20 lines you spit first!!
skool kid
HoT_SiZzLe
20 lines you spit first!!
:hung:
Hung Like A Horse
This rappin business is fricken fun,
we know u cant rap so you come wit a gun/
you hate us when we say it,
but you know its true what we sayin/
your a poser
you always wanna fight,
you aint worth my time,
you think you make money on the street,
heres a dime/
I will fuck you up,
dont think you wont see,
when you listen to the radio,
soon it will be me/
but lets not sit around here and talk about our dreams,
you cant always win the battle,
life aint what it seems/
im gonna finish this rap sayin that you cant spit,
we all know it, so dont lie and say your the shit/
That was my rap from my heart and my soul,
about you and how you type all that bull.
IM OUT
skool kid,
Skool kid I can't believe you wanna battle,
you are a kid lemme give you ur rattle,
Mess with me I'm like snowstorm,
Don't tell i suck when you can't perform,
You just like bowlin' pins to me,
I'll take your ass out quick and easy,
I am best, never had test, yet,
My rhymes so good I will win this i bet,
Whitey's here and on the attack,
Like a knife that's cuttin' through yo back,
This win will be simple, your a kid,
U just hit puberty and got some pimples,
This ain't a lil' kid playground, this is da big time,
why don't you write something that actually rhymes,
I'm the bus driver, here to deliver you,
back to your rappin place that I call school,
I'm # 1,
Leave it to kid to get it done,
Sry kid it sure was fun,
I gotta bounce, The winner has been announced me im out!!
:hung:
Hung Like A Horse
We need feedback plz our rhymes may not be good but tell us who is better and vote plzplzplzplz thanx uppin!!
:hung:
Hung Like A Horse
yah just let this busta know i won please reply woot woot
technicaly i cant vote, but heres what i think...
school kid...
This rappin business is fricken fun,
we know u cant rap so you come wit a gun/
you hate us when we say it,
but you know its true what we sayin/
weak, but alright
you always wanna fight,
you aint worth my time,
you think you make money on the street,
heres a dime/
I will fuck you up,
dont think you wont see,
when you listen to the radio,
soon it will be me/
but lets not sit around here and talk about our dreams,
you cant always win the battle,
life aint what it seems/
this whole part had meaning but you fucked it all up. learn to place your shit in the right spot.
im gonna finish this rap sayin that you cant spit,
we all know it, so dont lie and say your the shit/
That was my rap from my heart and my soul,
about you and how you type all that bull.
decent ending, but not impressive.
Hot sizzle...
Skool kid I can't believe you wanna battle,
you are a kid lemme give you ur rattle,
battle and rattle are the weakest rhymes and not to mention the easyist. you should said somthing about, he's a kid and your taking his rattle.
Mess with me I'm like snowstorm,
Don't tell i suck when you can't perform
that was aight
You just like bowlin' pins to me,
I'll take your ass out quick and easy,
wow someone knows how to use analagies!
Whitey's here and on the attack,
Like a knife that's cuttin' through yo back,
more analigies.
I'm the bus driver, here to deliver you,
back to your rappin place that I call school,
good
I'm # 1,
Leave it to kid to get it done,
Sry kid it sure was fun,
I gotta bounce, The winner has been announced me im out!!
aight ending, but you were right you were the winner, but not #1.
both of you up your game. Hot sizzle used metas and shit so you pretty much took it.
peace.
keep reppin the north sizzle-oh yeah vote on my battle with jakit.
cmon yall please reply
our raps may be wack,
but we know u all got our back
cmon yall please reply
our raps may be wack,
but we know u all got our back
Dude u guys both suck at rapping... ur embarressing our white supremacy
hot sizzle... i hope you realize that your rhymes are played out and weak.
whiteys back on the attack... heard that one a lot
neither one of you were great but the kid deffinately wins... peace
"Darkness can not drive out darkness;
only light can do that.
Hate can not drive out hate;
only love can do that." -Martin Luther King Jr
damn. trigger picked the kid, im in shock 4realz, wtf is goin on?
uppin on this piece cmon y'all killas vote up in here!!!
:hung:
Hung Like A Horse
i cant vote.......... buyt hot sizzle won this...... better vocab, structure, and u used some metas..... i wouldnt mind battlin either of u pretty soon...... either of u wanna go?? it would be a quick 10-12 lines, but anyways.... skool kid didnt really have much but an ok flow..... but u didnt really attack him or anythin or use any metas
ohhh, and if either of u an vote i wouldnt mind on in my battle in the sig
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Originally Posted by F-ROQ. (famous)
this battle is wack, thas the shortest description, sizzle ive seen much better from you - wtf is goin on??
skool kid, i ent suprised you got that name.... wat in the fucking world are you on?
This rappin business is fricken fun,
we know u cant rap so you come wit a gun/
you hate us when we say it,
but you know its true what we sayin
this is played about- god dont even know how many times,
and the vocabs shit, if that was to me, id reply with a laugh fuck a rap your a waste of words
your a poser
you always wanna fight,
you aint worth my time,
you think you make money on the street,
heres a dime/
this was a good rhyme and a good flow but over the top of that - it was shit vocab yet again
I will fuck you up,
dont think you wont see,
when you listen to the radio,
soon it will be me
i spy a lil self glory in that, but like always - shit word usage, and also there wasnt any punch (if there was, it wasnt comin from you)
but lets not sit around here and talk about our dreams,
you cant always win the battle,
life aint what it seems
it had better word usage than the rest of the verse put together, but was played and didnt quite flow with any visible point to it.
im gonna finish this rap sayin that you cant spit,
we all know it, so dont lie and say your the shit/
That was my rap from my heart and my soul,
about you and how you type all that bull.
oh no. oh dear god no. that was painful. finishin the rap sayin he cant spit is sumthin u shud have done mid-verse, if anywhere, and you sounded like you were desperate for rhymin words when you say 'we all know it, so dont lie and say your the shit'
what school are you in? nursery? even old mother hubbard had a better flow than you, my little 3 year old brothers stood here laffin his ass off at your poetry, and my one eyed hamster thinks its a verse of ass.
there is no point in giving a breakdown of sizzles verse, coz he merked you hands down wether his spit was wack or not, if you ever want to battle me skool kid, make sure one of the rules is 'no limericks' , coz your kiddy rhymes are too advanced for rapbattles.com, i think most fairytale characters would agree with that. tch.
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