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No Crew/Hate Votes
No Dickriding
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Verses due Sunday, 12 est.
Blind spits..
Gametite
Daedal
10-16 Lines
No Biting
No Crew/Hate Votes
No Dickriding
Results count on RV.
Nobody from RV can vote.
Verses due Sunday, 12 est.
Blind spits..
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You pmed me telling me to set this shit up. You better show up asshole.
But yo, I have to get off now, and I wont be able to post until 1 am eastern time, so, just spend that extra hour to put together a better verse or something.
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First question how you repping Brook on Rb, and on Rv claiming Phoenix
See if I don't expose your fake ass, next week you'll be repping Venus
We can keep that shit between us, but is Mimesis or is it Daedal
Next time you try to buy your lyrics on Ebay,..........................
Remember they only accept credit cards or Paypal
I guess that's why you'll stay foul, so I'll keep this punch inside the lines
Kid you wouldn't blow up, if your mom packed your lunch with land mines
Thinking you could ever shine, I wouldn't even let you stack my chips
If Mimesis or Daedal don't work out,.....................................
You can change your name to Solar Eclipse
Hopefully you can read lips, cuz you get discarded like soiled linen
See a power outage and carpel tunnel, that's your only chance of winning
See your sig has got me grinning, you should've known I was a Gamer
I'd hide behind a mask to if I was a "MEANER WEANER HALL OF FAMER"
Aight I don't usually explain punches but since he wanted to move this to rb i gotta explain a couple things. Daedal is also Mimesis on RV. And yes he claims he's from Phonix on Rv, but from Brooklyn on RB. Rest is pretty self explanatory. Don't get the punches don't vote. oh yeah and mimesis don't get all of your little buddies to vote for you....
Take it? Hell nah, my punches blanket your raps, buts what worse..
You STILL consider stretched lines and random statements a verse
Im makin a curse with these personals kid.. You just aint sick dude
The difference is..
We both have adam's apple.. but you're the one with his dick too
Im sick fool.. it's obvious i be comin in, runnin shit, just sonnin spits
Cause this fools taking mandates.. WITHOUT the fuckin government
You aint touchin shit.. My punches smash urs into the ceiling mayne
Cause,
This site may not be homophobic.. but nobody here is feeling Gae
Reeling fame?.. Nah, I thought youd no show, knowin id smash you
But,
At least you put down ur verse.. so now the voters wont have too
Hand you the loss.. The peeps came to see me, my shit, how i rock it
You did drop my name in ur verse.. in the midst of my older concepts
Watch it.. Callin me out on RV? Shit.. like you didnt know id rock ya kid
But I wont explain punches..
..I just want an explanation why he thought he could he win
Rofl. Buying rhymes from ebay? Power outages? Land mines?
This aint 2003 anymore fagboy..
Ha ha ha.. You aint on my level bitch.
Nobody from RV can vote on this.. Uppin for votes..
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uppin this, lmao at you feeding off my verse, nice structure, lol
battle was aight i cant vote so i dont give the win to anybody it was preety even to me
How are you laughing at my structure? If you didnt post yours in that small ass font it'd go down into another line.Originally Posted by Gametite
You.. gay face.
Uppin #1.
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Take it? Hell nah, my punches blanket your raps, buts what worse..
You STILL consider stretched lines and random statements a verse
and
Reeling fame?.. Nah, I thought youd no show, knowin id smash you
But,
At least you put down ur verse.. so now the voters wont have too
vs.
sloppy shit
i can't vote but i think dae murked this kid...other guy's verse was aight...and the personals landed, but they were weak...anyway...nice battle.
Yeah..
gametite, your whole verse was basically ass. I aint tryin to be mean, but you used some of the oldest concepts ever. Like, the 'blow up' one, and the power outage shit.. they're older than fuckin this site. Your attempted personals were really weak too.. the punch on his sig? wtf.. it doesnt work out when you try to make a joke on something that they dont take serious themselves. I really wasnt feeling anything in your verse bro. sorry.
Daedel, you didnt really have to try with this guy.. but nonetheless, you overwhelmed him with creative wordplay, punches, and personals. the standout lines were adams apple - corny humor .. and the put down punch. others were aight, but nothing quotable.
overall - daedel killed it, basically.
v/ Daedel
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=173835
thanks.
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Neither verse was that bad, but I felt Daedal came stronger. Not long till I can vote, yeah. hehe, hit up the battles in my sig with honest votes, I'll return when I have enough posts.
Game - Compared to a lot of the shit on front lines, your verse wasn't that bad, but as others said, it was extremely played. You came personal with the other names from Rap Verse, but didn't do that great of a job incorporating punches into them. I for some reason liked the opener, but really that was about it. Just come with fresher concepts and you'll be fine.
Daedal - Very nice verse, you came pretty hard. I especially liked that adam's apple line. I laughed out loud at that one. The rest of your verse was just solid concepts that were for the most part fresh and hard hitting. Really not much else has to be said, you rocked this kid with the fire you brought.
Vote - Daedal
It's obvious that you have alot of d/r on this site. but whatever uppin....
Rofl. How?
Because this site gets punches?
I told you'd never beat me on another site except possibly on RV takes statements and multis over punches.
Don't be mad because you're getting beat..
Fag.
Up #2.
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Why is it certain people start claiming dick ridin for the opponent as soon as they start losing? Why can't they accept that maybe their verse wasn't as hard-hitting? You better not be callin me a d/r, I don't even know anyone on here, how can I be d/r-in? Just accept the feedback, if I thought your verse was better, I'd have said you won, it's that simple.
Thats were your wrong, Thise site doesnt know nothing about punches. I'll drop a vote in this in a few, And stop with all the D/r shit, Just vote on who actually won.
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