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Thread: Smoka The Joke (another one bites the dust)

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    Smoka The Joke (another one bites the dust)

    no matter who’s lines you use, you still suck, for real love
    we know how you do… so I’m feedin you death with steel gloves
    body bag sealed up, I could kill you with my worst line
    fuck the fakin death shit, I’ma make you real for the first time
    n’ s’obvious from ya battles, it’s time to retire bitch
    only match worth mentionin’s the one I lit you on fire with
    liar with no talent, attention whore n’ biter to boot
    main reason I got Mexican blood on both sides, of my shoes
    s’what I decided to do, put it in perspective, listen here
    your only legacy’s a crew that disowned you, then disappeared
    s’pretty clear, a dog’s loyalty, could teach you a thing or two
    I used to think of you as a friend, now I don’t even think of you
    It’s true, my punchline’s iller, I even hurt ya feelin’s with filler
    and IT was the only fake clown that was really a killer
    grill or chest, pick a spot, swift I’m drop kick servin
    bitch you can’t flip concepts, usin the same exact verbage
    what’s the purpose of ya stunts, need someone to hold, you lonely?
    had you blocked on AIM for months, n’ didn’t know ‘til you told me
    die slowly… only thing you’re good for is laughs n’ jokes
    it’s like weedfest in this bitch, everybody passin smoke
    have a stroke… have a couple, fuck I’ma watch you buckle
    sick bitch, every time I’ma dick I hear your stomach rumble
    what’s the trouble with ya life, why you gotta act fake
    n’ someone pass that shit to smoka, faggot’s still half baked
    last taste, now let it go, you been hoggin dick whore
    I don’t need you’re favors homo, s’what I got ya bitch for
    Fifth floor, open window, me n’ you gon hold a meeting
    Kinda shit you wake up screaming from, when your only dreaming
    Scheming _____, get _____, joke’s swallowin nut
    You can fill in the blanks, I’ll load up with the hollows n’ bust…


    *waits for response*

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    i like your rhyme scheme, decent multis too

    i don't know who it is your dissin or the reason you are... so some of the personals i don't get

    fav lines:
    die slowly… only thing you’re good for is laughs n’ jokes
    it’s like weedfest in this bitch, everybody passin smoke

    It’s true, my punchline’s iller, I even hurt ya feelin’s with filler
    and IT was the only fake clown that was really a killer

    liar with no talent, attention whore n’ biter to boot
    main reason I got Mexican blood on both sides, of my shoes <--- hahaha

    couple lines were stretched but other than that good structure

    overall nice verse

    8/10

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    That was a cool diss. I thought that it had a lot of hard personals and the multies were nice. Overall good diss.

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    Great Diss homie i like the rhyme's you killed whoever you were dissing

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    This was tight...

    I like your flow. You had some funny as lines in here too. Good shit.
    You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
    I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm

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    it was aight...nice play on words and vocab and stuff...flow was aight, just was a little hard to read...try putting bars or seperating the lines or something to make it easier reading....

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    damn, $pit be droppin the fire in this one. this was a nice drop.. almost half of your verse is quotable.. but here are my favorite lines.


    body bag sealed up, I could kill you with my worst line
    fuck the fakin death shit, I’ma make you real for the first time
    n’ s’obvious from ya battles, it’s time to retire bitch
    only match worth mentionin’s the one I lit you on fire with
    s’pretty clear, a dog’s loyalty, could teach you a thing or two
    I used to think of you as a friend, now I don’t even think of you
    what’s the purpose of ya stunts, need someone to hold, you lonely?
    had you blocked on AIM for months, n’ didn’t know ‘til you told me
    have a stroke… have a couple, fuck I’ma watch you buckle
    sick bitch, every time I’ma dick I hear your stomach rumble
    last taste, now let it go, you been hoggin dick whore
    I don’t need you’re favors homo, s’what I got ya bitch for


    real nice punches.. came at him mean and on a personal level... good flow, good wording.. just a really solid drop.. and it's funny cuz Smoka couldn't top this drop in a week.. good shit $pit.
    Been a real one.

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    n’ s’obvious from ya battles, it’s time to retire bitch
    only match worth mentionin’s the one I lit you on fire with
    liar with no talent, attention whore n’ biter to boot
    main reason I got Mexican blood on both sides, of my shoes
    s’what I decided to do, put it in perspective, listen here
    your only legacy’s a crew that disowned you, then disappeared
    s’pretty clear, a dog’s loyalty, could teach you a thing or two
    I used to think of you as a friend, now I don’t even think of you
    It’s true, my punchline’s iller, I even hurt ya feelin’s with filler
    and IT was the only fake clown that was really a killer


    nice verse, solid through out, some nice hitters some good ideas.. as a diss is where it really shined tho it did its part far as hurtin feelings and being direct with it.. good diss peep this out

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    Im so sick of these OM Disses.

    There has to been at least 15 easily done in the past 6 weeks.
    Its annoying the fuck out of me.
    Always Impervious an Axis Power.


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    well now I guess you're next big mouth.

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    ^^ lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by $pitacular
    well now I guess you're next big mouth.
    Spit.

    Please. Dont even go there.

    Thats all i have to say. Dont go there.
    For the sake of us use to being cool.

    You really, really, dont want to do that.
    Always Impervious an Axis Power.


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    hott shit....Keep it comin kid...Wanna see more from you, check out my open mic in my sig and leave feedback .....Props

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