-Twizted- vs. -Moe-

[Facts Machine]

10 lines
due asap
house rules
dont feed or cheat or ever pull a stunt like that again, and get me dq'ed by cel, or i will bann u from my BO forum.+

[Ike Ill.]

*falls over laughing*

whats crackin yo?

oh yeah, me. Drop soon Moe lmao

[Facts Machine]

Go to church, try to avoid the verse of the slit throat,
Feel Blessed? well that was ever since i left u holy like the pope,
You can't match my skills, your soft enough to squeeze,
Cuz Twizted isn't a tornado, he's more like a breeze,
Snitch got me DQ'd, went to Cel, BO leader says your a bitch,
So if my roster was a chair, i'd break all their legs so u can get off our dicks,
Fuck your location, what does south earn? kid ain't scary man,
Cuz even if this was a hip-hop wedding, no one would maryland,
Your liven in a fantasy, there's no servings your handen,
Cuz even if u was in The Real World, ur punches wouldn't be landon,

Twiztids hole: man I love ya crew
Twiztids hole: I support you
Twiztids hole: and your peeps
Twiztids hole: my homies in the crew

[Ike Ill.]

Aight Listen Yo...

Stickin ya dick in a faucet means ya retarded... Not gettin flow
Got screwed-over-raps..Now there's no way this kid disclaimin hoe.
Wackness must be margarine the way "I Cant believe its not butter"
The only way this kid gettin wicked wit a 9 is if he an elite putter.
Collab? Shit dawg ya wouldnt diss this if you was tossin Big Macs!
Like your trying to rap formal the way everything you drop slacks.
Bring a razor blade and a diss, you just goin out like Kurt Cobaine
Draggin ya ass in here with a broken leg.................
.................The only way you bringin the pain.
I'll slap a charlie horse on your verse, and cramp your whole style
Kid no one would feel ya shit even if the peeps readin was pedophiles.

[Iniquitous.]

^ you recycled twizted what the fuck is that?

[Ike Ill.]

Its called, the battle that the line was in got frozen and in mod's rules that is allowed to be used again.

[Exculptifactoriusness]

Your liven in a fantasy, there's no servings your handen,
Cuz even if u was in The Real World, ur punches wouldn't be landon,

vs

Wackness must be margarine the way "I Cant believe its not butter"
The only way this kid gettin wicked wit a 9 is if he an elite putter.
I'll slap a charlie horse on your verse, and cramp your whole style
Kid no one would feel ya shit even if the peeps readin was pedophiles

usualyl i dont like lines like Twisted's closer, but today i did for some reason. H20 had some really sketchy and choppy lines, and some of your lines were too too simple. use better concepts. Your closer was dope tho.

Twisted, you did decent here, use better concepts also, but you had some decent punches, some of your lines were decent, but some were simple also. You had more quotables in your Verse.

V/Twisted.

[Young News]

Since I don't have 100 posts Imma leave my feedback and keep it movin......

Go to church, try to avoid the verse of the slit throat,
Feel Blessed? well that was ever since i left u holy like the pope,
^^^^NIce opener...but that punch is old
You can't match my skills, your soft enough to squeeze,
Cuz Twizted isn't a tornado, he's more like a breeze,
^^^^Decent
Snitch got me DQ'd, went to Cel, BO leader says your a bitch,
So if my roster was a chair, i'd break all their legs so u can get off our dicks,
^^^^Didn't get the second line...but it was funny you brought up the DQ
Fuck your location, what does south earn? kid ain't scary man,
Cuz even if this was a hip-hop wedding, no one would maryland,
^^^^The second line was a good attempt but it could've been reworded better
Your liven in a fantasy, there's no servings your handen,
Cuz even if u was in The Real World, ur punches wouldn't be landon
^^^^NONONO...that was lame

Twizted verse

Stickin ya dick in a faucet means ya retarded... Not gettin flow
Got screwed-over-raps..Now there's no way this kid disclaimin hoe.
^^^^The first line was tough.. can't say the same about the second
Wackness must be margarine the way "I Cant believe its not butter"
The only way this kid gettin wicked wit a 9 is if he an elite putter.
^^^Back to back fire...loving that
Collab? Shit dawg ya wouldnt diss this if you was tossin Big Macs!
Like your trying to rap formal the way everything you drop slacks.
^^^^Didn't get the first line but the second one was good
Bring a razor blade and a diss, you just goin out like Kurt Cobaine
Draggin ya ass in here with a broken leg.................
.................The only way you bringin the pain.
^^^^Decent
I'll slap a charlie horse on your verse, and cramp your whole style
Kid no one would feel ya shit even if the peeps readin was pedophiles
^^^^Good finish

Vote would've went to Twizted. His verse was more direct...the punches were on point and it flowed up until I reached Kurt Cobain. Moe's verse was good but the punches could've been better.

