Check in's are due by Wednesday.
agree on a line limit.. 10-20. G'luck you 3.
Verses are due by Friday 11:59 PM eastern.
Vote on 3 battles and leave links. I'm checking.
Only LLL competitors may vote.
[only those with a battle this week]
Check in's are due by Wednesday.
agree on a line limit.. 10-20. G'luck you 3.
Verses are due by Friday 11:59 PM eastern.
Vote on 3 battles and leave links. I'm checking.
Only LLL competitors may vote.
[only those with a battle this week]
Last edited by Young Philly; March 6th, 2005 at 09:29 PM
mind if i sub?
.Dohpe.
.Been There-Sonned Cats.
sounds good lets go 12 lines..
Bribeone
Artificial Intelligence
Is Deon in or not?
Ok replica, young P.
I’m here round the groupies, and P your on that boat
Since I heard you were eager awaiting for my cumback! in your throat.
Yes you speak for most, and those end up in a ditch
Not even the Wayans see a sequel… for this stupid white bitch.
Kid I believe you, as your big ego just passes
Saw you girl and understood, how you would appeal to the masses
Faggots represent their hood, when put to the test
I can see you rep philly for finishing second to best.
My puns still witty, and the jokes will still snap back
I wonder if by now the P caught drift that hes not black.
This is an easy win, his blood and life I spilled him
Now im known for exposing more pussy than the bitch Paris Hilton
Bribeone
Artificial Intelligence
Lol.
Still spittin those corny rhymes Bribe, but why the act son
Larger than life? Yea, cuz life's a bitch...and you're a fat one
Feebles the man, that's the truth, & I'd say you rap fair
You're the man behind the man, but idk what ur doing back there
I'm a true diamond son, so trust that I wouldn't pawn you dude
But I shook the rust off this week...looks like it fell right onto you
I never had a problem with you, so I ain't clowning B
The truth is, you're even worse than I make u out to be
Gone for a while, sure, and now this whore ain't admired
But half those punches were played a year before he retired
And with that wack shit I'd say u'd get fucking wrecked kid
But it'll be pretty hard to polish u off with all the rust u've collected
Last edited by Young Philly; March 4th, 2005 at 11:51 PM
Yes you speak for most, and those end up in a ditch
Not even the Wayans see a sequel… for this stupid white bitch.
Kid I believe you, as your big ego just passes
Saw you girl and understood, how you would appeal to the masses
vs.
Still spittin those corny rhymes Bribe, but why the act son
Larger than life? Yea, cuz life's a bitch...and you're a fat one
Feebles the man, that's the truth, & I'd say you rap fair
You're the man behind the man, but idk what ur doing back there
I'm a true diamond son, so trust that I wouldn't pawn you dude
But I shook the rust off this week...looks like it fell right onto you
Cool battle, I hope you two stay in the league..
Anyway, although Rep came with more quotables, the last half really hurt you dude. There wasn't any wit in your 4th and 5th bars.. well, very little I should say.. then in your last bar you used another Rust punch, which I wouldn't have done.. If you had stayed consistent you woulda took this battle.
Bribe didn't have as many quotables or lines that were good.. but he was more consistent in the rest of his verse.. in my opinion, only had two blah lines.. but yeah, this was a close battle still.. just seemed like Rep didn't try too hard in the rest of his verse..
v/ BribeOne
Last edited by Lay Doubt.; March 5th, 2005 at 12:05 AM
Been a real one.
*Edited with Bribe's permission.
Last edited by Young Philly; March 4th, 2005 at 11:51 PM
yeah, bribes a bit rusty. some played stuff, needs a little more freshness next week. P came better. sorry for the shitty breakdown but im wayy too tired guys
v / P
stay with it bribe, you've been gone awhile. youll be one of the best again if you stick with it for a while.
Yes you speak for most, and those end up in a ditch
Not even the Wayans see a sequel… for this stupid white bitch.
My puns still witty, and the jokes will still snap back
I wonder if by now the P caught drift that hes not black.
vs
Still spittin those corny rhymes Bribe, but why the act son
Larger than life? Yea, cuz life's a bitch...and you're a fat one
Feebles the man, that's the truth, & I'd say you rap fair
You're the man behind the man, but idk what ur doing back there
I'm a true diamond son, so trust that I wouldn't pawn you dude
But I shook the rust off this week...looks like it fell right onto you
V/rep
Artificial Intelligence
Yes you speak for most, and those end up in a ditch
Not even the Wayans see a sequel… for this stupid white bitch.
Faggots represent their hood, when put to the test
I can see you rep philly for finishing second to best.
vs
Still spittin those corny rhymes Bribe, but why the act son
Larger than life? Yea, cuz life's a bitch...and you're a fat one
Feebles the man, that's the truth, & I'd say you rap fair
You're the man behind the man, but idk what ur doing back there
I'm a true diamond son, so trust that I wouldn't pawn you dude
But I shook the rust off this week...looks like it fell right onto you
v/P
dope shit P, Bribe... not too bad actually, you on ya way back.
Yes you speak for most, and those end up in a ditch
Not even the Wayans see a sequel… for this stupid white bitch.
Vs
Still spittin those corny rhymes Bribe, but why the act son
Larger than life? Yea, cuz life's a bitch...and you're a fat one
Feebles the man, that's the truth, & I'd say you rap fair
You're the man behind the man, but idk what ur doing back there
V/Rep.
Good Battle.
aside from the cumline.. bribe one came with a pretty good verse.. and then replica killed it.. more quotables, harder quotables, and more consistant, the wayans line and the hilton line were kool from bribe.. fat one, onto you, back there from rep, vote=replica
Good Luck. You're Gonna Need It.
i wish feebie woulda let me sub
.Dohpe.
.Been There-Sonned Cats.
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