10-12 LinEs
HouSe RulES
DrOp wiThin A hALf HOur OF chEcK iN
SinAmen
DyMoNiK
10-12 LinEs
HouSe RulES
DrOp wiThin A hALf HOur OF chEcK iN
i'll have you saying your prayers...cuz if you SIN you say AMEN...
how you claim you g...when the g's you hanging wit is some gaya men...
queers is all that you been knowing...queer is the only way that you been flowing...
flash what i got tucked next to abdomen...
just as i pull out my knife and im stabbing em...jabbing em...
he runs away...dammit i just had AMEN...
i hope you at my work when you want to masticate...(EAT)
cuz in your food is when imma masterbate...its flaccid weight...
alone is enough to over flow your spit...dont ever show your shit...
dont let know one know your clique...
cuz it would be a SIN to be in your crew...can i get an AMEN...
when its proved to be true...can i get it AGAIN!!!....
LOL @ That.
Look you little buster, being straight-wack is known to be a parody
Cuz thats the why ya made fun of when your standing next to me.
Kid cant see..Hes practically giving prayers when he says my name
And yeh this bitch chews bazookas..Cuz thats his only "wrap" game.
Ya lame..Peeps dont gotta eat letters to know they cant stomache "u"
Kid... You
Could shovel ya crap on traffic and still not get his shit on the move.
He got something to prove..That the DyMoNiK CAN come "Weak As Hell"
When his beef is faked outta improvement and Grade C like Taco Bell.
Bitch just smells..Dig in purgatory before ya verse makes a big heep
Cuz its like this kids a crazy ass vet the way he puts dawgs to sleep.
Ready to fuck this peep...You failed to attack me properly, aight man?
Cuz you just breaking the propellers..WHEN YOUR SHIT HITS THE FAN.
dymonik-your verse was average you played his name not too well like amen was used once poretty good seconds badly...punches decent,personals were attempts,flow n struct. was decent
4/10
twiz-punches were good,personals attempts,flow n struc. good
7/10
v-twiz
Life Is 10% What Happens To You;
90% How You React To It.
Dymonik:
i'll have you saying your prayers...cuz if you SIN you say AMEN...
how you claim you g...when the g's you hanging wit is some gaya men...
^^nah man
queers is all that you been knowing...queer is the only way that you been flowing...
^^wtf.....
flash what i got tucked next to abdomen...
just as i pull out my knife and im stabbing em...jabbing em...
he runs away...dammit i just had AMEN...
^^NO
i hope you at my work when you want to masticate...(EAT)
cuz in your food is when imma masterbate...its flaccid weight...
^^WTF!
alone is enough to over flow your spit...dont ever show your shit...
dont let know one know your clique...
^^Horrible structure..........
cuz it would be a SIN to be in your crew...can i get an AMEN...
when its proved to be true...can i get it AGAIN!!!....
^^Even if he didnt drop he wouldve won.......whole verse was weak imo.
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SinAmen:
Look you little buster, being straight-wack is known to be a parody
Cuz thats the why ya made fun of when your standing next to me.
^^Good
Kid cant see..Hes practically giving prayers when he says my name
And yeh this bitch chews bazookas..Cuz thats his only "wrap" game.
^^eh i heard a lot of word play of rap and wrap already seemed played to me
Ya lame..Peeps dont gotta eat letters to know they cant stomache "u"
Kid... You
Could shovel ya crap on traffic and still not get his shit on the move.
^^Nice
He got something to prove..That the DyMoNiK CAN come "Weak As Hell"
When his beef is faked outta improvement and Grade C like Taco Bell.
^^Good
Bitch just smells..Dig in purgatory before ya verse makes a big heep
Cuz its like this kids a crazy ass vet the way he puts dawgs to sleep.
^^A lil played but still better then your opponant
Ready to fuck this peep...You failed to attack me properly, aight man?
Cuz you just breaking the propellers..WHEN YOUR SHIT HITS THE FAN.
^^A lil played as well............
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Well this wasnt a very good battle.........SinAmen Came with some played lines but at least he had punches and good structure..........Dymonik came weak in every aspect...........work on punches and metaphores to help improve your battle skills............-ONE-
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VOTE: SinAmen
^ Lmao Eminem is twitching like a "ahdonthurtme" kinda look in that picture stat....
ok this stuff was close to call....but imma have to say sinamen because he came a lil better and liked his shit more sorry other guy
v/ SINAMEN
hit my battles guys!!!!!!!!!!!! thanks!!!!! pz keep it up!!!
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I vote sinAmen just because hispuches were way harder than Dymoniks
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gundown any rapper,so
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all u bitches
LEAVE LINKS PEOPLE! ^ thanks that was a keystyle though I shouldnt get props.
Leave links and I'll get ya back.
V./ Sinamen
Your punches were grabbing my attention the whole verse. Dymoniks was alright, but his punches were plain weak...
Dymonik - Nice verse and some alright name play in first line. punches wernt great but they were alright. Nice multis, poor structure and poor flow
Sinamen - Nice verse, punches hit, alright structure n flow, not many multis. But you used punches and personals that hit
v/sinamen
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