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topic-homelessness
20-30+
blind
topic-homelessness
checked, 48 hrs to drop after both checkins.......
checkity check imma do dis right afta my battle wit seth aight
A Working Man's Sharade
I see my reflection in friends, a pen scratches a checklist,
Touque and torn mittens, check, panhandling a deathwish,
Check. People toss biscuits, which I always take for granted
I never meant to be helpless, it just sort of...happened.
To sum it up in a sentence, would be beyond comprehension
Relieving some of the tension, I would leave an impression...
Wifey's not stressed about pension, now I've got the scratch
If a picture says 1000 words, how long will this sharade last?
The first half of my day, I preach lies and false exclamations
My wife thinks I've been promoted, working for our nation
But I steal with patience, tax scandals were never an option
With media watchin', you can't scam a convict at a police auction
So I turned to street talkin, for overtime pay from the oblivious
Escapin from from politics, usin my makeup kit to be inconspicious
Monday's I act hungry "Im starving, please, help out the needy..",
What I mean to say is "I need a big screen t-v, come on, im greedy!"
Stealin tax-payers money, now even the green of the homeless
With all the foodstamps I make, I can even get free lunches!
Following my hunches, I keep away from the actual unfortunate
Seen body's bend to pre-portion rations like they contortionists
Really I need to be aborting this, people are dying cause of me
Probably falling to their knees but I can't live without paws in green
So every day, a new scene, I wear a new wig, a new demonstration
I act homless with patience, saving up for my dream vacations
But everytime I hear the phrases: "Empty your pockets or die bitch"
I think it's just another example of how politics lie to get rich...
DAMN!, That Shit Is Fire Dawg, Nice As Hell.......
hawt...Originally Posted by Awh.Chew
spit fireeeee...
[[Casper Aka Yourz Truly™]]
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this is two parts iight a first person view and a story line of the struggles iight i hope u all like it
Polished imitators claim they know about poverty,
but imitators dont know whut its like to be me
strugglin on the streets jus tryin to succeed
no money in my pocket and food is all i need
no one is there to help me, noone even cares
as i beg for money the only thing i get is stares
noone wants to help me, all they do is judge
cant take that one step forward, all i need is a nudge
....story...
i walk down the streets after jus awakenin for the day
i wonder around town knowin i have no place to stay
i hit up the local burger king, prayin on my knees
that i got enough money for a whopper wit cheese
thirty two cents short, so now i'm feelin kinda down
so i walk out the door and continue my trip round town
Later
The light is slowly dimmin, as the sun begins to set
A thought accurs to me... i got no place to sleep yet
My friend had told me earlier of a shelter that i can stay
but the house is down on broadway, and that too far out the way
i hang my head in shame as i walk on down the street
all i need is a place to sleep and maybe somethin to eat
I see a abandoned house tucked away back in an alley
but it has a roof..to me it looks like a lucious green vally
i sneek in through a windown, but my stomach begins to growl
I look around the house for comfort but all i spot is a towel
i roll it up as a pillow and search for a place of comfort
i find a dusty mattres in the back of an abandoned room
a broken window in the corner. light floods in from the moon
i curl up in the bed and i slowly close my eyes
and i can think of is..... "i wish i would jus die"
Ahah shit.. both of these battles were hott.. im not gonna comment on every bar.. but I liked both topics.. they were il.. one bout a guy who pretends to be homeless.. another bout a man who cant get sometin to eat and find a place to sleep.. both very creative.. Hollywoudnt had a better use of vocabulary.. but Imma have to say that I liked DVSMIND's story better.. creative bout how hes short $$$ for a wopper.. But then again the greedy line in hollywoudnt's TOPICAL was Ill too.. I duno yo.. my gutt tells me that DVSMIND's verse was more realistic and heart felt and shit.. like he put feeling into this verse.. w/e yo.. mind made up.. HOT BATTLE.. Both lyrical genius's in this battle..
V/DVSMIND
B eZ
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this wuz wrote from personal experience dawg i used to be homeless so this topical really ment something to me
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good topical
will return votes honestly, drop link
DVS, I Dont Care If It Was From Personal Experience, It Wasnt Too Good. Your Imagery And Vocab Were Lacking Big Time. Holly, Great Piece, Imagery And Multies Were Great. Along With Vocab And Rhyme Scheme. Wonderful.
Vote- Holly.
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