life

[element]

everybody questions wut the fuk is a life? wuts the point when havin a knife...is illegal...n who da fuk is bennie seagle? we have money n clothes..thats wut we got...lifes str8 bcuz of da glock...niggaz buy rocks...my cuzzin stay wit the eight ball..life sux..fuk all yall...i got 2 things goin for me....thats life n baseball...once again u kno that life sux...i'd rather b the soda in ya cup...n wut the fuk..niggaz suk..fight me n get fuked up...im not the type to play around wit..u'll also see ya face flat on da ground n ya nose sayin drip drip...i spit quick..niggaz battle n then i got they whole heart inna rattle...like a conoe paddle...im the element niggaz kno who i b...me n my boys run the streets of ct!

[element]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=172103

[element]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=172227

[Red_]

yo homie,again straight drop but this time it seemed like you forced this one,work on your structure homie,VETS will give you even better advice then me if they see that you at least have the structure down,again i like the multies in there,too short and basic tho

keep elevating dawg

[warchild]

This piece was ok i thought it was gonna be a deep verse it started off ok then it went in2 the thug shit.
The structure was ok but the vocab and flow needs work.
I thought you could of made the verse longer and gone deeper in2 wat life means 2 u.

Hit this up.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=172018