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Kalikoze911
yo boy D
yo boy D vs. Kalikoze911
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I'm the school bully, you're the gimp. You can't hide your faggoty ass.
How can you say my punches won't meet ya, when they're in your anatomy, Class?
My gats'll fuck with ya breathing, I'll count one two three dude.
Then I'll take blood away from your lungs quicker, than ya pulmonaries do.
We both want the win, But I'll cut your hoping short.
You're not in the running champ, coz I'ma break both of yours.
Get that 'champ' idea outyahead, coz I got gunplay to stop that notion.
Sure, I'll give you a shot at the top, right after putting one in your colon.
I'll bring out the heavy artillery. Launch missiles at this joker.
And have mortar in his body, than a six pack a day smoker.
I'll smash all the craniums, of everyone in ya bitch crew,
When I take this bar and club Tight.....starting with you.
Happy you got skill man? You won't be laughing long 'Sick when,
I rip your fucking throat out, and beat you to death with the tonsil end.
Busta is not smiling in his pic. There's something I wanna ask.
Tell me: what made ya grin go........parent's not drown your ugly ass?
And you're chubby too. I bet you were a fat toddler B.
So fat you turned the caesarian birth, into a fuckin' autopsy.
Ship this bitch to the morgue, coz I'm finished with killin' ya.
Now let's see which of your dickriders, is into necrophilia.
Place Bets-Dat I Raise, (Yo boy D -('chest')- With A Simple ~Phrase'd Text
U Ass Like Gay Sex, 'Spitting Real' Peep Close And Get Ya ~Face Wet
Im More 'Inspected'- Than 'Veteran War Detectives'- My Close Erection
Leave Ya Inside Hospital Hall's 'Injected'- Like A Come ~Across Infection
Shut Ya Mouth, Fukkn Slut-Ya Disclosed Luck-Run'n More Than A Nose Does
Of Course Cuz- I 'Toss' Cuts- Mo Than A Chef N Kitchens With ~Door's Shut
My Clips Tucked- There Been A Bit Rust- But It Cums Handy- To ~Fist Fuck
Bust Ur Lips Up- Enjoy Fuckin You Up- Like Gettin My ~Dick Sucked
Cats Swallow Spines- Like 'Grape Fruits' Stepped On-They ~Holla Whine
Put A LINE.. In Yo Boy D 's Midsection' Leave'em Lookin Like A ~Dolla Sign
Ma Vocals Compact-An-Thin- Contract-To-Win- Wheneva I Rapped-With/In
Yo boy D's Getting (Apotheosis) "Tatto'z" As He Crossed My Impact With Ink
Like Omen-shows, I predict Yo Boy D's 'Death Like 50 Bowman-foe's,
Travel Rapidly Over Open Roman-Road's Not Only Soldiers, But Chosen-Pro's
..Under Arms Like Odered-Clothes ..:~Eat Me? It's" Over-Though ...
As I Conquer, Yo Boy D--' Like Einstein's SUPER-- Nova Codes.
Yo Boy D Wont live this- I 'Break' Your 'Bars' Shit I Fight With.. Sticks Bitch
Leave Ya 'back' 'Cordless' Like The Mic.. You ~Spit With
Wit A ~Slit Wrist~ Ur Insane Son- I Tourture Rappers Till They ~Pain Numb
Put Yo Boy D''ss-'head' Back In His 'Mother'.. Send'm Where He ~Came From .......
lmfao............................VOTES PLZ
good job mayne and good luck now we need some vote and feedback uppin
i dont think kali came his hardest but ill give him the vote for better structure and also he had ok punchlines........he also had a nice flow
yo boy d...u did ok but u had alot of self-glory talkin about ur gunplay keep practicin though its all good
v/kali
ya boy d.....hes verse was ok but why talk about gun play on an text battle dat dont make sense and u kept giving yourself glory who were u dissing or were u dissing i mean were u battling?
Kali.........i like tha way ya verse was put togethere and tha way u spit is tight u had some ok punchlines but 4 tha most part they got to tha point.
vote/kali
oh damn my vote goes to kali...........................V/kali
return tha favor knats vs simiple simon much thanx.
no disrespect yo boy d but this was a tough one but my vote goes to kali with the bette punches now if i voted for him it gotta be dope
THEY GONE HATE ME NOW
hit this shit up
AYO Pusha C, the Animosity between us, ReaLLy appreciate the feedback homie....... even tho you could have broke it down better........LOLOriginally Posted by Pusha C
good lookn tho homie
UPP'N
uppin man we need some votes
nothing
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Bust Ur Lips Up- Enjoy Fuckin You Up- Like Gettin My ~Dick Sucked
Cats Swallow Spines- Like 'Grape Fruits' Stepped On-They ~Holla Whine
v/Kali. Yo Boy D's drop was mostly self-glory, until the end when he ran out of ideas and went after his mom. He attempted a punch on Kali's avy, but it didn't have any strength. I wasn't feeling the set-ups for Kali's verse, but with better punches, and more creativity, he takes this. Yo Boy D, you had some alright ideas for wordplay, but you gotta direct it at your opponent more, instead of back to yourself.
Please return the vote.
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