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    Topical Life For Hypothetical Realities

    i was 13 when i was told not to live my life
    so i lived it to the fullest...young and foolish.
    as i journey through the stupid .....
    narcoleptic martyrs who were raised on the same bullshit.
    ..................i know what i know.....
    shit ill never praise a philosophical phrase
    or direction.years transfer to days
    a thousand years and no answer to the question.
    as for me...im well versed in the cycles of the universe
    so each day everything that has will be so i rehearse
    for the day my clock .....stops..........giving
    ill be known when i die but id rather while i was living.
    im only me now take me as i am
    been here 25 years so there's no changing this man.
    i'll just take the "n" replace it with the "m"
    ying and yang back to who i am from a.m. to p.m.
    and back again.
    i walk with the same face..in any named place
    so if im a famed case its for where the soul stands
    and evry dna strand clothes me leaving feeling liberated
    cause nothing that drapes me labels me fabricated.
    how do i wake the sedated? aid them
    but not have them medicated....
    sleeping giants take help as an excuse to be tyrants.
    in the end ................
    my enemies become friends and pledge the wrong alliance
    but thats how life goes...no...if i fallowed the way things flow
    by the time i reach the fork in the road id be to old.
    now what ive learned shouldnt be a concearn
    so those listening with no soul just leave theories confirmed.
    ther world is a soap opera with minute by minute asshole
    in the end im playing my role in this episode.
    what i got now is an autobiography written in 3rd person
    but im the 1st i just dont which is my version.
    i been a mand child and virgin...funny isnt it?
    bad things come in 3 which explains my conversion.
    ill speak to my gaurdian angel which odly resembles a nymph
    still i ask about god and was told mine was a myth.
    i still havent found what i seak in this labrynth mess and mayhem
    and to make woarse i havent found a reason to give an amen.
    i figure ill sneeze if i want to be blessed
    buy an iron if i want to be pressed..
    with the day to day routine spring clean cause my 365 is a mess.
    who am i? the guy who walks through the valley of death
    with no hope"tell life goes on" and get called a prick beneath they breath.
    i have nothing to eat ............
    so i dijest what i injest and drink the swet i sacrete
    how about deceit and defeat?now that ive tried it
    i want more but its time for me to diet
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    uppin this damn i know somone read it
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    last time upping this
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    That's excactly why I stopped postin in this son of a bitch azz forum. Niggas wanna sleep on ya shit. I ain't gonna go into detail, I kno this shit was good and you kno it was good too. You posted some real shit, fam. That's livin is at times. Keep doin you.

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    lol thats funny i got the exact same treatment,..in comparison to u, im about 3/7 ups away from feeling the exact way lol
    anyways i was digging the feel u had here...
    shit ill never praise a philosophical phrase
    or direction.years transfer to days
    a thousand years and no answer to the question.
    as for me...im well versed in the cycles of the universe
    so each day everything that has will be so i rehearse
    for the day my clock .....stops..........giving
    ill be known when i die but id rather while i was living.
    these bars here i found to be speakin much truth...liked that about this drop. lots of real output homes, thats whats missin in alot of hip hop these days...reality..
    n e ways creative criutism think u should just ellaborate a bit more on your subjects,
    it was real great man, but on alot of lines i was lookin fo more info on what u was talkin about to get the true scope of it all...otherwise a dope drop...
    hey do me a favor...Peep my work..
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    very deep man nice flow and every thin so keep up tha good work and just work a little more on ur rhymes just a little ok and ur overall verse rate - 9.0/10

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    Quote Originally Posted by .On-UrB.
    lol thats funny i got the exact same treatment,..in comparison to u, im about 3/7 ups away from feeling the exact way lol
    anyways i was digging the feel u had here...


    these bars here i found to be speakin much truth...liked that about this drop. lots of real output homes, thats whats missin in alot of hip hop these days...reality..
    n e ways creative criutism think u should just ellaborate a bit more on your subjects,
    it was real great man, but on alot of lines i was lookin fo more info on what u was talkin about to get the true scope of it all...otherwise a dope drop...
    hey do me a favor...Peep my work..
    Lowerd contemplations"
    wunn thanks

    thank you and i will build more but the whole purpose was to kind of contradict real situations thats why i didnt elaborate alot
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    This was pretty cool, at parts, your rhyme scheme was a little basic for my taste, but I still thought that it was an interesting, more abstract piece. The direction was kinda hard to follow, seemed kinda like it was a little jumbly (<---is that a word?!?!), but the read was still a good, interesting one.

    Nice drop.
    You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
    I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm

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    listening to aesop rock does that lol
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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