When im on the mic i spit rhymes u cant top,
You tell me "you won, dude you know u can stop
Just cause im small,
and not that tall
You all gonna trip,
when you read my rhymes you gonna get sick
you will end up on your knees suking my Dick
So fuck you all if you think im queer
you know i am the one who you all fear.
Why are you making so many alias, im done with the hate... Just choose one, keep droppin and elevate...
Peace
Last edited by Novacain; January 18th, 2005 at 02:25 PM
Check out the help section. This needs a lot of work. If this was a freestytle, post some writtens. Work at it.
this flow was choppy as hell man. there is no multis at all in this piece and wordplay was real simple. im glad you didnt write nemore cuz i prolly wouldnt be able to read it.
So fuck you all if you think im queer
you know i am the one who you all fear
could be written as
So fuck you all thinkin im queer
ya know im the one who you all fear
mesching words together help alot with flow
You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.
Bad egg dude, u need to improve big time before u go on. Maybe read some of the other open mics. It took me awhile.. congratulations.. ur the old me.Good luck bro..
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I'm sorry i hated it man!!
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Hung Like A Horse
ok well it took me a minute... thanks for replies
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