IllestFreestyler vs. Irish

[IllestFreestyler]

10-15 lines
ill spit first
due in two days
blind spit
No recycling
No dickriding YOU GOT TO FULLY EXPLAIN BOTH SIDES VERSE.....IF NOT THEN DONT VOTE

[Irish]

check

[IllestFreestyler]

iiiiiiight blind spit so start makin yo verse

[Irish]

Last verse ever...im leaving rb

I come dope with much Frequency...your inconsistent, but worstly
Im not hearin your faint attempts...since white noise never Hertz me
Getting audio equipment at Wal-Mart........
..................................... /\heres the evidence if you doubt it
...but since you wont check \/

i am dirt broke ....please dont make fun of me about it

I have to use links to get personal...its hard to believe ya wrote the note
besides, your completely unknown...I had to even post a quote
He thinks hes got the text mastered...but he's blind n' misleaded
so what he don't know won't hurt em.......till the rest of us read it
Least you got your chin up...it makes the hits easier, and you will fall
Worthy? Im doin this for Elite son...I might as well be talkin to the wall

u loose

[IllestFreestyler]

Irish? You Beating Me Is Like Walt Disney Pictures Coming-True
So With That I'm Running-Through You, With A Semi And Gunning-You
Tummy-Blew, Ya To Fat To Rap This Dummy Better Get A Clue
You A Bummy-Fool, Before This Line's Was Spit I Was Stunning-You
You Think You Got The Money-Fool, Naw This Shit Aint Funny-Dude
I'll Split Your Tummy-Fool, So You Rotting Up Like Crummy-Food
I'm the hottest thing on this planet, that's why I see your honey-nude
Just don't even spit because the crowd is gonna loudly-booed
Sexy-Mood? naw if you verse resembles you then you most be an ugly-dude
Im shooting that AK while he shooting that water-gun, this shit aint a lotta-fun
You my slave I bought-ya-son, because I cooked and served ya, I got-ya-done

[IllestFreestyler]

uppin this ish ill rtf just leave tha link

[Blitzkrieger]

wow...not even close.

Irish wins because hes better

[thebballinlegend]

illest-nice multis really sick verse u won this by a lot
irish- were u even rhymin i didnt read any beside the end...but it was about the quote

vote= illest

[IllestFreestyler]

uppin this ill rtf just leave the link in here

[Dirty Prose]

Last verse ever...im leaving rb

I come dope with much Frequency...your inconsistent, but worstly
Im not hearin your faint attempts...since white noise never Hertz me
^nah...not feeling
Getting audio equipment at Wal-Mart........
..................................... /\heres the evidence if you doubt it
...but since you wont check \/

Quote:
Originally Posted by IllestFreestyler
i am dirt broke ....please dont make fun of me about it
^Bad use of a quote, no real punch
I have to use links to get personal...its hard to believe ya wrote the note
besides, your completely unknown...I had to even post a quote
^poor, dissed yourself in set up
He thinks hes got the text mastered...but he's blind n' misleaded
so what he don't know won't hurt em.......till the rest of us read it
^psssh, no
Least you got your chin up...it makes the hits easier, and you will fall
Worthy? Im doin this for Elite son...I might as well be talkin to the wall
No.

Your verse was lacking in in rythm, your a bit
to random in your approach. poor attempts at punch's
But an air of complexity about it.

Irish? You Beating Me Is Like Walt Disney Pictures Coming-True
So With That I'm Running-Through You, With A Semi And Gunning-You
^1st line okay, 2nd is dog shit
Tummy-Blew, Ya To Fat To Rap This Dummy Better Get A Clue
You A Bummy-Fool, Before This Line's Was Spit I Was Stunning-You
^no
You Think You Got The Money-Fool, Naw This Shit Aint Funny-Dude
I'll Split Your Tummy-Fool, So You Rotting Up Like Crummy-Food
^wack.
I'm the hottest thing on this planet, that's why I see your honey-nude
Just don't even spit because the crowd is gonna loudly-booed
^*Flush
Sexy-Mood? naw if you verse resembles you then you most be an ugly-dude
Im shooting that AK while he shooting that water-gun, this shit aint a lotta-fun
You my slave I bought-ya-son, because I cooked and served ya, I got-ya-done
^Sorry but no.

way too played and too simple.
Read some lll verse an shit

For being a lil more complex...

V- Irish

[KoKaiN]

irish = the quoting shit was wack, had me lost, ur verse was so-so atleast u came with punches... and tryed to come witty, ur structure and flow could use some work tho, overall okish verse, your last bar was the best, props for that

illest = you didnt come hard at all,alot of disses that were going no where, and some SG in there aswell, didnt have any punches that were direct or witty..
really no punches at all, elevate some, so read some LLL battles or something

vote: irish

word.

[liljayy921]

well this was close and ill had some better punches i liked hhow you came hard on your personal ya heard nice shit ya heard you got good flow and good struture keep it up ya heard

v/ill

[IllestFreestyler]

uppin this ish ill return the favor just drop the link

[Untold.]

Yea, Irish had this. It wasn't something I'd consider great though. Ill, you had decent flow. Work on it a lil more and elevate. I'm giving this to Irish for having more creativity and better flow. ~1~

[~Crucial_Times~]

aight. close battle.

Irish- nice flow and structure. was really feeling this verse. sum good personals in it. keep working on wordplay. that way it'll make the punches come more effective. but overall this was well done. try to work on multies. good job. (by the way nice sig)

illestfreestyler- good verse. good multies as well. good flow and structure. overall i was feeling this verse. u had punches..but since nun of them were personals. they did not hit as hard. try to do more personals and u'll dominate. keeep it up homie. u got potential.

v//irish for coming just a tad harder and having personals. very close.

RTF and check my battle in sig. pz.