Tim Corleone vs Deviate

[Tim]

Due 20 min after both checkin
Blind spit
10 lines max
no biting / feeding or auto dq

[Tim]

checkin

[Deviate]

Check... Good luck...

Peace

[Deviate]

Inseminated the gene pool with your propaganda,
That explains why everyone treats you like a father and master.
My rhymes will slice and dice you into thrice,
I'll leave you fucked up like the three blind mice.
Take this to "The Next Level" with your crew in disarray,
One step ahead I dishevel your rhymes with revel - so walk this way.
Named yourself after the "ultimate" gangster,
Man... He's like you more than you think... He's an actor.
You're a plague like wars are to the hague,
Snake, in the wake of your rhyme stake - You vague.

Oh dear that was shocking...

Peace

[Tim]

You're not recieving a win, watch me defeat this text herb
Lets call this bitch maxi one more loss padded to his record
Soon to be a washed up battler and what is even worse is
I see nothing in his avatar just like all of his topical verses
All your shits weak dude , I mean can you be any more softer
And You model wack so good you can be RBs Cindy crawford
Deviate is still a light weight and claims to be a mondo thug
But Like vactations im walking all over Deviate like a condo rug
Its over for you man cant you see that.. just get a fuckin clue
Got Deviate in a stickey situation you could say hes stuck in glue

[DaTrusHurtz]

Deviate - A little too poetic and not quite harsh enough. You lack the fire at your opponent that could simply be fixed by adding the word bitch, ass, herb, clown, or whatever words you wanna use. The actor line was really nice so good job there. The rest were really threats. Like you'll make him walk away... you'll leave him like three blind mice....nice ideas and all, but make punches that will make him do that, not just say you'll do that.

Tim - That avvy line was actually pretty funny. Very simple, but funny. You spelled Cindy wrong, try to avoid shit like that, but that was decent. The rest was aight, nothing too special. Decent verse, seen better, seen worse, but you had a few really good punches in the verse to take this one.

Vote - Tim

Please hit the link in the sig, thx

[Deviate]

Fair vote DaTrusHurtz... More votes please... Leave links...

BTW, Nice verse Tim.

Peace

[Tim]

word man you'll elevate
i fixed that spelling problem thanxs
uppin 1 leave links
and pm me your aim

[Tim]

uppin 2 leave your links

[Kontext]

Inseminated the gene pool with your propaganda,
That explains why everyone treats you like a father and master.

NAh not all that good

My rhymes will slice and dice you into thrice,
I'll leave you fucked up like the three blind mice.

Nope

Take this to "The Next Level" with your crew in disarray,
One step ahead I dishevel your rhymes with revel - so walk this way.

Nah

Named yourself after the "ultimate" gangster,
Man... He's like you more than you think... He's an actor.

aiight Personal


You're a plague like wars are to the hague,
Snake, in the wake of your rhyme stake - You vague.

Decent closer


You're not recieving a win, watch me defeat this text herb
Lets call this bitch maxi one more loss padded to his record

Aiight witty


Soon to be a washed up battler and what is even worse is
I see nothing in his avatar just like all of his topical verses

Nice

All your shits weak dude , I mean can you be any more softer
And You model wack so good you can be RBs Cindy crawford

NOpe

Deviate is still a light weight and claims to be a mondo thug
But Like vactations im walking all over Deviate like a condo rug

Nah


Its over for you man cant you see that.. just get a fuckin clue
Got Deviate in a stickey situation you could say hes stuck in glue

Nope


But tim wins becuz deviate was more of a topical approach

[Kontext]

Link in sig...Thanx

[Deviate]

Up #2

I'm going away for a week but I'll be back... If this gets closed could you PM me the result Tim?

Peace

[Professor.]

Its over for you man cant you see that.. just get a fuckin clue
Got Deviate in a stickey situation you could say hes stuck in glue

I actually liked his line....Tim u can do a hell of a lotbetter than this I have seen it before....also the Cindy Crawford line......terrible.....what odes it all have to do with hm it was weak and no punch really....I am not one to tell you what to work on but this is just whatI saw....and other guy needs to elevate he has potential but as of now Tim can still merk you....and me for that matter lol....

Therefore my vote goes to......Tim....good battle guys....rtf both of you in my battle vs. x.ilence or kontext or jersey in my sig u can choose which one you would like thanx pz!!!!!!!!

[Tim]

uppin 3

do you have anymore links those battles are closed

[REality]

didnt really see anything quotable in deviates verse at all. mostly it read like a open mic verse.. there werent any punchlines in it.. really the only line that was even a semi ok diss was the actor line and that itself wasnt that hard..

tim corleons verse i felt wasnt that hard either but he had some good personals such as the topical verses line.. I felt like some of his similies werent that good.. the condo rug line didnt hit that hard.. but all in all he had the better lines in this battle his punchlines shined more than deviates lines did and he had better personals that were direct to his opponent

therefore my vote goes to TIM CORLEONE