just procure wat it seems
    the best structure, can collapse & end dreams
    mine came crashing from its seams, with lost density
    disaster struck & took me from my family
    vanished from profanity, & lost in society
    nothing left to lose, except my peers & loved ones
    but what a price to pay, speically, when you have none...
    cold & split in two ways, trapped, & finished life as a bum..
    hit lifes verbs, & splash humanity, grasp whats there to take..
    lost in tracks, no where to run or hide.. lifes hard as a man..
    but easier as a boy.. cause no one cares, when a no name dies..
    suspected, to try and hit the britches, no one wanted to speak..
    chattering teeth.. & tears, falling from woman & males cheek, a like..
    a no name, no one, with so many fans in the world..
    tripped on lifes hurtles, but won the meet.. & finally occupied his seat.

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    dun worry mods.. ill get my replys up.. I know the rules..

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    upp... damn im just asking for a quick reply..

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    sek had a very positive poetic vibe to the verse chaneling a real sence of hope.some lines were very basic but this is a rare time i think that it6 benefitted the actual lyrics and overall tone of the song.
    vis gave a different or should i say opposite vibe almost a more ruggid aproach of destroying the others intended message .though the topics dont blend u found a way to make it not important and both trojected great lyrical ability with only minor inconsitancies. 8/10
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    ^thankyou for an honest reply.. I knew you'd be replying.. your ill like that
    good looks

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    This was a good collab like both of ya'lls vocab and rhymes....had some real deep ones in there...displayed lots of emotion in this piece...like how u guys dropped this one be lookin forward for more from u two....holla back

    return some feed on-Shit hits da fan plz

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    ight.. I will. goood looks

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    that was good dude, although somethings were very basic, they still worked... I think you put some emotion into this... good job dude... 8/10
    pz

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    that was good..i'm diggin' it

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