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-Broken Swordz-
*EpiC*
house rules
10 lines
due tonight
g'd luck
Ayo Broken..im levvin swords stabbed in u at the end of this verse/
Seein me take this battle slowly...i know it must hurt/
Wat r u a snowball,the way u keep rollin up losses/
Is Ganggreen a charity,cuz they keep acceptin these loss causes/
Man ill flip the script on u an u wont understand shyt*/
My verse explains my skills,i dont gotta explain how im so sick/
Jus readin ur verse i can tell ur a bitch/
U couldnt pull in a girl,if u had some1 like the guy on Hitch**/
This is the end of my lyrical rampage on ur whole RB career/
Now u realize i am the one u must fear/
*his sig says You gotta Flip the Script, and not explain shyt!!.. -X-
**the guys mentors ppl on how to get girls
also Ganggreen is his crew
He wanted me to tell you that he's gonna drop 2mrw..
iight thats cool...
ite ill drop in a few
i'll flame u wit raps, cuz im not the 1st to say that ur bad!!
Ill leave this kid 'holding his chest', like fuckin 'J in his Av'!!.
I’m dissing you're weak raps, ya fag style n ya queer hooks
Cuz u'll 'never be signed' like some 'retarded kids yearbooks'
U must of been injected wit a vaccine cuz u'll never be sick
my hooks leave 'stars around ya dome' like da dude n ya sig
Son within a week ive become a legend, i got the top notch
So ill stick a 'big foot' up ya ass, till you shittin a Sasquatch!
And like 'gay cannibal's' ill be quick to eat and 'chew this fag'
Becuase i fucking 'raise nightmares' like freddie crougers dad
ya fucking trash I’m Rippin ya Top Notch
I stick a big foot up ya ass till ya shitting a Sasquatch!
my bad on making dat post so long, i was keying dat and forgot to erase dat line at the bottom
uppin
i'll flame u wit raps, cuz im not the 1st to say that ur bad!!
Ill leave this kid 'holding his chest', like fuckin 'J in his Av'!!.
I’m dissing you're weak raps, ya fag style n ya queer hooks
Cuz u'll 'never be signed' like some 'retarded kids yearbooks'
U must of been injected wit a vaccine cuz u'll never be sick
my hooks leave 'stars around ya dome' like da dude n ya sig
Son within a week ive become a legend, i got the top notch
So ill stick a 'big foot' up ya ass, till you shittin a Sasquatch!
And like 'gay cannibal's' ill be quick to eat and 'chew this fag'
Becuase i fucking 'raise nightmares' like freddie crougers dad
ya fucking trash I’m Rippin ya Top Notch
I stick a big foot up ya ass till ya shitting a Sasquatch!
Ight, not bad at all, i liked it and ur stlye is unique. Ur flow was tite and u truly show taht ur a light weight. In my opinion u merked dat newb.
Ayo Broken..im levvin swords stabbed in u at the end of this verse/
Seein me take this battle slowly...i know it must hurt/
Wat r u a snowball,the way u keep rollin up losses/
Is Ganggreen a charity,cuz they keep acceptin these loss causes/
Man ill flip the script on u an u wont understand shyt*/
My verse explains my skills,i dont gotta explain how im so sick/
Jus readin ur verse i can tell ur a bitch/
U couldnt pull in a girl,if u had some1 like the guy on Hitch**/
This is the end of my lyrical rampage on ur whole RB career/
Now u realize i am the one u must fear/
Not tha best, but not bad for a newb, id work on structure and flow. U just kinda say shit, no, u ogtta b real wit ur raps, or else their just shyte.
my v/ Broken Swordz
RTF PLEASE MAN RTF on my battle in tha sig dawg PLZ!!!!!!
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uppin
iight...uppin this
for real UPPPPINNN.
I cant vote but if I could I would vote 4 EPIC because of the rhyme wit Jus readin ur verse i can tell ur a bitch/
U couldnt pull in a girl,if u had some1 like the guy on Hitch**/ dats da joint rite therr and Broken swords ya rhyme got 2 much of the same thing dawg ur just reclycline yaw rhymes over and over
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Originally Posted by REDMAN420
ok... Son ur gay...uppin
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