[Assazin]

Originally posted by:-Moe-
Go to church, try to avoid the verse of the slit throat,
Feel Blessed? well that was ever since i left u holy like the pope,
^^OK OPENER
You can't match my skills, your soft enough to squeeze,
Cuz Twizted isn't a tornado, he's more like a breeze,
^^WEAK USAGE OF THE NAMEPLAY
Snitch got me DQ'd, went to Cel, BO leader says your a bitch,
So if my roster was a chair, i'd break all their legs so u can get off our dicks,
^^OK PERSONAL
Fuck your location, what does south earn? kid ain't scary man,
Cuz even if this was a hip-hop wedding, no one would maryland,
^^AIGHT PERSONAL
Your liven in a fantasy, there's no servings your handen,
Cuz even if u was in The Real World, ur punches wouldn't be landon,
^^NICE ENDING

Originally posted by:-Twizted-
Stickin ya dick in a faucet means ya retarded... Not gettin flow
Got screwed-over-raps..Now there's no way this kid disclaimin hoe.
^^OK OPENER
Wackness must be margarine the way "I Cant believe its not butter"
The only way this kid gettin wicked wit a 9 is if he an elite putter.
^^NICE LINE
Collab? Shit dawg ya wouldnt diss this if you was tossin Big Macs!
Like your trying to rap formal the way everything you drop slacks.
^^NICE WORDPLAY...AND PERSONAL
Bring a razor blade and a diss, you just goin out like Kurt Cobaine
Draggin ya ass in here with a broken leg.................
.................The only way you bringin the pain.
^^1ST LINE IS PLAYED...2ND LINE WAS MEH
I'll slap a charlie horse on your verse, and cramp your whole style
Kid no one would feel ya shit even if the peeps readin was pedophiles.
^^AIGHT

V/-Twizted-
for having more disses....and having more wittiness....plus he had excellent set up's wit aight ending's................

hit the link back pz......................

[Stat.]

Well I dont have enough post to poll my vote so, heres just what i think of the battle,

-MOE-(aka h2o)
Go to church, try to avoid the verse of the slit throat,
Feel Blessed? well that was ever since i left u holy like the pope,
^^Pretty good punch, ive heard simular thins though

You can't match my skills, your soft enough to squeeze,
Cuz Twizted isn't a tornado, he's more like a breeze,
^^Lol, that was a good punch

Snitch got me DQ'd, went to Cel, BO leader says your a bitch,
So if my roster was a chair, i'd break all their legs so u can get off our dicks,
^^Nice punch and personal

Fuck your location, what does south earn? kid ain't scary man,
Cuz even if this was a hip-hop wedding, no one would maryland,
^^Nice personal, okay punch

Your liven in a fantasy, there's no servings your handen,
Cuz even if u was in The Real World, ur punches wouldn't be landon,
^^Eh i didnt like this punch too much
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-Twizted-
Stickin ya dick in a faucet means ya retarded... Not gettin flow
Got screwed-over-raps..Now there's no way this kid disclaimin hoe.
^^Eh not bad

Wackness must be margarine the way "I Cant believe its not butter"
The only way this kid gettin wicked wit a 9 is if he an elite putter.
^^Lol that was nice

Collab? Shit dawg ya wouldnt diss this if you was tossin Big Macs!
Like your trying to rap formal the way everything you drop slacks.
^^Not bad, actually pretty good

Bring a razor blade and a diss, you just goin out like Kurt Cobaine
Draggin ya ass in here with a broken leg.................
.................The only way you bringin the pain.
^^Good punch

I'll slap a charlie horse on your verse, and cramp your whole style
Kid no one would feel ya shit even if the peeps readin was pedophiles.
^^Good punch
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This was a good battle both of you did well, Twizted had a lot of good punches and h2o(-MOE-) did too. So when it came to punches it was pretty even but slightly in Twizteds favor. However Twizted had no personals. H2o(-MOE-) combined punches with his personals, and he had a lot more personals then twizted. Therefor my Vote would go to h2o(-MOE-).

VOTE:h2o(-MOE-)

[Facts Machine]

uppin 1

yo crucial, i got a feeling that ur on an alias, can u poll on ur old name?
anyways thx for the breakdowns.

[Ike Ill.]

Uppin' 2 leave links for me and Moe we'll get ya back.

[horseman]

both decent verces but i feel twizted was better with his structure and his punches so ima vote twizted.

v twizted

check out this battle and vote Raid-R V.S. horseman peace

[Ike Ill.]

Uppin' #3 thanks... Leave a link people....

[Stat.]

Twizted could you hit up this link i left a breakdown^^up there
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=168403
Please and thank you.........